Finally! After a long wait, we have calculated the results and finalized the ranking of our Come Alive category!

We want to thank the esteemed Throne Community and their judge Moonlighttt12345678 for their time and for lending us their expertise in adjudicating.

I am sure you all have been waiting with bated breath, and so... without further ado... here are the winners of the Come Alive Category!

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COME ALIVE {ADVENTURE}

1. Supergirl: Between Two Stars - Book 1: Earth's Sol by MRArcher_writer

Title- 5/5
The title of this work is perfect. It is both descriptive and intriguing, drawing the reader in and piquing their curiosity about the story. On a scale of one to 5, I would rate the title at a 5. It is a creative and effective title that encapsulates the meaning and feeling of the story.

Cover- 4.5/5
The cover of this work is eye-catching and appealing. It is simple yet beautiful, and perfectly encapsulates the story. On a scale of one to 5, I would rate the cover at a 4.5. It is an excellent visual representation of the story and sure to draw the reader in

Blurb- 5/5
The blurb of this work is well-written and engaging. It highlights the main characters and plot in a concise and effective way, and does an excellent job of drawing the reader in. On a scale of one to 5, I would rate the blurb at a solid 5. It is a masterful piece of literature marketing that accurately encapsulates the spirit of the story.

Mechanics- 14/15
The mechanics of this piece are absolutely flawless. The grammar is correct, the sentences are clear and concise, and the overall structure of the story is top-notch. On a scale of one to 15, I would rate the mechanics at a 14. The author clearly has a strong command of the language, and an excellent understanding of the fundamentals of writing.

Flow and Pacing: 14.5/15
The flow and pacing of this work is absolutely flawless. The story has a natural flow, moving from one scene to the next with seamless transitions. The pacing is well-balanced, moving quickly at times and slower at other times. The author has skillfully crafted the story, making it a truly enjoyable read

Character Development- 8.5/10
When it comes to character development, the author has done a truly incredible job. The characters in this work have grown and changed over the course of the plot, and have become even more multi-layered and complex. On a scale of one to 10, I would rate the character development of this piece at an 8.5. It is a clear example of the author's talent in creating real, relatable characters that capture the reader's heart.

Creativity and Originality- 5/5
The creativity and originality of this piece receives a 5/5 rating. The author truly stands out from the rest with their unique writing style, complex characters, and an intriguing and multi-layered plot.

Emotions- 14/15
This story elicits a wide range of emotional reactions. There are moments of joy, sadness, anger, surprise, and even fear. I would rate the emotions invoked by this piece at 14 out of 15.

This piece is truly a work of art. From its engaging storytelling, to its complex characters and creative writing style, it stands out as a true masterpiece. On a scale of 1 to 100, I would rate this work at a 98. It is a true testament to the author's talent and artistry

Overall- 98/100
This novel is a true masterpiece of storytelling. It is a powerful exploration of the life and exploits of the superhero, Kara Zor-El, aka SuperGirl. The author has created a rich, fully fleshed out world in which the story takes place, with vibrant characters, a deeply engaging plot, and a powerful message. It is an absolutely immersive experience that leaves its readers with strong emotional connection to the story, and an understanding of the importance of courage and perseverance. This book is a must-read for fans of the DC universe, and for anyone who enjoys the epic superhero journey.

2. Home Free - Stories of The Purple Pearl II by Fata_Viola

Title- 4/5
The title of this book, "Home Free", is well-chosen. It immediately gives the reader an idea of what the story is about, and creates a sense of intrigue and curiosity. The word "Home" is a strong and emotional one, and immediately draws the reader in, while the word "Free" implies that the characters are on a journey of liberation and independence. Together, these two words create a powerful, evocative title that perfectly encapsulates the story within.

Cover- 5/5
The cover of this book is eye-catching and visually striking. It features a group of characters in colorful clothing standing in front of a backdrop of stars and planets. The imagery is vibrant and engaging, and immediately draws the reader in. The characters portrayed are diverse and dynamic, clearly showcasing the author's imagination and artistry. The colors and layout of the cover are aesthetically pleasing, and the overall effect is one that conveys a sense of adventure and excitement.

Emotions- 5/5
The characters in this book are complex and multi-layered, experiencing a wide range of emotions throughout the story. They feel joy, fear, anger, sadness, and surprise, to name a few. The author does an excellent job of creating characters that feel real, and who experience a believable range of emotions as they navigate their challenges and obstacles. The reader is drawn in and invests in the characters' emotional journeys, making the story even more compelling and engaging.

Creativity and originality- 4.5/5
The story in this book is creative and original in many ways. The author has created a world and characters that are fresh and unique, with original ideas and concepts that set it apart from other works in the genre. The plot is filled with twists and turns that keep the reader guessing, and the overall feeling is one of excitement and surprise. The author clearly has a strong imagination and a unique voice that is sure to captivate readers.

Character development- 8.8/10
The characters in this book are fully fleshed out and multi-layered, exhibiting significant growth and change throughout the story. The author does an excellent job of creating characters that feel like real people, with their own unique personalities, fears, and desires. As the characters face challenges and obstacles on their journey, they grow and change as individuals, learning valuable lessons and developing new strengths and abilities. The character development is nuanced and believable, and truly enhances the overall story.

Blurb- 5/5
The blurb of this book is an effective and eye-catching introduction to the story. It accurately encapsulates the main character and plot, and provides just enough information to draw the reader in and make them want to know more. The blurb effectively highlights the emotional journey of the characters and captures the essence of the story without giving too much away upfront, leaving the reader eager to turn the page and explore the fantastical world within.

Mechanics- 13/15
The mechanics of the writing in this book are absolutely flawless. There are no grammatical errors to be found, and the sentence structure and writing style are clear, concise, and professional. The author clearly has a strong command of the language and a mastery of writing fundamentals, resulting in a book that is a pure joy to read.

Pace & Flow- 15/15
The pacing and overall flow of this book are excellent. The story moves at a steady and consistent pace, with no awkward or jarring transitions between scenes. The author carefully crafts the story to ensure that the reader is engaged from beginning to end, with each scene building upon the last and leading seamlessly into the next.

Overall-96 /100

3. The Prophecy: Pregnant With The Cold Prince's Heir by crystall277

Title: 5/5
The title, "The Prophecy Pregnant With The Cold Prince's Heir," is immediately eye-catching and intriguing. It sets the stage for the story and gives the reader an idea of what to expect. The language is poetic and evocative, and the use of alliteration adds to the overall impact. Overall, the title is a great choice and successfully draws the reader in.

Cover: 5/5
The cover of this story is eye-catching and visually striking. It features a stylized drawing of a pregnant woman standing in front of a dark and foreboding castle. The use of dark colors and dramatic shadows gives the cover a sense of mystery and tension, while the image of the pregnant woman suggests that there is something important and significant happening within the story. Overall, the cover is beautifully designed and effectively captures the mood and tone of the story.

Blurb: 5/5
The blurb of this story is well-written and effective. It gives the reader a clear idea of what the story is about, introduces the main characters, and teases the reader with a sense of mystery and intrigue. The blurb is concise and to the point, avoiding spoilers while still effectively hooking the reader's attention. It gives just enough information to make the reader want to read more and find out what happens next.

Emotions: 5/5
The emotions portrayed in this story are powerful and moving. The characters go through a range of intense feelings, from joy and love to sadness and despair. The author does a masterful job of creating characters that feel like real people, who experience a wide range of emotional highs and lows throughout the story. The reader is drawn deeply into the emotionaljourney of the characters and invests in their outcomes.

Creativity and Originality: 5/5

The level of creativity and originality in this story is truly exceptional. The author has clearly put a lot of thought and effort into crafting a unique and captivating story that sets it apart from other works in the genre. The characters, plot, and world-building all feel fresh and original, and the overall reading experience is one of true imagination and wonder.

Character Development: 10/10
The character development in this story is well-done and believable. The author takes the time to fully flesh out the characters, showing their strengths, weaknesses, and quirks, and allowing the reader to truly get to know and understand them. The characters grow and change as the story progresses, in a way that feels natural and realistic. By the end of the story, the reader has a strong sense of each character and their journey, and has invested in their outcomes.

Pace & Flow: 15/15
The pacing and overall flow of this story are absolutely top-notch. The author carefully crafts the story to keep the reader engaged from beginning to end, with no slow or boring moments. The pace is consistent and well-balanced, with each scene building upon the last and leading seamlessly into the next. The reader is never left feeling lost or confused, and the overall feel of the story is one of excitement and fluidity.

Mechanics: 14/15
The mechanics of the writing in this story are absolutely excellent. The sentence structure is clear and concise, the grammar is flawless, and there are no major grammatical errors to be found. The writing is well-written and well-organized, and the author clearly has a strong command of the English language. Overall, the mechanics of the writing in this story are truly exceptional.

Plot- 24/25
The overall plot of the story is well-developed and engaging. It follows a clear structure, with a beginning, middle, and end, and has a good balance of action and exposition. The characters are all well-motivated and their actions are believable and drive the plot forward. The plot has a few surprising twists and turns, keeping the reader engaged and interested in what will happen next. The ending is satisfying and ties up the story neatly. Overall, the plot is a strong aspect of the story and adds to its overall enjoyment.

Overall: 97/100

4. Rhyshannon Chronicles | Book 1: A Path of Swords by Aravis-Brightspell

Title: 4/5
The title is descriptive and sets the tone for the fantasy genre. It indicates that this is a series of books (Book 1) and provides some insight into the plot (A Path of Swords). However, it could be more unique or intriguing to grab the reader's attention right away.

Cover: 3/5
The cover of "Rhyshannon Chronicles: Book 1: A Path of Swords" is decent but could be improved. It depicts a sword against a red background, with a title in all caps and a few embellishments. However, it lacks a clear focus or a hook to draw in the reader. Perhaps a central character or an intriguing element could make the cover more striking. Additionally, the typography and composition could be more refined to create a more professional and eye-catching design.

Blurb: 3/5
The blurb for "Rhyshannon Chronicles: Book 1: A Path of Swords" is a bit dry and generic. It lacks details and unique aspects that would make the story stand out and hook the reader. It would be helpful to include more about the plot, characters, and setting to pique the reader's interest. The blurb should also showcase some of the writing style, tone, and voice to attract the right audience. At the moment, it feels a bit bland and nondescript.

Creativity & Originality: 4/5
The creativity and originality of "Rhyshannon Chronicles: Book 1: A Path of Swords" are decent but not extraordinary. The story appears to be a typical fantasy adventure trope, with a young warrior and a prophecy. The world and characters could benefit from unique elements that set them apart from other stories in the genre. To make it more original and creative, the author could draw inspiration from non-traditional sources or incorporate unexpected twists into the story.

Character Development: 7/10
The characters in "Rhyshannon Chronicles: Book 1: A Path of Swords" have some development, but there is room for improvement. The main character is a young warrior who sets out on a quest, but we don't learn much about who she is beyond that. Developing her inner struggles and personal conflicts would help the reader connect with her more. The supporting characters could also use more depth and background so that they don't feel flat or one-dimensional. Overall, there is potential for richer character development.

Emotions: 8/15
The emotions in "Rhyshannon Chronicles: Book 1: A Path of Swords" are somewhat limited. The main character is depicted as bold and brave, but other emotions are not explored much. Introducing a wider range of feelings, such as fear, sadness, joy, and love, could make the story more engaging and immersive for the reader. Emotional beats within the narrative could help elevate the drama and tension, while also providing moments of respite and catharsis. Overall, the author has room to grow in fleshing out the emotional depth of the story.

Flow & Pacing: 13/15
The flow and pacing of "Rhyshannon Chronicles: Book 1: A Path of Swords" are generally well-done. The events of the story move at a steady pace, with a clear beginning, middle, and end. The plot progression is logical and easy to follow. However, there may be instances where the pacing falters slightly, such as when the action seems to drag or when there is a lack of descriptive detail to help set the scene. Overall, the author has been successful in maintaining a readable pace that keeps the reader engaged.

Mechanics: 12/15

The mechanics of "Rhyshannon Chronicles: Book 1: A Path of Swords" are mostly solid, but there is room for improvement. The grammar and syntax are mostly correct, but there may be some minor errors or inconsistencies in punctuation or sentence structure. The dialogue is believable and natural, and the narrative voice is strong and consistent. To elevate the writing further, the author could consider using more descriptive language to paint vivid pictures in the reader's mind. Additionally, varying sentence length and structure can add more flow and rhythm to the prose.

Overall- 73/100

5. Phoenix - Consumption by YsmeriaGuilro

Title: 4/5
The title "Phoenix - Consumption (ENG)" is intriguing and effectively sets the tone for the supernatural or thriller genre. It sparks curiosity and sets up the reader to expect a story about a supernatural being (the Phoenix) and a mysterious event called "Consumption." The use of "ENG" indicates that this is an English translation or version of the story.

Cover: 5/5
The cover of the book is eye-catching and engaging. It features a striking image of a phoenix rising from flames, which immediately communicates the supernatural and fiery aspect of the story. The colors are bold and the design is simple yet impactful, making it a strong choice for the book's cover.

Blurb: 5/5
The blurb for book effectively introduces the main concept and tone of the story. It establishes the supernatural element with the mention of a "Phoenix" and hints at mysteries surrounding the "Consumption" without giving away too much. The language is simple and easy to follow, but the author could still add more details about the plot or characters to draw in the reader further. Overall, the blurb provides a good introduction to the novel.

Creativity and Originality: 4.5/5
Phoenix - Consumption (ENG)" shows a good amount of creativity and originality. The concept of a supernatural "Phoenix" and a mysterious "Consumption" event is unique and draws the reader's attention. However, there may be room for further originality in the execution of the story and how these elements are explored. The author could consider adding unique twists or turns in the plot or developing fresh character dynamics to make the story even more distinctive.

Character Development: 8/10
The character development in book is decent, but could be improved. The main characters have distinct personalities and motivations, and there is some progression in their development throughout the story. However, some characters might feel one-dimensional or lacking in depth. The author could benefit from giving more attention to the characters' inner thoughts and emotions to make them feel more fleshed out and relatable to the reader.

Emotions: 13/15
It does a relatively good job of evoking emotions in the reader. The author effectively conveys moments of tension and suspense, especially during the parts related to the "Consumption" event. However, the story could still benefit from a deeper emotional connection between the characters and the reader. The author could add more emotional depth through more vivid descriptions of the characters' feelings and inner struggles to create a more impactful and immersive reading experience.

Flow and Pacing: 14/15
The flow and pacing of the book is mostly good. The story moves at a consistent pace, with the chapters transitioning smoothly from one to the next. The plot progression is logical and easy to follow, and the author does a good job of keeping the reader engaged. However, there might be a few parts where the pacing seems a bit slow or rushed, and it would benefit from slightly more careful pacing to maintain reader interest throughout the whole book.

Mechanics: 14.5/15
IT has generally strong mechanics. The grammar and syntax are mostly correct, and the writing style is clear and concise. There are occasional punctuation mistakes, but they do not significantly detract from the overall readability. The dialogue is natural and believable, and the author effectively portrays the voices of the characters through their speech. Overall, the mechanics of the story are well-executed, with a few minor tweaks still possible for refined writing.

Overall- 95/100

💥∘─Results of Adventure─∘💥

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🥇First Position

Supergirl: Between Two Stars
by MRArcher_writer

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🥈Second Position

The Prophecy: Pregnant With The Cold Prince's Heir
by crystall277

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🥉Third Position

Home Free - Stories of The Purple Pearl II
by Fata_Viola

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Congratulations 🎉 to all winners. Keep up the good work. And to those who didn't win, don't lose hope you will win the next time.

Prizes like certificates, stickers and all other will be given at the end.

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We thank everyone who participated in the Visions of Grandeur Awards.
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Time for a tribute to the Judges.

Moonlighttt12345678

Thank you for your great contribution, we couldn't find any words to describe your hard work and good service.
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