Alternative Ending 1

This is going to be my first Alternate Ending. I'm going to write many different endings and possibilities. This one will have a happy ending. I hope you enjoy it.

Jack POV:
Screams! Horrified screams! I was barley able to hear my own voice in this scenery of death. We, Rose and I and some others were crouched on the wrong side of the railing and that for a damn good reason. The ship, broken in a half, stood vertical to the deadly, endless ocean. People who were holding on to the other side couldn't hold on any longer and fell, they fell into their own grave because the ship would suck them all down. I screamed against the noise: "Rose! Listen to me. The ship is going to suck us down. Take a deep breath when I tell you. Do not let go of my hand and kick as hard as you can as soon as we hit the water." The Titanic now sank faster with every second. I ordered: "Now!" took a deep breath and grabbed Roses hand even tighter. The impact took my breath away. We water splashed over my head and everything spun around. The turbulences cursed me to let go of her hand. It was impossible to hold on. I felt the sog pulling me into the deep unknown. I lost orientation for a moment but then there was complete calmness. I was free. I was no longer being sucked down. My legs kicked as hard as they could and I reached the surface. It was absolute madness. Thousands of people on the edge of death. Everybody desperately trying to survive. But only one person had space in my thoughts. Rose! "Rose!" I screamed in the top of my lungs, but I wasn't the only one screaming. Literally every person screamed. Some called for their loved ones, others for rescue or out of pain. And then I heard her. I swam in her direction as fast as possible. It wasn't easy. Every movement hurt like hell. Hell did exist. This was nothing different than hell. I saw that some guy tried to used Rose as a rescue ring to stay afloat. I reacted out of impulse. I punched the guy in the face to save Rose. I felt guilty but it was the only way to save the love of my life. I instructed her: "I need you to swim, Rose. Can you do that for me?" There was no time to be wasted. So I pulled Rose with me until she swam for herself. We had to look out for something we could float on. And there was it. A wooden door, which I recognized as the entry door to the luxurious dining room for the first class. Now it was our only chance of survival. I helped Rose on the door and wanted to follow her but it flipped around. If I got on it that door wouldn't stay afloat. As I realized that I got of. It wasn't even in question that Rose should stay. I needed her to survive. She had to! Living without her was not an option for me. Either we both survived or only she, but if Rose dies I would never heal from that loss. Rose looked at me in horror: "Jack! No! Please! Try it again. I can't lose you. If you stay in the water you'll die." Her hopes vanished as a shook my head slightly. There was no way it would stay afloat. Rose realized that well and she did something which would save my life. She gave me her life jacket and ordered me to look for another piece of furniture that I could float on. I did as she said. I did not want to lose her and I wouldn't just give up. We planned on getting of in New York together. I had to fight for that dream till the last second. Every movement felt like thousand knives being stepped into my body at the same time. I was a good swimmer but the cold hit me real hard. Just as he gave up hope l found one single peace. It was smaller than the door but if I balanced it wright it would bare my weight. After some struggles I managed to get on the wooden piece. Don't ask me what it used to be. I have got no idea, but this thing saved my life. I laid on that wood and focused on my breath. I was extremely weak, my body suffered from severe hypothermia. How was Rose? Was she still alive? She was the only person that hold me in this world. I looked around. Corpses everywhere! A great deal of them have been still in their best years, had their whole life ahead of them, no one was prepared to die today and still. Death caught up with them. It was probably the most traumatic, horrific sinking in the history of humanity. And it all started so great and ended in such a tragedy. I shook my head in an effort to come to different thoughts. I summed a melody and looked at the night sky. Minutes felt like hours. Life faded away from me, despite me holding onto it in despair. I wasn't ready to let go. I had to life. I had to life for Rose. For us! Right at the moment were death wanted to take me someone pulled me on a boat and without me realizing it warm blankets were wrapped around me and I was brought to safety. I lost consciousness.

Rose POV:
My every thought was of Jack. Had he found something to float on or was he long dead? No! I had to believe he was still out there alive. I would not give up. I promised Jack, I would survive and as long as there was even the slightest chance that he was still alive I had to hold on for dear life. For our life together. Every breath was a torture but I wasn't ready to leave this world already. Jack taught me how to life and I wanted to life the rest of my life. I wanted to life by his side. Jack could make his living as an artist and was always fascinated by acting. Maybe I'd be an actress someday. And we would life somewhere in a small, but cozy country house and have a lot of babies. In addition, we'd do everything we planned. These thoughts kept me alive. I forgot the tragedy around me for a second. I have been in a ideal world with Jack. Yes! That was how I wanted to life my life. I mumbled the first few tones of the song Jack sang for me back on the titanic. This evening had been the best of my life. At this point no one figured that most of us wouldn't survive this night. It was madness. Death all around me. And then, a shimmer of hope. A boat came back! I tried to cry for help but no sound left my lips. I begged that I was still able to swim, even without a life jacket. I had to manage to reach the crew member with the whistle. Somehow I did it. The first two tries failed gloriously, no sound came out, but the third one made a sound. The boats, who were just about to turn back, stopped and listened. I whistled again snd again till they found me. Two men pulled me onto the boat and wrapped me in blankets. I was shaking all over my body and my voice was hardly understandable as I begged them to keep searching. Jack was somewhere out there and I would not gibe him up. After some treatment they agreed to keep searching. I pointed out the approximate direction and they kept yelling for survivors. //Please, Jack! Be alive// was everything I could think about. And then I saw him. He found a wooden piece. I pointed at him and the two men fished him out of the deadly water and wrapped blankets around him as well. Now everything would be fine. He was unconscious but alive. I allowed myself to fall asleep too. It would take some time to get to the Carpathia.

This is it. I hope you enjoyed it. My English is not perfect but I hope you can read it and enjoyed it. I would like to hear your opinion in the comments.

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