Rose pov
Im in the place were they have me and i have no idea why they have me
???"here like you said now pay up"
???"well then thank for bring her im going to love making her my slave"
Rose"let me out now you will regret this"
???"will i now ok then bye bye in going to love this hahhhahahahahahahahahahhaaa"
Rose"dont touch me "
???"oh i dont need to mind control let see what is in your head"
Rose"what no get out of my head "
I go on the floor in pain him telling me to obay him and do his every wish him as my master
Rose"ahhhhhhhhhhhhh stop please ..............ahhhhhhhhhhh please stop"
???"mahhhhhahahhaahhahahahahahahahahahahahahahhahahahahahah call me master"
Rose"yes master"
???"oh yes now i need you too kiss me on my lips my slave"
Rose"yes master"
i cant controll my self
Thorn pov
i dont smell her any more i i smell is death
Hunter"why did we stop"
Thorn"all i smell is death"
Milly"no that is not good right kick tell us"
kick"she is being controlled that happen once and it was the cat person tryed to get her to do things she would never do"
I left to the death and i see a place away from town
hunter"hey you left us wow look at this place"
Rose pov
boss"oh look at that people get them and though them in prison for breaking in my house mahhhhhhh now rose get them and kill thorn he is in my way"
Rose"y...y....n....no he is my friend i won't i....l"
Boss"mind controll"
Rose"yes master (why can't i stop this)"
boss"oh and you will love me insted of him and make out with me mahhhhhhhh"
Rose"yes master (i though up in my mouth ewww)"
I go out there to kill thorn
Thorn"rose you are ok thank god lets go home now come on"
Kick"that is not her look at her"
Hunter"she is black smoke then white smokewhy is she like that"
Thorn"mind controlled wake up rose wake up"
Rose"s...s.....s...sorry thorn i have to i don't want to"
boss"do it now mind controll"
rose"ahhhhhhhhhh help thorn help stop please"
All"ROSE!"
i was nocked out from the pain and i see them tack them and i was in the bedroom i was put in and looked around
Rose"thorn milly kick hunter kyle (cring) why my family tell me what i need to do "
I cry and cry and then i finlly go and he tryed to mind controll me again and i fote it and it didn't work and ran to find them but i go to the main room
Boss"oh look thorn your girl is here to see you die"
Rose"thorn milly hunter kick kyle let them go now"
Thorn"ahhhhhhhhh run rose"
Rose"no let them go "
Boss"why dose he get all the girls huh my brother gets all the girl"
All"WHA!"
rose"the fuck you are is his brother real low going after me ok low"
Boss"well then you die"
Kick"no please"
Rose"what no "
He takes out a sword and trys to bison doing jumps in and stops him and gets slashed instead
Rose "THORN NO YOU BASTER YOU KILLED YOUR BROTHER YOU DIE (crying)"
Hunter and the girls holed me back i had balck and white smoke coming from my eyes about to kill him the look in my eyes he was going to be dead
Thorn"dont..........worrie..............about............me rose i ..............i....................l.............l..........l.........ove .................you ..................................................."
Rose"(tring up) THORN NO WAKE UP PLEASE IM GOING TO KILL YOU YOU GOD DAMN BASSTER LET ME kill HIM NOW thorn please dont go please (crying)ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh thorn"
Hunter"you god damn baster you killed your brother"
Boss"he was not my real brother so i dont car.."
Rose"he was still your god damn brother that should be you not him you love me right heal him god damn heal him for me"
Boss"fine for you but i still hate him"
Kick"why just because he gets all the girl well gess what i like uou since we ment when we were kids"
And she went to kiss him and he fanted but i healed him and when he wake up i gave him a kiss and slaped him for doing that
Rose"(cring)never do that again"
Thorn"i wont i promes"
Then from forth i was not kinddnapes and my mom slaped thorn for dieing on me and then geting back alive and his brother well is grounded hah that is what he gets
Thorn"hey you ok"
Rose"yeagh if you mean all most lossing my go friend the yes"
Thorn"hey im sorry but i mean it i love you and i want to be your boyfriend i love you "
Rose"i love you too and i would love to be your girlfriend thorn"
Then when se almost kiss i got shot in the legand draged to the hospital to get the boys out before it reached all the way through my leg so then had to get crutches but me and Thorn end up kissing in the Moonlight the gorgeous and beautiful moonlight

This is what i like

HEY GUYS I REALLY HOPE YOU LOVE THIS CHAPTER BECAUSE I CRYED WILED I MADE IT SORRRY ENJIOY