So I started naming off each chapter with the pov characters name

Skydawn and Birchdapple were just hunting together

And now they were returning to camp

And when they entered camp they dropped there prey on the fresh-kill pile

"You are amazing at hunting" Birchdapple said

"Thanks" Skydawn replied

"Hi Skydawn hi Birchdapple" Duskmoon said

"Hi how are you doing" Skydawn asked

"I'm doing good thanks for asking" Duskmoon answered

And Duskmoon walked off

"What do you think the next gathering well be like" Birchdapple asked

"I'm not sure we well just have to wait for the next gathering to find out" Skydawn replied

"Your very cheerful but you also seem to like telling other cats the truth instead of hiding it" Birchdapple said

"I know" Skydawn replied

He is nice to hang out with she thought

"So do you think Duskmoon is a good deputy because I think so" Skydawn asked

"Yeah I think he is a good deputy" Birchdapple answered

She saw Kinkstar climbing up the tall pine

She was a beautiful she-cat but the only thing that ruined how pretty she was is her scar over one eye she could still see out of it but every cat always thought she was half blind

"Skydawn you are beautiful" Birchdapple said

After he said that he blushed

"You don't have to be embarrassed about saying that" Skydawn told Birchdapple

"I know but it's something that cats who want to be mates say" Birchdapple replied

Her mother Sunpelt walked into the camp with some fresh-kill

"Did your hunting trip go well?" Birchdapple asked

"What do think" Sunpelt snapped at him

"He didn't do anything to you why are you snapping at him" Skydawn asked

She dropped her prey on the fresh-kill pile

"Because he asked a dumb question" Sunpelt answered

"Sunpelt you need to be more patient with your clan-mate's" Thunderflame said

"Hey Skydawn do you want to go for a walk?" Birchdapple asked

"Sure" Skydawn answered

And they walked out of camp

"So where to" Skydawn asked

"I know a beautiful part of the territory if you follow me" Birchdapple replied

"Okay then lead the way" Skydawn replied

She froze as she heard the rustle of leafs nearby

"Who's there" she called

And gray tom with black ears came out

"I mean no harm I'm just hunting for me and my sick sister" the tom said

"Skydawn are you coming" Birchdapple called from the bush's

"Your a rogue aren't you" Skydawn asked

"Yeah I guess so but my name is Rock" the tom replied

"I'm Skydawn" Skydawn said

Birchdapple came back

"Who is this and why are they on our territory" Birchdapple asked

"My name is Rock and I didn't realize that this was someone's territory I have been trying to take care of myself and my sick sister" Rock replied

"Oh... does she need help" Birchdapple asked

"Yes she dose I'm not sure how much longer she can last" Rock answered

"And the stars told me that I could find help here" Rock said

Show us to your sister and maybe she can get helped from our medicine cat" Birchdapple said

"Alright follow me" Rock replied

And they followed him

He froze

"You want me to do what?" Rock asked himself

"Join them no I'm Rock from rabbits borrow a moor cat not a pine forest cat" Rock said to himself

"What is wrong Rock" Skydawn asked

He only looked into the distance listening to something

"Alright we well" he finally said

And he shook his head

"The star cats told me that they want me and my sister to join your group" Rock told them

"Wait they speak to you when ever they want" Skydawn asked

He only nodded

And they continued to walk

And they walked into a Bramble den that was outside there territory

She hear the sound of coughing inside

"Honey we have cats who someone who can heal you" Rock called into the den

And a golden she-cat came out of the den

"I have been coughing for so long only our ancestors now how long" the golden she-cat said

"Come on" Birchdapple said

"Why are you being so kind to us?" Rock asked

"Because I have had family members die of sickness before" Birchdapple answered

And they walked into the pine forest

"So did you catch anything" the she-cat asked

"No Honey I didn't your better at hunting in the forests then I'm" Rock answered

"So what's your name because I'm Birchdapple and this is a friend of mine named Skydawn" Birchdapple asked

"I'm Honey" the golden she-cat answered

"I can see that you and Skydawn well become very close in the future" Rock said

And they walked into camp

"Why have you brought rogues into camp" Kinkstar asked from up in the tall pine

Rock stepped from

"I'm Rock and this is my sister Honey she has become very sick and I was hoping you would help" Rock answered

"She is sick" FlowerStripe said

"Kinkstar we can't just leave her to die" FlowerStripe said

He seemed to think about it for a while

"Fine you can stay until she gets better" Kinkstar finally said

"Thank you I'll try and help the best I can well I'm here" Rock replied

And he followed Honey and FlowerStripe into the medicine den

"So what do you want to do now" Skydawn asked

"Why don't we share some prey" Birchdapple suggested and gave Skydawn a small smile

And they walked over to the fresh-kill pile

She grabbed a lizard for them to share

And they sat down shared they prey

"Wait just here I have something for you" Birchdapple said

And he rushed into the warriors den

She barred the bones of the lizard

And he came back with a rose in his mouth

"Here I got this for" Birchdapple said and put the rose on her

"Thank you your very kind" Skydawn replied and smiled

"Oh are you two in love" Duskmoon asked

"Where did you come from" Birchdapple asked

"I just came into camp and saw you giving Skydawn a rose" Duskmoon answered

"It was just a gift" Birchdapple replied