BillTemple1957 was too polite to point it out but gailrunschke has pointed out Tempoems, however well intentioned are supposed to rhyme. So this one does!! But it's still not quite right.

Gail says Andrew should toe the line
Seems my first effort didn't chime.
Can't be feeling like slime.
Try one more time.
Meant to rhyme!
My crime!
Rhyme!