If your like confused on this. Like, I'm just saying: uhhh helping your book to be like better, and etc.

1. H A V E good grammar. It's always a rule in my mind. I'm not offending any people who's English aren't that great. But still-

2. don't make your paragraphs stacked into one pile of pancakes. Like don't do that. If you don't know what I mean. Imma give you an example. Ahem "MY NAME IS BOB AND I LOV ANIME AND SHIP TWO SKELETONS AND A SANSSSSSS CRINGY FANGIRLLLL AND BASICALLY I LIIKE TO DO BAD RANTS AND BE SALTY TO PEOPLE AND DO THE CHICKE DANCE AL DAY AND BASICALLY-" yeah that type of stuff. Just make sure to separate the paragraphs.

3. Don't always use ' as in speech. LITERALLY use " because I would usually use ' when the character talks to themselves mentally. I always see it in books and it's freaking driving me N U T S

4. Don't do a lot of A/Ns.
I would get a lot of authors who use tons of A/Ns but don't do tons of A/Ns to the freakin point where the book has 40 pages. But then for examples uhhh Sans x Reader basically has 40 pages out of 40 pages but HALF AND I MEAN HALF. Ok do some math what is half of it's basically obviously it's 20. 20 pages are all A/N while all 20 pages are basically Sans x Reader scenarios. And 20 pages of a/N appearing every time you read sucks.

5. Be specific. I mentioned this before. But be specific for example um... "Natsu Dragoneel wore a scarf that was white and looked like it has scales. And basically was from igneel." BUT DONT BE TO SPECIFIC IF U KNOW WHAT I MEAN... *hinthint* I mentioned it an example before if you remember-