DISCLAMIER: Again I'm not trying to harass anyone. Or basically be harsh. I'm just giving criticism. And My Poinf Of View. And basically showing other people's book pages who have examples of what not to dos and to dos. I'm not trying to bully anyone on the Internet. It's not my intentions. I don't care if it's "Oh Wait! But they've improved! And they also have good writing now!" Even if it's in the past. It's still good to learn from past mistakes.

1. Check the writing out first. Make sure it looks good. For example this is pure good writing.

This pleases my retinas. ＼(^ω^＼)

2. Make sure that it's not POP. Aka stands for Pile Of Pancakes. I usually use this phrase if basically all paragraphs are stacked at once. Which is a big no no. Because you should separate your paragraphs. It's ok if you don't. But I like reading separate paragraphs. Ex.

3. Have good Grammar. I know I mentioned this in my previous chapters. I know you guys might think it doesn't apply to people who doesn't know English really well. But still literally please have good English. In my opinion it applies to everyone.

4. Like I said again. Capitalization is always key. And will always will.

5. If the book always updates often. Then it's a go go book. If the book is complete. It's also a go go book. But then I wouldn't really recommend books who don't update for a year or so. (I mean I'd read a book that didn't update for year if it had a lot of pages so it's ok) or books that are discontinued. It's ok if you read them. I just... eh... yeah.