I usually try to say something positive at the beginning of each of my reviews, but this book has me very very confused at the moment. 

When I looked at the blurb, it said that it was an interactive book and based on a game, which I thought was very interesting. However, when I opened it up, I found that it was quite a mess. 

The prologue has constantly shifting tense, and starts with someone telling a story of a goddess in the past which somehow shifts to the present and ends up being someone's dream, which made absolutely no sense to me. 

The first chapter opens up with someone playing a game, yet the chapter seems to be constantly alternating between the author's POV and the MC's POV (from whatever I understood of the book) and, at first glance, looks like an anime-themed add with pictures all over. 

The grammar is also way off in most places, and it adds more to the confusion. 

Please have a fixed idea and plot line in mind while writing your book, and READ every chapter after you write it in order to edit it or see if it at least makes sense from a reader's point of view. 

I would be happy to give the author some references in order to see how exactly to write a story. In fact, the last book I reviewed was also Fanfiction and though I am not a part of the fandom, I was able to understand it. Please check it out and adjust your writing. 

Final rating: 3/10