Flashback:

Brianna said while the other human said in gibberish something and so did Brianna, Brianna took the lady to this room " Wait! Where are you going, are you leaving me here?!" I questioned as walking up to her and screaming in fear ' Oh um......I don't know I'll just be back don't press red buttons on the humans!" As she left me here in the human creating thingy bobby place, I looked around looking confused with all these testing thingies, Why do they keep humans?

 I went into a other room with this bottles of green and pink things, I wanted to drink them but I might turn into a Entalmetel, I don't want to be superhuman right now, I just don't! I walked up to the bottles and picked up a pink one slowly and smelled it, it smelled like CAT POOP! I fell down on the floor and sighed and said "Ew why!?"  I got up and walked out of the room and followed where Brianna went and i see her teaching that human English and About the System; ''The System of Entalmetals, The power of pink,purple,blue,red,orange,teal & Stars.Those are the powers,  They will be 6 girls to be chosen to choose some couples to be born. And they can control anything but not not ANYTHING... Pink means Sweet Fun Tough and Cool Purple means Tough Strong Stupid and powerful  Blue means Shy Sweet, Fun and Loveable and Red means Mean, Dramaqueen and Bully and Team Meanies and Orange is like Red and Teal is a mix of Purple and Red. Their is only one person who is the strongest but we don't know who it is..We also don't know who will turn unto a fairy when is very happy and turns unto a wolf  when angry  but the Star  is just a star what is colors of all powers, ( Pink,purple,blue,red,orange,teal.)  Once when we find out who the fairy and wolf is the star come's to them. You might be the one. "

She said that to the human, I walked in and asked her if she gave it a named and she said " Oh yeah, Subject #7369!" I said "Oh my God, That's not even a name!!" I screamed out of anger and started having a anger fit " Oh yeah, it is a name we name them subjects because in the future they pick out 2 humans to make a child and they will be there, if it doesn't work she will have to wait for them to break up and a other human to make her!" I got confused and i said "Woah" She said "Yeah!" We have over 7000 subjects! And over 4000 families what have superhumans!" I got surprised and jumped around "Can i be superhuman? Can i be superhuman!?" I said as Brianna said; " Well there is a green bottle and a pink bottle, we only give them to subjects. Sorry!" Brianna said happily randomly, I said " Awh. "I sounded sadly and asked if the lady speaks English and the subject said "YEAH!" She screamed and scared the poop out of me!

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Grammar testing;:

Grammar

5

1Determiner use

1Noun form

1Subject-verb agreement

2Adverb/Adjective use

Punctuation

18

2Special character use

1Closing punctuation

5Complex and compound sentence punctuation

10Basic punctuation

Spelling

8

1Commonly confused words

7Misspelled words

Enhancement

6

6Word choice

Style

8

6Wordiness

2Improper formatting

Sentence Structure

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