Finally! After a long wait, we have calculated the results and finalized the ranking of our The Carnival Master is Not O.K. category!

We want to thank the esteemed Bangtan Community and their judge patricia_s_fictions for their time and for lending us their expertise in adjudicating.

I am sure you all have been waiting with bated breath, and so... without further ado... here are the winners of The Carnival Master is Not O.K.

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THE CARNIVAL MASTER IS NOT OK {TEEN FICTION}

1. Tricky Heart by LoScrittoreDelPopolo

Title: 4/5

The title is totally unique. The title had a hint of curiosity in it making the book seem interesting. 

Cover: 5/5

The cover was very aesthetic and highly detailed. The detailed creativity in it and the bright colours are really mesmerising. Best cover ever

Blurb: 4 /5

I personally kinda loved the description. It sounded like a movie trailer. The emotions depicted through the description were mesmerising. The blurb is captivating and well-written, effectively setting the stage for the story. It sparks curiosity with its blend of romance, suspense, and drama. The focus on a shocking message and Martha's emotional dilemma creates an irresistible hook, compelling readers to dive in.

Mechanics: 17/20

The mechanics are polished, with smooth, engaging prose that weaves a vivid narrative. The vocabulary is accessible yet rich enough to evoke strong imagery and emotions. However, there are occasional moments where the phrasing could be more dynamic to elevate the storytelling further.

Plot: 22/25

The plot is engrossing, combining the intensity of first love with the suspense of hidden secrets. It skillfully balances emotional depth with unexpected twists, keeping readers invested. While mostly well-constructed, some elements of Paul's secret and the resolution could have been developed more intricately to avoid predictability

Flow & Pacing: 13 /15

The story flows smoothly, with moments of tension and reflection interwoven seamlessly. The pacing keeps the reader engaged, although certain parts—such as the buildup to the shocking message—might benefit from slightly more detail to heighten the suspense.

Character Development: 8/10

Martha and Paul are relatable, well-drawn characters whose growth feels authentic. However, secondary characters could be fleshed out more to enrich the narrative's emotional layers and add additional depth

Creativity & Originality: 4/5

While the story incorporates familiar tropes, its execution is refreshing. The emotional stakes, combined with the twist of Paul's secret, offer a unique angle within the romance genre.

Emotions: 8/10

The story succeeds in stirring emotions, particularly in Martha's internal conflict and the highs and lows of young love. While impactful, a deeper exploration of Paul's perspective could have intensified the emotional resonance.

Total: 86 /100

Tricky Heart is a compelling romance filled with drama, secrets, and emotional depth. Its relatable characters and engaging twists make it a satisfying read for fans of the genre. While there's room for slight improvements, it's a story that will linger in the hearts of its readers and is well worth recommending

2. Unrequited Beginnings by Lanadelreygirlie

Title: 4/5

The title is engaging and suggests an intriguing metaphor for the complexity of relationships. It effectively captures the emotional journey of love, it's unique enough to stand out in a crowded genre.

Cover: 3.5 /5

The cover seems very naturalistic. Romantic vibes type of.

Blurb: 4/5

The blurb is heartfelt and effectively introduces Maya's story, but it feels slightly verbose. Tightening the language and adding a more tantalising hook about the series' continuation could better spark curiosity

Mechanics: 16/20

The writing is generally smooth, with a strong emotional tone. However, a few phrases could benefit from more polish to enhance clarity and impact

Plot: 19/25

The story captures the innocence and intensity of a first crush well, drawing readers into Maya's world. While relatable, the plot leans on familiar tropes, and some twists could be more unpredictable to keep the reader on edge.

Flow & Pacing: 12 /15

The pacing flows steadily, mirroring Maya's emotional journey. However, certain parts—like the pivotal "not-so-good" event—could use more build-up or exploration to strengthen the impact

Character Development: 8/10

Maya is a well-drawn protagonist with relatable struggles and growth. Her emotions are palpable, though supporting characters like Rohan could use more depth to make their dynamic truly compelling.

Creativity & Originality: 3.5 /5

The concept of navigating first love is classic but not entirely fresh. The metaphor of a "maze" is promising, but more innovative twists or unique elements could set this apart.

Emotions: 8/10

The story successfully conveys the innocence and heartbreak of a first crush, resonating with readers. Some emotional moments could be expanded to deepen the impact.

Total: 78 /100

Unrequited Beginningsia is a heartfelt debut that captures the highs and lows of teenage love with authenticity. While there's room for stronger originality and richer supporting elements, Maya's journey is relatable and emotionally resonant. This series holds promise for readers seeking tender stories of love, growth, and resilience.

3. Everybody Hates Grey by axelle_grace14

Title: 4/5

The title, Everybody Hates Grey, is evocative and intriguing. It suggests a deeper exploration of themes like invisibility, indifference, and rejection, which are often associated with the color grey. Totally relatable to the story.

Cover: 3 /5

The cover has been kept simple and casual.

Blurb: 4/5

The blurb is concise and emotionally charged, setting up the stakes with an enticing blend of conflict and hope. It captures the protagonist's struggles and the potential transformative power of love.

Mechanics: 18/20

The writing is polished, with a flow that gracefully navigates complex emotions and themes.

Plot: 22/25

The plot is a heartfelt exploration of mental health, love, and self-discovery. The protagonist's journey feels authentic, with relatable struggles and compelling emotional beats.

Flow & Pacing: 14 /15

The pacing strikes a fine balance between introspection and action, keeping the reader engaged.

Character Development: 8/10

The protagonist is richly developed, with his struggles deeply woven into the narrative. The love interest adds contrast and growth opportunities

Creativity & Originality: 4/5

The story tackles familiar themes like depression and romance but does so with a thoughtful approach and unique emotional resonance. It balances innovation with relatability, even if it doesn't fully break genre conventions

Emotions: 9/10

The emotional core of the story is powerful, resonating with readers who can empathise with the struggles of depression and the healing power of connection. A few moments feel slightly overwrought.

Total: 87/100

Everybody Hates Grey is a touching and relatable story that deftly handles heavy themes with care and authenticity. While there's room for improvement in character depth and plot twists, the narrative's heart and emotional resonance make it a worthwhile read. Highly recommended for those who enjoy introspective, character-driven stories.

4. Behold! My Difficult Roommate by Harmoniculus

Title: 3/5

The title sets a funny and mysterious tone. That sounds kinda cute.

Cover: 4.5/5

The cover is very detailed and looks mesmerising.

Blurb: 4.5/5

The blurb is engaging and provides just enough detail to intrigue readers without revealing too much. It artfully teases the layers of mystery, personal conflict, and high stakes, though it could benefit from slightly more emphasis on the unique Parisian setting to enhance its allure.

Mechanics: 18/20

The mechanics are polished, with flowing sentences and evocative language that create vivid imagery. A few minor adjustments in phrasing could enhance clarity and impact, but overall, it's a well-crafted piece. The vocabulary is diverse, enriching the narrative.

Plot: 23/25

The plot weaves multiple intriguing threads—mystery, personal struggle, and danger—into a compelling tapestry. The stakes are high, and the blend of crime, music, and identity issues is refreshing. A couple of transitions between subplots could be smoother, but the story is engaging and well-constructed.

Flow & Pacing: 13/15

The story flows smoothly, with a balance between reflective moments and high-stakes action. However, there are a few areas where the pacing slows, briefly interrupting the immersion. Refining these sections would make the narrative even more gripping.

Character Development: 9/10

Kai and Jamie are well-rounded, with distinct struggles and growth arcs that make them relatable. Their dynamic adds emotional depth and tension, though a bit more insight into Jamie's backstory could elevate their relationship further.

Creativity & Originality: 4.5/5

The combination of a murder mystery, crime syndicate, and personal drama set against the backdrop of a Parisian academy is highly original. The intertwining of music with suspense is a unique touch that makes the story stand out.

Emotions: 9/10

The story effectively stirs emotions, with moments of tension, fear, and hope. The characters' internal conflicts resonate, though a few key emotional beats could be expanded for a deeper impact.

Total: 88.5/100

This story is an absorbing blend of suspense, drama, and personal growth, with a strong sense of place and unique character dynamics. While there's room for fine-tuning in pacing and emotional resonance, it delivers an engaging experience. Highly recommended for fans of multifaceted mysteries with rich character arcs.

5. Her purpose by sulkytae 

Title: 4/5

The title Her Purpose is simple yet evocative, capturing the essence of a deeply personal journey. It subtly hints at introspection and legacy, inviting readers to delve into Elizabeth's quest.

Cover: 3/5

The cover is very simple yet beautifully embodies the emotional and existential weight of the story. It uses poignant imagery and colors that evoke hope, loss, and determination.

Blurb: 5/5

The blurb is a masterclass in evoking curiosity. It succinctly presents Elizabeth's devastating reality while raising poignant questions about life and legacy. The hook about whether she'll succeed adds an element of urgency that ignites a strong desire to discover her journey.

Mechanics: 18/20

The writing is polished, with eloquent phrasing that conveys profound emotions. The vocabulary is varied, painting vivid imagery without becoming overwrought..

Plot: 23/25

The plot is gripping, a delicate balance of heartbreak and inspiration. Elizabeth's mission to leave a meaningful legacy is both relatable and profound, and the stakes feel deeply personal.

Flow & Pacing: 14/15

The narrative flows smoothly, maintaining an engaging pace that alternates between reflective moments and intense, purposeful action. It doesn't linger unnecessarily, and the balance between emotional depth and forward momentum is well handled.

Character Development: 9/10

Elizabeth is a fully realized protagonist, brimming with depth and authenticity. Her struggles, fears, and hopes resonate deeply. While side characters serve their roles effectively.

Creativity & Originality: 4/5

The story carves its own space within the genre of life-affirming dramas. While the premise isn't entirely unique, its execution and emotional weight distinguish it. Elizabeth's specific mission gives the narrative an innovative and memorable edge.

Emotions: 7/10

The story is a poignant exploration of mortality and purpose, stirring profound emotions. It touches on universal themes of loss, hope, and resilience.

Total: 87/100

"Her Purpose" is a deeply moving tale that combines heartfelt storytelling with a powerful exploration of life's meaning. Elizabeth's journey leaves a lasting impression, inspiring readers to reflect on their own legacy. It is highly recommended for fans of emotional, life-affirming dramas.

6. Echo in the Wind by Strawberry1d

Title: 4.5/5

Echo in the Wind is poetic and evocative, drawing the reader in with its sense of mystery and depth.

Cover: 4/5

The cover effectively captures the contemplative and melancholic tone of the story.

Blurb: 5/5

The blurb is beautifully written, blending vivid imagery with emotional intrigue. It skillfully hints at the protagonist's inner struggles and journey toward healing, leaving readers curious about the connections he will form. The addition of Jungkook's background as a BTS member grounds the narrative in realism while broadening its appeal.

Mechanics: 18/20

The prose flows gracefully, with a rich vocabulary and evocative imagery that paint vivid mental pictures. A few sentences could benefit from tightened phrasing to enhance clarity, but overall, the writing is polished and immersive.

Plot: 23/25

The plot balances introspection with emotional discovery, guiding the reader on a meaningful journey. It avoids overdramatization, allowing the story to unfold organically. A minor critique is the somewhat predictable arc of "finding oneself on a secluded island," though it is executed with sincerity and depth.

Flow & Pacing: 13/15

The pacing is steady, with moments of reflection balanced by meaningful interactions.

Character Development: 9/10

Jungkook's struggles feel authentic, and his emotional growth is well-articulated. The mysterious woman serves as an intriguing counterbalance, though more depth in her backstory would make her equally memorable.

Creativity & Originality: 4.5/5

The story offers a fresh perspective on themes of fame, detachment, and personal rediscovery, avoiding clichés through its thoughtful execution. The integration of a real-life figure like Jungkook adds a unique twist.

Emotions: 9/10

The writing evokes strong feelings of melancholy, hope, and introspection. The dialogue and inner monologues resonate deeply, though some moments could push the emotional boundaries even further.

Total: 90/100

Echo in the Wind is a poignant and beautifully written tale of self-discovery, loss, and healing. Fans of reflective, character-driven narratives will likely savor every moment.

7. A Book nerds guide to falling in love by HeideHunt

Title: 4.5/5

The title, A Book Nerd's Guide to Falling in Love, is whimsical and charming, immediately appealing to readers who adore stories about books, romance, and self-discovery. It suggests both a romantic journey and a love letter to literature, effectively drawing in its target audience. However, while it is inviting, it may lean slightly too niche for broader appeal.

Cover: 2/5

The cover is simple and sweet.

Blurb: 4/5

The blurb is well-crafted and enticing, striking a balance between plot intrigue and emotional depth. It teases the magical realism and the protagonist's emotional journey while highlighting cultural diversity and a timeless battle between tradition and modernity. It builds enough curiosity to make readers eager to explore the story's pages.

Mechanics: 19/20

The prose is polished and eloquent, with a rich vocabulary that paints vivid imagery. The text flows gracefully, showcasing the author's strong command of language..

Plot: 22/25

The plot is engaging, weaving together personal stakes, cultural commentary, and a sprinkle of magic. The concept of a vanishing book and the community's struggle against AI is fresh and thought-provoking. However, the romantic subplot could risk feeling slightly predictable.

Flow & Pacing: 13/15

The story flows seamlessly, with well-paced chapters that balance excitement with introspection. A few sections may feel slightly rushed, particularly around the climax or romantic development, but the pacing is generally well-judged.

Character Development: 9/10

Elsy and Finn are well-rounded and relatable, and the cultural representation enriches their depth. Secondary characters, like the bestie or townsfolk, could be explored more to add layers to the narrative.

Creativity & Originality: 5/5

The story strikes a delightful balance between familiar tropes and innovative ideas. The vanishing book and its magical influence on the community feel refreshingly unique, making this a standout feature.

Emotions: 8/10

The narrative stirs a range of emotions, from Elsy's love for her library to the bittersweet moments of navigating love and friendships. While it is heartfelt, some emotional beats could delve deeper to resonate even more profoundly.

Total: 85.5/100

This book is a heartfelt and magical read, blending romance, cultural depth, and a love for literature into a compelling narrative. Its charm lies in its relatability and the subtle magic woven throughout. Recommended for fans of cosy, uplifting stories with a touch of the extraordinary!

8. The Corner Store by The_Outkast

Title: 4/5

The title, The Corner Store, is simple yet intriguing. It evokes a sense of familiarity and charm, creating an expectation of a story grounded in the every day but with potential for depth. While it subtly ties to the narrative's setting, it could be more evocative to reflect the story's emotional weight or suspenseful undertones.

Cover: 3.5/5

The cover is simple and pretty. It relates to the story.

Blurb: 5/5

The blurb is compelling, weaving curiosity and emotional depth. It teases both the romance and the mysterious past of Sophia Grace, setting up high stakes without revealing too much. The relatable protagonist, layered plot, and unanswered questions create a strong hook that invites readers to uncover more.

Mechanics: 18/20

The writing is largely smooth and engaging, with moments of vivid imagery and emotional resonance. A few minor edits could polish occasional stumbles or overly long sentences. The vocabulary enriches the narrative without feeling forced.

Plot: 23/25

The story blends romance, personal growth, and suspense effectively. Axel's and Sophia's evolving dynamic is heartwarming, and the underlying mystery adds depth. The mix of vulnerability and danger is captivating, though pacing around pivotal moments (e.g., Sophia's revelation) might benefit from tighter execution.

Flow & Pacing: 13/15

The narrative flows well, maintaining a balance between tender moments and suspenseful developments. However, some transitions—like the build-up to Sophia's confession—could feel smoother or more impactful.

Character Development: 9/10

Sophia is a relatable, multi-dimensional protagonist, and Axel complements her journey well. The secondary characters could use slightly more depth to enrich the story further.

Creativity & Originality: 4/5

While the story has familiar elements of romance and mystery, the blending of forensic science, a small-town setting, and personal trauma gives it a fresh angle.

Emotions: 8/10

The narrative excels at evoking emotions, from Sophia's guarded pain to the tender moments with Axel. It stirs the heart, though some climactic scenes could delve deeper for even greater impact.

Total: 88.5/100

The Corner Store is a poignant, engaging read that balances romance and suspense beautifully. Its relatable characters and emotional depth leave a lasting impression. Highly recommended for fans of heartfelt, character-driven stories with a touch of intrigue.

9. The Real Gracie Vaccaro by Genisis9

Title: 3 /5

The title is pretty simple. 

Cover: 2/5

The cover design was visually unappealing and did little to reflect the genre or the themes of the book. Instead of enticing me, it left me with doubts about the quality of the story inside. The green spray paint on the main character's face and the green font of the title on the book.

Blurb: 3/5

The blurb, which should have served as an engaging introduction, fell flat. It lacked substance and failed to ignite any curiosity about the plot

It just had a few sentences and seemed more like the summary of the story of a rockstar meeting a demon and stuff doesn't go as planned. A blurb needs to arouse the curiosity in the readers and not give the summary.

Mechanics: 19/20

In terms of mechanics, the writing is polished and eloquent, with a seamless flow that carries the reader effortlessly through the narrative.

No grammatical errors were noticed. Purely perfect grammar as well as the vocabulary skills of the writer are impressive.

Plot: 20/25

The plot is quite simple and since the story is ongoing I am hoping for more plots.

Flow & Pacing: 9 /15

The pace is kind of slow. It needs improvement I guess.

Character Development: 6/10

Gracie. The main character is fine but needs a lot of character development.

The demoness. I like the demoness her character development in each chapter is visible.

Creativity & Originality: 3/5

The story shows flashes of bold creativity but stops short of being truly groundbreaking.

Emotions: 6.5/10

While the story does stir emotions at times, it doesn't consistently reach the depths needed to fully engross the reader in its characters' lives.

Total: 71.5 /100

Well, it's gonna be a mesmerising book if the author uses their utmost creativity through 7 chapters being published. I can't judge it based on whether it's a good book or bad or whether I should recommend it or not. If better and more interesting plots are introduced I'm sure it's gonna be a ground-breaking one!  

🎢∘─Results of Teen Fiction─∘🎢

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🥇First Position

Echo in the Wind
by strawberry1d

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🥈Second Position

Behold! My Difficult Roommate
by Harmoniculus

TIED WITH

The Corner Store
by The_Outkast

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🥉Third Position

Everybody Hates Grey
by  axelle_grace14

TIED WITH

Her purpose

by sulkytae

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Congratulations 🎉 to all winners. Keep up the good work. And to those who didn't win, don't lose hope you will win the next time.

Prizes like certificates, stickers and all others will be given at the end.

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We thank everyone who participated in the Visions of Grandeur Awards.
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Time for a tribute to the Judges.

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Thanks for your great contribution, we couldn't find any words to describe your hard work and good service.
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