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Firstly, thank you so much lovingpickachu ArchanaPriya2016 itsdevika_sharma adiza1avneil1 for the amazing ideas
Also, im sorry for not replying on inline comments of goodbye chuhi part 2
Will do that soon
Till then, enjoy this update
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It was way past midnight Neil was sitting near the closed balcony of his room-silently starring at the moon & tiny stars in the sky, which included his parents too
It was after ages that he didn't have the tension of waking up early to prepare meals, cleaning the house or doing the dishes
Avni had come as the sunshine in his life he didn't want to loose her friendship at any cost
Neil caressed the photo he was holding- yes, his family photo He saw his reflection in the photo making his eyes blurry
N-agar aaj aap dono hote toh muje ese na jeena padta
Aap dono muje chod ke kyu chale gaye?
Plz wapas aa jao
Meri kismat toh itni kharab h ke aapke paas bhi nahi aa sakta- chacha chachi wont let it happen
Iss torture ki toh muje aadat si hogyi h
Par darr lagta h- kahi avni ko ye sach pata chal gaya& usne ye dosti tod di toh?
Men phir se akela ho jaunga- jaisa bachpan men tha
Aap dono ke baad wo pehli esi ladki h jise mere looks, shy nature ya nerdy behavior se koi problem nahi h-she has accepted my friendship the way i am
Aaj meri life ka itna special day h &aap log hi mere sath nahi ho
Although ab toh ye din bhi ordinary hi hogya h- kab aata h& kab chala jata h- pata hi nahi chalta
Neil again rested his head on the balcony door &didn't realize when he slept in that position
*****
Next morning-
Avni came in neil's room to wake him up
But instead of the bed, he was laying beside the window
She went a little closer& saw him holding a photo frame
She gently removed it from his hold& saw it
A(to herself)-his family photo?
Which means he was missing uncle& aunty
Avni felt bad for him
Suddenly neil woke up
A-good morning
N-good morning
A-chalo fresh hoke aajao- bf is ready
N-ok
A-neil ek baat puchu?
Thodi si personal h
N-haa
A-tum apne parents ko miss karre ho na?
Neil knew he wont be able to lie to her
N-haa
Wo actually its my birthday today
A-arre
Then why didn't you tell me earlier?
We will celebrate na
N-after my parent's death, i never celebrated my birthday
Avni felt bad so she thought of surprising neil
*****
Evening-
When neil returned after dropping neela maa at her friend's home, he was shocked to see all the decorations
A-surprise!!!
Avni screamed, while coming out of the kitchen with cake
Cake-
N-avni...tumne...tumne ye sab kab kia?
A-jab tum maa ko unki friend ke ghar drop karne gaye they
Unhone tumhe wish karne ko bhi bola h bcz wo 1-2 din baad hi wapas aayengi
Sorry men zyada decoration nahi kar payi bcz zyada time cake banane men lag gaya
I hope tumhe pasand aya
On seeing all the arrangements& cake, neil became emotional& happy too
He faced avni& smiled widely
N-i loved it just the way it is
Thank you so much
A-you are most welcome
Ab chalo cake kato
Neil cut the cake& they fed it to eachother
They enjoyed alot& avni made a moustache below neil's nose with the cake
When neil frowned, she gave him a toothy smile& they bursted out laughing
A-arre tumhara gift toh baki h
Wait
Avni went to her room& fetched a wrapped box
She handed over to him
N-isme kya h?
A-khol ke dekhlo
Neil unwrapped it& was shocked to see a smartphone
N-avni ye...
I mean...itna expensive gift...
Ye men...men kese le sakta hu?
I cant take this
A-muje pata h ke tumhara phone old fashioned h& uske liye kisi ne tumhara college men mazaak bhi udaya tha
(Fb shows such sequence-plz imagine on your own bcz i cant see neil getting hurt😿😿😿)
Uss incident ke baad mene socha tha ke koi special din aayega toh tumhe ye gift karungi
Aur dekho- aaj se better day ho bhi kya sakta h
And plz isse galat nazariye se mat dekhna- muje tumhare looks, lifestyle ya kisi cheez ki choice se koi problem nahi h-you are perfect the way you are
Men tumhe ye isliye gift karri hu bcz men apne friend ki insult hote hue nahi dekh sakti
N-par tumhe neela aunty ke pese ese waste nahi karne chahiye
A-aare ye mene maa ki salary se nahi liya h
N(surprised)-toh phir?
A-pichle kuch months men jitne bhi saving kari thi, usse liya h
N-par avni tumne...apni saari savings ese...
A-dekho agar tumne nahi liya na toh men tumse gussa hojaungi (pouting like a kid)
He surrendered in front of her insistance
N-ok fine
I accept this gift
Happy?
A(happily)-very much
Accha tumhare ghar pe koi suitcase h?
N-haa h
par kyu?
A-great
Toh kal tumhare ghar chalte h& saare kapde &important cheeze daal lenge
N-par avni isse toh lagega jese men tumhare ghar shift hi hogya
A-toh kya hua?
Kuch hi time ki toh baat h
Upar se lockdown khulne ke koi signs nazar nahi aare
Aur tumhare chacha chachi wapas nahi aaye h toh ghar men akele kese manage karoge?
N-par neela aunty jab wapas aayengi toh kya sochengi?
A-maa ko men mana lungi
Don't worry
Vese bhi maa really likes you- aaj ke time men tumhare jese ladke bohot kam hote h
Neil smiled& soon they went to sleep
*****
Next day-
They went to Khanna mansion& fetch all of neil's clothes, books& registers
*****
Meanwhile hotel-
Hetal& ketan were having problems staying in the hotel
After lunch-
The waiter came with bill
Ketan pulled out his card when waiter spoke
W-sorry sir but we are only accepting cash-not card
K-but why?
I don't have sufficient cash handy
Call your manager
Manager arrived
M-any problem sir?
K-yes
I want to pay by card but the waiter is refusing
Waiter lowered his gaze in fear
M(to waiter)-go& check other customers
W-ok sir
Waiter left& manager faced ketan
M-sir the waiter is right- we arent accepting card
K-but why?
Everything was going smooth tillysterday& you were accepting transactions by card
M- sir, we have always paid the room service staff& caterers in cash so that they can send some money to their families- especially since lockdown was started& since we cant fetch the money from bank, we are managing by the hotel charges paid by customers
We have also added few clauses as preventive measures for preventing entry of virus
K-and what are they?
M-all the people/ staff who goes out for any purpose, has to go through thermal screening before re-entering the hotel
And if, by any chance, a customer or staff is detected to be positive, the person will be shifted to the top floor- its quarantine centre for customers who cant go back home
So for the moment, plz pay by cash& if yo are gonna fall short of cash, then fetch it from ATM asap
They sighed& paid the bill by cash
*****
Room-
K-tum yahi rukna
Men ATM se pese leke aata hu
Hetal nodded& ketan left
*****
When ketan eached the ATM, he saw a huge queue in front of him
He sighed but stood there
1.5 hr later-
Finally ketan's turn came
When he entered his card& entered the pin, the system showed that it had fallen short of cash so he could only get 1500😂😂😂
He cursed his luck, took the amount, pulled out his card& left
*****
Hotel-
Ketan returned& told hetal what happened
K-now i will see tomorrow
What else can be done
In such less amount, we cant order full meal- prices arent in budget so will have to manage with starters only
H(shocked)-what!
Toh phir tum koi snacks kyu nahi leke aaye?
Sirf starters ke sahare kese bitegi raat?
K-arre ek din kam khaogi toh kuch bigad nahi jayega
Hetal huffed while ketan went to freshen up
When he came out, hetal went
Few mins later-
Aagghhh!!!
Ketan heard hetal's scream from bathroom
He somehow opened the door &saw that hetal was sitting on the floor, holding the foot
K-tum gir gayi kya?
H(sarcastically)-nahi
Bas fresh hone ke baad achanak baithne ka mann kia toh baith gayi
Obviously gir gayi hu
Ab waha khade khade kya dekh rahe ho?
Uthao na muje
Ketan helped her to get up, brought her out of the washroom in bridal style &made her sit on bed
K-haash!
Kitna khaati ho yaar tum?
Shaadi se pehle toh itni bhaari nahi thi
Aaye din dieting start karti ho& 3din baad give up kar deti ho
Aur tumhare legs bhi waxed nahi h(eyeing towards her legs)
Pura din toh kuch nahi karti ghar pe& sara kaam neil se karvati ho
Isse accha hota wax hi kar leti
Jab parlour jaati ho toh itne der tak kya karvati ho??
Mere pese waste hi karti ho
He said everything in flow of the moment, not realising the blunder he had done& dug his own grave😂😂😂
He bit his tongue but it was too late
He slowly turned to face hetal& saw her fuming in anger
H-howww dareee youuu!!
Apne ap ko dekha hai kbhi?
Sharaabi kahi ke!
Kudh to saare paisi sirf peene mai uda dete ho &mere weight ke baare men comment karte ho??
Aur haa- rahi baat wax ki toh muje uska koi shouk nahi hai
Aur aaj men tumhari hi wax karungi
Ruko zara
She grabbed her purse from the side table& take out a veet wax strip
Ketan got scared &was about to run but hetal held his hair& made him sit next to herself, holding him tightly
She then pull up his pants till knee, take a strip &put it on his leg
In the next moment, ketan screamed in extreme pain bcz hetal pulled the strip off harshly
H-ab maza aaya?
Wax karwaya karo *mimicking him**
Aur haa- rahi baat neil se kam karwane ki to tum khud bhi koi kaam nahi karte Aaye bade
Niklo yaha se& jao mere liye medicine leke aao taki hum dinner ke liye neeche ja sake
1500 men proper dinner ka scope nahi h- hum rom service kese afford karenge?
Huh!
Ketan left the room to fetch medicine immediately, getting scared of her anger
(I cant stop my laughter😂😂😂)
*****
Dining hall-
After hetal took painkiller, they somehow reached the hall
Bcz they couldnt afford the main course& had to manage with starters only, hetal was again taunting ketan
She didnt realise when she increased her volume& other people started to gossip
Cus-huh dekho toh in amir logo k chochle
Another Cus-haa
Dikhte toh itne highfi h lekin asliyat toh kuch or hi h (laughs)
Cus-haa (laughs)
Bechara unka pati- kitni shaanti se baat karra h par ye kitna chilla rahi h
Pata nahi kese seh rahe h inko
Another Cus-haa yaar (laughs)
Lekin jab expensive service afford nahi kar pate toh aate hi kyu h ye log?
Cus-show off jo karna hota h inko
Another Cus-haa
Aur dekho toh-kitne shor bhi macha rahe h
Another cust-haa koi manners hi nahi h
Cus-men toh yaha aayi thi shanti se time spend karne& dinner ke liye
Lekin ye log wo karne hi nai de rahe
Another cust-haa yaar
Cus-aree
Ye toh xyz ki shaadi me aye h na ladhke walo ki taraf se?
Another cust-haa haa
Omg ese relatives h unke!
I cant believe
Cus-same here
Kaha wo log or kaha ye log
Inko dekh ke lag raha ki inki koi class hi nahi h
Another cust-by god
Kaise kaise log ko invite diya h
Aur uski saare dekh-kitni gudy& flashy si h
Ek dum aakho ko chubhne wala combination
No sense of fashion at all
Cus-absolutely
Bade aaye they show off karne
Ab popat hogya (laughs)
Another cust-haa (laughs)
Author-aaye!
Hogya popat!!😂😂😂
*****
Pareikh house-
After the party, AvNeil winded up everything& then went to their rooms to sleep
Neil sat on his bed, talking to his parent's photo- thanking them for sending avni in his life- like an angel who removed the loneliness from his life- something he had been experiencing since years
She was the only one who accepted neil the way he was
But unknown to him, this time, avni heard everything
A(to herself)-men tumhre parents ki jagah nahi le sakti par puri koshish karungi unki kami puri kar saku
I promise to fill your life with happiness neil
Ab tum phir kabhi apna birthday pe lonely feel nahi karoge& thats my promise
She soon heard soft snores which meant that neil had slept
She smiled& was about to leave when suddenly she heard neil mumbling something
She at once entered his room& saw.....
Cliffhanger!!😂😂😂
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