I had quite a lot to say when I first read this book. I feel that the author has a good idea for a story, but the execution could have been a lot better. Here are my suggestions to make this book better: 

1) You spent the first few chapters on your bio. Do not do that. A Copyright is okay as a first chapter, but your readers do not need an introduction to who you are and what your likes and dislikes are. It will put them off and not want to read your book. 

2) You have done something most people do on Wattpad and added a cast. Personally, I do not like that as your readers should be able to picture the characters for themselves. This is just a suggestion, but it is up to you. 

3) Your first chapter moves wayyyyy to quickly. It seems like someone is telling the story out of obligation to put their child to sleep. There are no details whatsoever, and the readers do not get the feel of the characters, setting, or emotions in the book at all. It is told like a short story, and isn't really intriguing. If I am being very honest, it is what prevented me from reading the next chapter. 

The first chapter of any book should leave the readers curious, and wanting more. You need to have imagery and some form of literary devices to make it more interesting. Of course, the fact that your book is a romance novel will make people on Wattpad read it regardless, but if you want to look for quality instead of quantity, I suggest you take some tips on descriptive writing from authors like xohrats and QueenOfSecrets1308, whose descriptions are absolutely stunning. 

4) Lastly, the title of your book seems quite cheesy. It makes the book seem like any other generic romance novel. That is fine if you are okay with it, but personally, I would try and give a deeper, more meaningful title to the story. 

Good luck with your writing! I hope these tips help and please PM me if you want a few more. I hope you find success here :) 

Final rating: 4/10