When I first saw the title and the cover, I did not expect much from this book. But, I was pleasantly surprised. 

The descriptions are absolutely beautiful and very much like that of @QueenOfSecrets1308 's style, in my opinion. 

Though the first chapter was not as intriguing so as to draw someone in and hook them immediately, I found the second to be quite interesting. The sentence-phrasing and imagery left me spell-bound and I was instantly captured by the era this book is set in. 

I have a couple of suggestions for the author. They are: 

1) Change the cover of your book to make it more appealing

2) Make your paragraphs shorter

3) When depicting dialogue, use quotations

I think this book will certainly go far on Wattpad, and I will the author all the success in the world. 

Final rating: 6/10