This story is another very good example of how to draw in readers from the beginning. 

It starts of with a beautiful description, with imagery such that you can actually picture the purity of the forest being described, and then gasp at the contrast below between the peacefulness of the wild and the sufferings of man. 

Personally, I loved it! 

The transitions and descriptions were near perfection, and the innocence of the child described in the first chapter struck a beautiful nerve with the readers. 

One thing I would change though, is that some paragraphs are quite lengthy, and could cause the reader to skip over them. Try to make tiny little blocks of text. 

Also, try to change to cover of your book. Let it stand out. Your book is gorgeously unique, and deserves to be viewed as such at first glance as well.

Apart from that, I do not have much advice for you. You are a fantastic writer and are sure to find a lot of success someday! Keep it up!

Final Rating: 8/10