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After getting ready manan fab4 and navya went to clg

Abhi went to office

In clg

Navni went to attend their classes

Fab5 went to jamming room

After jamming for 2 hours
They stop

Cabir : yaar manik baas take a break for some time

Muk/ ali : yes guyzz got so tired

Manik : ok

Let's go to canteen lets all have coffee

Fab4 : OK lets go

They all went to canteen
Having coffee has chilling out

In sometime it was break time
They waited for nandani

And navni came to canteen saw fab 5 and join them

She order juice for navya and herself

Nandani : so guyz what's up

Mukthi : nothing doll we were tired so came to canteen to relax and have coffee

Nandani : OK
How is practice going on

Cabir : good
Ye tumara manik hume continues practice jo karwata hai

Nandani laugh and said : good for u bhai

Manik : baby you say how was the classes

Nandani : good quite boring

Manik : achaa g

Nandani : haan g

After spending some they went to their class
Manik : baby it's time for ur class.
Go

Nandani : OK
Bye guyzz

and fab5 went to jaam room

Nandani attended her classes and
Fab 5 jaam for 2 hours and took a break for some time and jaam for an hour that was the last hour of clg...

Fab5 came to parking area and was waiting for Navni

Navni to join them

Manik : let's go baby

Nandani : yes

Manik : let's go ahead guyzz
Manan and mukti went to malhotra mansion

Cavya went cabir sided to drop navya home

Dhruv drop alia

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In malhotra mansion

Manan reach home and went to their room

Mukti went to her room

Nandani got freshen up and went to manik room

Manik was in washroom taking shower

Nandani came and find no one in room, she heard the voice of water so sat on the bed playing game in her phone

Manik came out In towel around his waist

Listen the voice of the door open she look up
And
Nandani shout : mani what's wrong with you go get dressed up first
And close her eyes

Manik : how will i know u are in the room baby

Nandani : OK now go

Manik took his t-shirt and trousers and went to washroom to get ready

He Came back and saw a beautiful sight nandani was sleeping peacefully he went to her and kiss on her forhead,

Manik : baby is tired

Manik hug her and sleep

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That's it for now guyzz

Will update next part soon
Today only

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