Rework
Hello everyone, I'm going to make a announcement that I actually want everyone to hear.
I'm going to write again Volume 2 of this story. I started to read the story again, comments and I realized how much I screwed up this story, how much potential the story had, and I screwed up big time with small things.
1: Superman. He isn't worthy to be part of the Outlaws. A few things will change, including the existence of Superman. The story is meant to not have relationships to the main heroes, they should've been in a way OC's based on the heroes but they are not. Superman will be replaced completely and the BVS storyline will not happen, I was such a fan of Snyder that I completely forgot Superman and Batman's true friendship. There will be a Superman character but it isn't going to be like Superman. In the sense he won't be the hopeful americano person, he will be more like Hyperion from Marvel... I'll leave the details for the story.
2: The League of Outlaws will happen, but they will be known only as Outlaws. The ZSJL will happen in my own image but that's as far as I will reach to Zack Snyder.
3: Scars don't heal quickly, this character is still scarred by the Xiao Long's. Y/N won't forgive his bloodline that easy, probably he will never be able to.
4: Aryl is a character I wanted to base on Huntress and Black Canary, but I am willing to hear you guys if you want to change our love interest. Like in the real world, not everyone finds its true love at its first try, and if you do, I know someone who is more than a match but of course... it won't happen at the moment, it will take some time and development.
5: If Vol 9 goes as I think it will, then I can end this book about Vol 11.
6: The All Caste and the Entitled will have a big role in one of the few next roles, they had a part to play, a big role but I scrapped that and that's where the story went to shit.
That's about all changes but there's probably going to be more and this story started so strong but in one volume I screwed up, I'm ready to start again.
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