➳Poetry Winners➳
Here we go finally with the winners under the first category, where the judging process has concluded the swiftest.
I would like to express my tremendous gratitude to the lovely judges KaushikiGanguly and RishikaBaweja9! Dear poetry top 3 winners along honorable mentions, let's commence dwelling into the most exciting part.
1. First Place Winner
DoveMalfoy19- 2.0| tacenda
Title: 5/5
Cover: 4/5
Vocabulary: 13/15
Grammar/Punctuation: 5/5
Originality: 9/10
Flow: 10/10
Rhythm: 10/10
Total: 56/60
I personally loved the poems because of the themes they revolved around. The poem's title is PERFECT, I mean it, it's perfect. They're very well written, the poetic devices have been used in good and equal proportion and that is something I loved. Just a little something, your poems flows organically but you could use some textually aesthetic words. Now this is more of a suggestion, take it in the best way possible, don't try so hard to rhyme. Your flow is amazing but sometimes you lose the rhythm because you try to rhyme, it's okay if some sentences don't rhyme because you're following a particular theme which makes your poem awesome!
2. Second Place Winner
devilsupro- MELANCHOLY
Title: 4/5
Cover: 4/5
Vocabulary: 13/15
Grammar/Punctuation: 5/5
Originality: 9/10
Flow: 9/10
Rhythm: 9/10
Total: 53/60
Trust me when I say, I loved the last poem. I'm not trying to say that the rest weren't good enough but the last one had all my heart! I have absolutely no issue with your grammar because you've made no mistakes there and I'm impressed. Just a little something, I'd say your peak was the Pride poem and the last one. If you're to ask me, I'd say the topics are somewhat common but they were beautifully worded. The vocabulary in the first poem was beyond perfect and maybe, take it as a suggestion, keep up with the vocabulary of the first poem, originality of the last and rhythm of the pride one and you'll make something very wonderful out of your words!
3. Third Place Winner
18Marg - Radiant beauty
Title: 4/5
Cover: 3/5
Vocabulary: 14/15
Grammar/Punctuation: 4/5
Originality: 8/10
Flow: 9/10
Rhythm: 9/10
Total: 51/60
Honestly, I loved the way your write and out of all the books I judged, I'd have to say, you've used to best vocabulary, perfectly maintaining the aesthetic of your poetry collection! The themes of your poem are simple yet beautiful. The poem flows rhythmically and the grammar is fine too. Although, there's always scope for improvement, I don't think I've to give you any tips on that because the way you're writing, you're already improving a lot. I'll have to say, your poetry collection is very underrated, if I have one advice, then it is to try by changing the cover! Your cover attracts more readers and even though you shouldn't judge a book by it's cover, it wouldn't hurt us to make an aesthetically pleasing one : )
Let's not forget a handful of honorable mentions that didn't earn their positions in top 3, nevertheless, they also cordially deserve to be in the Hall of Winners!
Honorable mentions:
1. queensalsabeel - Essence
Title: 5/5
Cover: 3/5
Vocabulary: 12/15
Grammar/Punctuation: 4/5
Originality: 8/10
Flow: 8/10
Rhythm: 8/10
Total: 48/60
Your poems are a good read! They include various topics and all of them are beautifully represented which is a good point. But the thing is, when you use common topics, your poems somewhat revolve around the same issue and hence loses a tad bit of originality! Other than that, your grammar and punctuation is great. The only thing I'd like to point out is, your cover. I'm being honest with you and you can totally disregard this if you feel like, but as a reader myself, readers are attracted towards more aesthetic covers. Especially for a poetry book, I'd suggest you a cover with a deeper meaning or a bright aesthetic cover! If you've any other reason for using these covers, I totally understand!
2. Losing one's grip by abby_lyon_
Title- 3.5/5
Cover- 3/5
Vocabulary- 12.5/15
Grammar- 3.5/5
Originality- 8.5/10
Flow- 8/10
Rhythm- 8/10
Total- 47/60
Don't be discouraged if you aren't mentioned there and being part of the winners, or at least, the honorable mentions!
Even if you a fellow participant, feel free to DM your judge for a honest feedback and your final score.
Anyway I would like to express my immense gratitude to anyone of you for being not only part of the awards, but also being extremely bold to take the imminent step.
In addition to my statement, I have decided to publish in the imminent chapter how the stickers for the top 3 winners along honorable mentions will resemble, in order to be obtainable solely for them. :))
Don't forget to DM me with your emails, fellow winners, in order to collect your awards! :))
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