This was a comment I commented on a poem, and I'm actually really gosh darn proud of it, so here ya know read it if you wanna: 

Like in physics, a wave (like in the ocean, not a sound wave) can move forward but also side to side. It can do both things at the same time. I think humans are kind of like that, too. If you really think about it. I mean, all of the great people in this world want to do multiple things to help people. To help the world. To help the sky above us be much brighter. And I would like to say that everyone has a good heart, but that is not exactly true. But, no doubt, there are some good people out there. There are some good hearted young and old people who want to change some things about our world. And, like this poem said, "EVENTUALLY EVERYTHING CONNECTS". The young people want to help the old people while the old people want to help the young, to get their brains filled with knowledge. If we try to help someone or something in this world, we can really make this world better. Like a wave in the ocean, we can move side to side and move forward at the exact same time.

Garisto_Styles_03  this was a comment I made about your poem.

Hope you have a good day everyone!

Mads