Moonstalker's POV

  The next day we got an unexpected visitor. We were just planning to begin our journey when a huge black stallion came onto the cloud. Luna stepped back in shock before stepping forwards and giving him a swift nod. 

  I then understood, this was the Dark Master.

  He was a lot different than I expected. He looked like a magical creation from some crazy wizard.

  He inspected the ranks, nodding as Luna talked to him. This was the only pony who could boss Luna around. Realizing that made me nervous, he'd have to be really powerful if Luna respected him.

Note from the author

I am having tons of fun with this MLP/evil story. Sorry for the short chapters, it's not supposed to be long. I would appreciate helpful feedback. What do you think?

I also recommend Journey of the Spellmasters by  TheBarkingBird