I LEGIT SPENT LESS THAN 1 MINUITE ON IT AND IT CRASHED

So now gonna do this to take out my anger.

This is an old book I wrote in the begining of 6th grade with two of my friends (who were both 5th graders at the time). We worked on it for a few months, before ignoring it and leaving it to die.

RIP.

So I decided to suffer through it.

(ALSO PLEASE JOIN IN WITH COMMENTING ON THE PARAGRAPHS I WOULD LOVE TO SEE YOU'RE GUYS'S REACTIONS)

It is called River of Blood.

HEre we go.

KEY:

Normal: Book

Bold: Me

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PROLOGUE

Siblings always fight.

*inhales sharply*

Normal siblings fight with fists and screaming.

*sharper inhaling*

Not these siblings. Oh, no. These siblings are nothing like that. The Key sisters fight with power. And that doesn't mean higher ranks or more force. We mean real power. Super powers.

"The Key sisters". Oh gosh this is fun.

They were twins with one adopted. Skye's power was to shape-shift, Heather could fly and turn invisible. Skye and Heather fought with their special gifts. And they would always show off. The other girl was River, who had no gift. So she sometimes becomes angry with the other two. But she always stopped their fighting. Now let's go to the day something changed.

Wait twins with one adopted

Explain

(Oh I'm Skye btw)

'Now lets go to the day something changed" Kill me please

***

CHAPTER 1

Heather was walking down the hallway when a life sized replica of her stepped out in front of her. She made a few movements and the replica did the same. It was almost as if she was looking at a mirror, but she didn't remember having a mirror in the middle of the hallway. She snapped her fingers and disappeared, and watched the replica change form. "Come and get me!" called Heather's voice from the ceiling. "Why you little..." said Skye, and she began to turn into a raven. But she stopped in the middle of it. She did that a lot, because it looked really creepy. She turned into her normal form as the two girls sniffed the air, Heather floated down and became visible. They smelled smoke. "River." they said in unison, and they began to run. "Jinx!" shouted Skye as they ran. Heather rolled her eyes. They stomped up the stairs and ran to the end of the hallway. They turned and raced into a room. It was full of scientific things, like bottles, gloves, goggles, tweezers, etc. River was working on a foaming bottle. "River,

"full of scientific things" kill me

Also note the random space between them that is legit there in the book

what crazy experiment are you working on now?" said Skye, crossing her arms.

River didn't turn or jump, much to Skye's disappointment. "I already told you, I'm trying to make a serum to give me telekinesis." The liquid in the bottle changed from grey to green."Well, will you lock the door when you do this or at least shut it?" Skye looked at her sister.

God why did we make me sound so unlike me.

Skye was a normal sized girl, waist length jet-black hair. She had pale skin and ice-blue eyes.

Aaaaand random discription that doesn't belong here.

Heather was tall for her age, with elbow-length brown hair. She has peach skin and brown eyes.

So in-depth tho.

River had dirty blonde hair which came past her shoulders but did not reach her elbows. She had peach skin and hazel eyes.

"You work too hard, River." said Heather

"And besides, if you do get powers you'll have to hide them from mom and be responsible. said Skye

Lack of quotation marks. Nice. Also so not me.

"Yeah, like Skye changing into a snake so you could hide in the bathroom and put on makeup for that hot guy."River said trying to change the subject. Skye blushed.

"Trying to change the subject"

When planning this part we were at school on break and we started laughing really hard and people gave us wierd looks.

"Or heather turning invisible so you could kidnap the head cheerleader because she wouldn't let you on the team." Heather rolled her eyes.

Wait did Skye say that or Heather.

"Well, I liked him! Like all the other girls. I thought maybe if I looked nice..." began Skye

Switched around. Noice.

"Ha, in your dreams!" interrupted Heather.

Ha, die please!

"Ya, well it wasn't funny to walk into your bathroom to find a stranger running around screaming!" said Skye, becoming angry.

It was originally gonna have them naked.

yes. We were very mature.

"But your face was. Especially since I recorded the whole thing! " said Heather. Holding up a camera "why you-... gimme that!" said Skye running out, chasing Heather. "I can't wait to get powers so I can freeze those to." Thought River, rolling her eyes. She went back to work, feeling the room heat up. She sighed, knowing that she should listen to them about the door thing, so she went to close it. When she went back to her potions, she felt as if she forgot something important. She sighed and shook her head, adding some leaves to the green liquid. 

Wellllp this is fun.

***

CHAPTER 2

Skye sat on her bed. She looked at the poster on her wall. It had a picture of Darth Vader facing Luke Skywalker. She smiled as she pictured herself in Darth Vader's place. She then wondered if she could turn into him. She guessed, if she tried hard enough.

oooooooo I remember this.

She closed her eyes. She pictured the heavy suit upon herself, the robotic legs and arms. The mask helping her breathe... no, him. She pictured his stocky shape. She felt his stocky shape, she heard the breathing,

I had no idea what stocky meant at the time but I had been reading lots of fanfiction.

She opened her eyes.

And saw Dr. Lamb and was like "fricktard"

She did it.

She opened her eyes. Congratulatons. *slow clap*

She walked out her room pulling out her lightsaber.

Wait wouldn't it be "he walked out of her room"

This was AWESOME

No this sucks

She went into Heather's room and said in her deep voice

"WHERE IS LUKE SKYWALKER!?!?"

Heather looked up and shrieked.

"WHERE IS HE!?!?!"

I AM BATMAN

Heather fell against the wall and whimpered.

"TELL ME, GIRL."

Heather burst out laughing. "Good job, Skye. But isn't he fake?"

Skye laughed and changed into her normal form. "I thought he was."

"Well, you're pretty good. Then you didn't choke me so..."

Skye smiled.

"Hey, guys!" said River from behind her. Skye turned around.

"What?"

"I did it!"

No you're still alive you failed.

"Show us."

River closed her eyes and suddenly Skye couldn't move.

She felt herself moving against her will.

She did a cartwheel.

She started spinning in the air.

She had no control over herself.

Then she collapsed.

*le gasp* SO INTENSE

She glared at River. "Okay then." she growled.

River watched her closely.

Skye shrieked.

O no what happened *note sarcasm*

Just a side note, my dog skipper is behind me sitting and staring at a moniter we have sitting on the floor.

what dos she see

0.0

She sees nothing she's blind fam what the heck

Oh shut up I'm smart

Ye right

I am did you see my scores for my - 

You like failed science and health last trimester

Okay lets just contenue.

***

Chapter 3

Already note that this is two paragraphs long.

River watched her "sister" shriek and felt a feeling that was an evil smile creep on her face and then she got an idea. She ran to her room and started making a formula.

*facepalms slowly and sighs while face is still palmed*

Skye and Heather were walking down the hall when they notice they didn't see River at dinner. "She has been acting strangely." said Heather nervously. "She is probably working on one of her nerd projects again." Yawned Skye. "I know, but she was acting REALLY weird when she showed us her power-" Just as she was about to finish her sentence she heard laughing from River's room. They cracked the door open and there was River in the middle of the room, anti gravity hair and sitting in a criss cross position and floating. Her eyes were glowing with green an electric blue. "What in the name of.." Skye started. "Oh... Hello. I am just testing my powers." giggled River. Not looking at them. "OK, this is getting a little TOO weird..." whispered Heather. "Listen, I have a lot of... things to do so please, just go away." stammered River still not looking at them. They felt their bodies move against their will again.

Wait the room teleported what

Also River changed from crazy to nervous wHAT

***

Chapter 4

"No....." said Heather.Skye looked around. She felt death.

Wait how do you feel death what her power is shapeshifting huh

She followed the feeling.

To the kitchen.

*inhales sharply though nose*

She looked around, and saw a limp body. It was her father, lying unconscious. Blood was seeping out out him but there was no cut. It seemed as if it was just coming from his skin . She screamed, and heard Heather and River running toward her. She felt tears slide down her cheeks, and reached out to check for a pulse.

Nothing.

Just death.

Well gosh

She looked around, wondering if her mother met the same fate. Yes. There she was, beside the fridge.

"This is awful!" said River. There was not emotion in her voice. Skye glanced back at her. River turned away and made a noise. Is she laughing?!

(no she must be crying, skye thought, she just doesn't want to show it.)

wait what are these parenthisies

"poison" whispered Skye. "wait dad's power is to regenerate himself and others." said Heather. "The poison must have blocked it" said Skye

"Lack of capilization" whispered Foxpai, shaking her head and resisiting the urge to fix it. It was like an itch, that could only be solved with fixing it.

Chapter 8: The Itch

Sorry I'll stop.

Skye looked at her father.

She had a sudden feeling, as if the air around her was rippling. She looked at Heather, wide eyed. Heather did not seem to notice it.

She noticed River had run off, but the bathroom door that was shut tightly just moments ago was now wide open.

Skye ran in.

Heather followed.

River had gone into the bathroom, but the door was wide open. The twins went inside and the door slammed shut behind them

Huh

Skye yelped, and Heather jumped.

Skye tried to open the door, but it was locked.

"River!" She yelled.

she heard laughter behind them, Skye spun around. the entire wall had turned into a mirror. But the reflection was altered, there were thousands of them, she had seen this effect before, two mirrors facing each other, but that's impossible, unless... She spun around, another mirror. she looked to each side, both mirrors. They were even on the floor and ceiling. The laughter came back, a hollow evil sound yet strangely feminine that they just knew was River. Her reflection appeared in the mirrors,the room expanded as their vision began to tunel. They grew weaker and weaker until they fainted.

"they just new"

Holy crap this is a mary-sue fanfiction.

the girls woke up and looked around, mirrors. Mirrors everywhere, they were in a full on mirror-maze. Skye started forward and turned a corner. Heather tried to follow her but she turned a different way.

Well gosh

Skye looked behind her and saw that Heather was gone, and she began to run.

She crashed into a mirror and backed away, before seeing it turn green, than black. Like the night sky, with stars winking at her. She reached out and touched it, but felt herself get pulled into the blackness. She screamed.

"Don't touch things that on't belong to you" her parents told her.

"I AM TOUCHING THE EARTH'S AIR HA" she replied, and now is stuck in another dimension

Heather heard her sister's scream and tried to find where it was. She turned and slammed into a mirror. It turned green and revealed a pretty landscape. She walked into it again and found herself in front of her house.

Well gosh

***

Chapter 5

*notes how short this is*

Heather turned around, and a girl about her age, appeared in front of her. "sup?" she said.

"who are you" asked Heather. the girl looked at her like she was stupid, "River." she said,

river had dyed her hair black with red streaks, her lips were blood red with a black streak down the middle, she looked 14 rather than 10.

#MyImmortalConfirmed

"huh?" asked Heather.

"your twin sister, River" said the stranger

"ok, this is getting a little TOO weird" thought Heather

The end kill me

***

Chapter 6

Skye felt herself falling. She saw things began to take shape. She was falling into a grey circular room. But it was tall, and she heard a voice underneath her. It was a male, who was crying as he said "No! It's not true!"

"IT IS VERY CRINGEWORTHY QUIT YOU'RE WHINING FAM

She screamed and hit a metal ledge, and sat up quickly. She was facing a black-armoured person. He was very familiar...

darth vader .

*cringes* capitilization...

She turned behind her and saw a blonde man, whose face was red. He was clinging to a pole and one of his hands was gone. He wore tan robes.

Luke.

She blinked. "Oh, this scene- Wait WHAT?" she said, widening her eyes.

she screamed, then Luke screamed.

and then there was an awkward second of silence.

Then they screamed again.

It was originally gonna contain V-Dawg screaming also but I trashed the idea because it was out of character

She felt pressure applied to her neck and turned to see Darth Vader's hand was extended in her direction, the tips of his fingers slightly bent. She knew he was force choking her.

Hello to you too V-Dawg

"Wait!" Shrieked Skye, one hand on her neck and the other reaching for her belt.

What belt?

She grabbed something shiny and metal and pulled it out of its strap.

She pressed a button.

There was a red light and a sound, and she had activated her saber.

Where it came from, she had no idea. But she accepted it.

Huh

"I - I am a inquisitor!" She gagged, not wanting to fight Darth Vader because she wanted to prove herself.

"I was sent - here by my master - because

I will never finish my sentence!" Skye gasped.

Vader released her and stepped past her, heading for Luke.

She backed away slowly, not wanting to disrupt this huge plot twist.

Except it is a meme so everyone knows it

She deactivated her saber and slipped it in its case.

She waited patiently.

A while later, she heard Vader walk towards her, and she knew that Luke had jumped.

"Your young." He said.

********You're 

She looked up at him.

"It happens." She replied. He nodded slightly and said "Follow me" before walking back to the center of the death star.

Well another personality change.

***

*Chapter*

No chapter number great

River never felt such accomplishment. Even when she won the science fair, did ugh charity for the elders and young, and baked cookies for her parents, watched her sisters play.... she thought to herself. She found herself smiling. No! She went to her bathroom and started her changes. First she washed out the blue in her hair, then dyed it black with red streaks. She made herself look 14 rather than 10. Then there were red streaks in her hair. She got eyeliner, but didn't put it on her eyes, instead on her lips and made a line through both of them after she painted them red. Over time her skin began to become white and pasty. She was getting bored of being all alone and the person in the back of her head that is telling her to stop being evil. It was so annoying that she startedbanged her head against the wall. This should have given her a concussion, but she was surprised that she could still see and was well, not knocked out! "Hmm" River thought out loud. She tried to cut her hand just a bit, but it didn't work, the knife didn't leave a mark. Every minute she is getting stronger. Then she had an idea, a fantastically horrible idea. This made her laugh, louder and louder, she finally calmed down did she start working on one last formula. then she summoned Skye and Heather back.

"Did ugh charity" what

What is this random timeskip in the middle of the chapter

Also grinch confirmed

***

Skye was loving life. She was fighting alongside Darth Vader, She called herself Skyeshaper. She was about to be granted to be a sith lord when she disappeared. She found herself in her house, Heather was there too. And so was River.

Well that's lovely

I actually like that name. "Skyeshaper" 

"WHY!?" She shrieked as she realised she might never be a Sith LORD. "I was about to be the third Sith LORD, and the first female SITH LORD!!! I was going to be so powerful! And you had

to ruin it!!!"

Note random skip

ANYWAYS THATS THE END OF THE BOOK SORRY GUYS

I have some other books I can maybe die of. Should I?

Comment below.

Thank for surviving if you made it this far.