Judge: drowsyjimin

Category: Idol x IdolBook Name : TormentorBook Title & Cover: 10/10

The title and cover is great! Both suit the objective and mood of the story.

Description: 10/10The description's format is well constructed and without a doubt has a grabbing hook. It doesn't unravel too much, nor too little information, and it leaves the reader with a final question that allures them into deliberating the possible occurrences that could happen enough for them to read.

Plot: 19/20

Even though the story-line goes along the common lines of "bully to lover," it has its own unique twist to it and it is capturing to see so many changes of events in the story.

Story Flow: 7/10

The story flow is a rational pace for a reader to find the concepts of the chapters comprehensible and able to understand the overall objective of that chapter. However, in some parts of the story, the attraction arises too quickly, and the intimacy builds over only a short amount of time that I feel is too quick. The plot twist on the 10TH chapter, however, adds a more riveting aspect to the story and it really interests me as a reader.

Grammar & Writing: 19/20

Grammar and writing is great! The author uses numerous vocab words that adds a more engrossing atmosphere to the story, still keeping it understandable, despite minor spelling errors. (And I love how the author adds visuals so the reader can easily envision the story!)

Character Development: 20/20

The character development is well erected. At first, Jennie has extreme detestation for Yoongi, and it's clear. Later on, she questions her feelings and assumptions, and soon realizes she has feelings for her tormentor. Similar goes for Yoongi - his character blooms as Jennie makes an effort to confirm her feelings and why Yoongi torments her.

1ST Chapter: 8/10

The 1ST chapter is a great start to what unfolds in the story. It isn't too uneventful nor eventful as a beginning, and the end of the chapter allures others to continue. However, I feel like it could've been better if it left the reader anticipating conflict.

Total Marks: 93/100