An my attempt at updating with writers block !!!

"So guys it's the end of the first week of being in hospital with Dan at the moment ... Sadly we have no real idea of how his condition is excelling at the moment but I'm sure he is well ... I hope ... I know he is OK !! What else ... Oh yeah the twins I've been for a few more scans everything's going well with them OK so I'll update you later about what ever else we know ... OK ?? " I anxiously explained towards the small black camera pointed directly towards me on the hospital chair as I turned to place the camera in my pocket I noticed a twitch ? Did Dan twitch his finger is this a sign is ... Is Dan waking up ? Ironically Phil came happily skipping into the hospital room. My concerned expression changed dramatically as I heard a slurr coming from Dan.
"M..Maddy whats that.?" Phil exitedly asked
"I think Dans waking up !!" I cried into Phil's shoulder pulling him close to me
"We've got our Dan back." Phil whispered into my ear all of a sudden another slurr came from the lifeless body laying on the old rickety hospital bed although this time it was louder and more ... I'm not entirely sure but it just seemed like he was in pain.
"Dan ... DAN can you hear me." The room turned silent as soon as these words rolled from my tongue my eyes fixated on the heart monitor beside the bed. It was similar to the bed old ,rusty but all the same it worked like a charm. The lone which was constantly moving began to slow down it soon began speeding up and continued this process for at least ten minutes until a nurse finally rushed into the room. Her face was stone cold emotionless ... Like dans was as I watched him slowly fall to the ground ,clutching his heart staring deep into my eyes ... Or like when Dan and I spent our first nights together and id sit there for about half an hour each morning staring at him beautiful and all ... So many memories came flushing back as I watched in awe as horror played out before my eyes. By now there was around three or four nurses in the room all screaming in utter chaos as they tried to fix whatever was wrong with my baby's father. Every ten seconds a tall black muscular figured pulled out two iron like cubes rubbing them together and chanting 3..2..1 come on Daniel stay with us .... Them words sunk deep into my head and circled my head like hands ticking round a clock and like that we were dragged out of the small room into the busy halls followed by running nurses dragging the bed that held the lifeless body of my boyfriend Dan. And like that for the second time in a week I watched life and death take place before my eyes. I watched in awe as the soul of dan left the body that lied in the bed being pushed down the endless cold hall before me ...

Or so I thought