Let me begin by saying that I love the informal style with which you have written the book. Personally, I have always loved a more serious tone in books, but something about your writing style made me enjoy yours. 

From whatever I read, I can tell that your book is certainly humorous, and I was thrilled that you didn't start it off with an alarm clock blaring like most others, and instead with a very relatable sentence that draws readers in. 

However, I did find the tense switching a few times, and did not find a significant plot point in the first chapter that captures the attention of the readers. 

Nevertheless, I did enjoy the first few chapters of your book, and look forward to seeing much more of your writing. 

Good luck!

Final Rating: 8/10