Book name - Always Together 2

Author - Ahsana_

Reviewer- girly_blush

Title (Titre):

The title wasn't unique much. There are many stories on Wattpad with the same title. Though it wasn't catchy enough, it suited the storyline well.

Cover (couverture) :

The cover is the first thing that attracts a reader. Here, the cover was attractive. It held emotions. The fonts and graphics used were appealing. Good job!

Blurb (la description):

Blurb was good but not the best. There were some grammatical errors in it. It could have been more visionary. You could have made it unique. It just gave a subtle idea of the plot.

Plot/ Storyline (scènario):

The plot was extraordinary. It was so intriguing and thrilling simultaneously. You have begun something new. Good job!

Characters(personagges)

Characters were shown adequately. You managed to pen down, Khushi and her friends well. But I think, you lacked the portrayal of Arnav and Anjali. You could have added more scenes about them. Even Shyam was out of the league.

Grammar (grammaire):

This was the place where you lost it. You have misplaced the tenses. Even there were many punctuation errors. Always capitalize the names. Also, write the dialogues with double quotations ("). You should proofread your story before updating it. Now, simple editing would be enough. Flashbacks were written in Italic fonts, you should continue doing it. Flashback, dreams, etc can be written in bold or italics as it will help you to capture the reader's attention more.

Reviewer opinion ( critique)

You could have titled "ALWAYS TOGETHER (SEASON 2), that would have looked good. It was solely my suggestion, I won't force you for that. Try to make the blurb unique and intriguing. And you should too give importance to every character equally ( while doing the narration ). Try to improve your grammatical skills. Try to keep your story neat and clear then only readers will get a vibe to read the story. You have a creative mind. But you aren't penning down everything in a better way. You know everyone has an imaginative mind but what makes us different from others are our writing skills so you should improve your writing skills. Try to portray everything better, try to do it in a different and unique way.

Stars: 3/5

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