by ruxedblood
coral x oc

         THIS BOOK
          SLAYS ME

This book is really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really  really really really really really
good. It's grammar is amazing, and you don't add overly described details that go on for 6,000 words so I'm never bored. Every chapter is eventful, and this is not a cliché book. You portray all the characters pretty well.

Your OC is amazing. SKYE ROBERTS. THAT NAME IS GOLDEN AND FLOWS. Like this story. It flows and everything that happens makes sense, so you planned it out well. It's unique in it's own way, and creative. It's perfectly descriptive, and not overly done. It's like a professional author wrote it. Your story encourages many young souls to write. TBH you should be an author when you're older.

You use direct lines from the plot and make it even better by making your OC talk to other characters, and bond not just with Glenn. The Coral and Skye moments are adorable. You made a few original characters that made the plot slay. Everything about this fan fiction is perfect.

**IF YOU HAVEN'T READ THIS FAN FICTION THEN DO IT**