𝒫𝑜𝑒𝓉𝓇𝓎 𝑅𝑒𝓈𝓊𝓁𝓉𝓈

🌻 First of all, I would like to congratulate all the participants. I would also like to thank my judges _pretty_pluviophile_ and Rare__Raven for their incredible work.

🌻The results are below.

🌻We are here to improve ourselves, it doesn't matter as long as you have given your best. Every time you do something ask yourself if have given your best. And if the answer is yes. Then you are always the winner. You do not need a person like me to award you. You are always a winner.

🌻Let me be clear, there are 2 sets of works judged by different people, their judging styles might be different. So what I am trying to say is that the winners are not chosen based on their marks. Marks are just a number. The winners are chosen based on their skills and talent.  

🌻Here are the split-ups.

🌻🌻🌻🌻🌻🌻🌻🌻🌻🌻🌻🌻🌻🌻🌻🌻🌻🌻🌻🌻🌻🌻🌻🌻🌻🌻

🌻She Says by @Ridxa_

Cover/Title: 8.5
The flow of Words: 13
Emotions: 10
Grammar/Spellings/Vocabulary: 14
Writing Style: 15
Poetic Devices: 13
Originality: 10
Enjoyment: 10
 Total: 93.5
Review: Overall a very nice collection of poems, I loved the emotions in it. It had a lot of meanings in every line. Your flow of words was a little abrupt sometimes in the middle, you can just improve on that. Also, try to add a little more poetic devices in your poetry, it will make them better. Vocabulary issues, but you will improve. Keep Writing. I really enjoyed your work. Very emotionful poet.

🌻 My poetry by @Afrin_bk

Cover/Title: 6
The flow of words - 12
Grammar/Spelling/Vocabulary- 14
Writing style-12
Poetic devices-13
Emotions- 9
Originality-9
Enjoyment- 8
total: 83/100
Review: Firstly, I would tell you, that you should have a nice and attractive title to your collection, that's the portion where you lost your marks. During judging, the marks allotted for the title and cover is the most scoring for a contestant. Secondly, you have a lot of emotions in your piece and that's really appreciating. Every part deals with something, and I loved that concept. Also, you can improve by adding a little bit more of poetic devices in your pieces. Overall a very nice collection of poems, I loved the emotions in it. It had a lot of meanings in every line. Your flow of words was a little abrupt sometimes in the middle and I look forward that you improve them. Good Work, Keep Writing.

🌻 Rhythmic Journal by @SecretCypher_05
Cover/Title: 8
The flow of words -14
Grammar/Spelling/Vocabulary- 13
Writing style-13
Poetic devices-14
Emotions- 9.5
Originality-9
Enjoyment- 9
total: 90.5 /100
Reviews: Beautifully penned down! I really loved the emotions you added to your collection. I would say that you have added poetic devices like metaphors and similes, which is good, but, try to add other poetic devices as well. It was really meaningful. Your writing style was good, but you know, a little more improvements and it will be perfect. Also, I did like to say, selected a little bit more attractive cover for your poetry, Overall beautifully written, the rhythm was good and the emotions were very touching. Good Work, All the Best for the future.

🌻 Her Sempiternal Beloved by @_JeonK_
Cover/Title: 10
The flow of words -12
Grammar/Spelling/Vocabulary- 12
Writing style-13
Poetic devices-14
Emotions-8
Originality-9
Enjoyment- 9
total: 87/100
Reviews: It's a generally nice poem on a sensitive topic such as breakup and heartache. I personally find the emotions in this luck luster. The feelings are not as pungent as I would expect in the aftermath of a breakup. I love that it is original and therefore does not have many of the quintessential idioms and all. The poem is rich in poetic devices such as rhetoric questions, imagery, repetition to mention but a few. Not everyone is perfect though. I found a few grammatical errors and what I would term as typos for example the use of "dolefyl" instead of doleful. This writer has the potential to soar. You unimaginable talent. Continue writing.

🌻 Tu machali mai Paani by @Navikew
 Cover/Title: 7
The flow of words -11
Grammar/Spelling/Vocabulary- 12
Writing style-12
Poetic devices-13
 Emotions- 9
Originality-9
Enjoyment- 9
 total: 82 /100
 Reviews:First of all, I would point out the title of your poetry. When you write translation poetry, then you should give an appropriate English title as well. Now, coming to the poetry. I think there were few portions where u lost that flow of words since it was a translation from Hindi to English. I liked all the poetic devices and the emotions were good. I would suggest you, have a separate collection of Hindi and English stories, that will be better.Overall beautifully written, the rhythm was good and the emotions were very touching. Good Work, All the Best for the future.

🌻 Blessed with words by  stardust_soul_writes
 Cover/Title: 7/10
 Flow of words: 12/15
 Emotions: 8/10
 Grammar/Spelling/Vocabulary: 9/15
 Writing style: 9/15
Poetic devices: 8/15
 Originality: 6/10
Enjoyment: 6/10
 Total: 65/100
 A beautiful attempt at portraying very strong emotions. The simplicity of the cover, title, and words have their own impact. More usage of poetic devices would have added authenticity. At some points, the verses felt stretched and drawn out, with too many ellipses being used. The flow in the poems was nice, but the poet needs to keep the enjoyment of readers in mind when deciding the length of each poem. Except for these setbacks, it was an enjoyable read. ☺️

🌻 Sixteen letters from the killer by  _adeadpoet_
 Cover/Title: 8/10
 Flow of words: 14/15
Emotions: 10/10
 Grammar/Spelling/Vocabulary: 14/15
Writing style: 15/15
 Poetic devices: 14/15
Originality: 9/10
Enjoyment: 10/10
 Total: 94/100
 The idea behind the book is amazing. Keeps the reader hooked. The cover does justice to the theme of the poems and the choice of picture and fonts are striking. The words strung together display the aesthetic sense of the poet. Presentation was pleasing, care was taken with regard to every small detail. The literary devices used, and the thrill in the poems add to the overall enjoyment. The format of "letters" was also very unique. A very interesting read. ☺️

🌻 Polished Thoughts by 17Mysery
 Cover/Title: 7/10
 Flow of words: 14/15
 Emotions: 10/10
Grammar/Spelling/Vocabulary: 12/15
Writing style: 14/15
 Poetic devices: 12/15
 Originality: 10/10
enjoyment: 8/10
 Total: 87/100
 Beautiful presentation. The flow and choice of words was great. More usage of poetic devices and appropriate punctuation would have enhanced the quality of the writing. The grammar may be looked into more thoroughly. The writing style of the poet is unique and one of a kind, which shows in the twists and turns in the poems. Heartfelt and genuine emotions were portrayed, displaying both strength and vulnerability. Overall, brings along the reader on a lovely journey. ☺️

🌻 Her feelings by  priscillapeitho
 Cover/Title: 9/10
Flow of words: 13/15
Emotions: 9/10
 Grammar/Spelling/Vocabulary: 14/15
 Writing style: 13/15
 Poetic devices: 15/15
 Originality: 9/10
enjoyment: 9/10
 Total: 91/100
 The stunning cover instantly catches the readers' attention. Loved the plethora of emotions depicted through the beautiful words. Effective metaphors were used, and all the literary devices added speciality to the poems. The writer addresses intricate themes through simple wordings. Impeccable rhythm and rhymes. Continuity, brevity, and a few spelling errors may be looked into. All in all, a heartfelt rendition. ☺️

🌻 Those unsaid words by wild_imaginator16
 Cover/Title: 8/10
Flow of words: 12/15
Emotions: 8/10
 Grammar/Spelling/Vocabulary: 13/15
 Writing style: 11/15
Poetic devices: 12/15
 Originality: 7/10
Enjoyment: 7/10
 Total: 78/100
 Minimalistic cover, simplistic use of words. Although some poetic devices were used, more would have been appreciated. A brilliant attempt at penning down various scopes of feelings and emotions. Grammar rules were taken care of, but a little more variety in expression would have made the read more interesting. The themes were dealt with well, but the messages could be conveyed to the reader in a better way. Overall, an excellent creation by the poet. ☺️

🌻🌻🌻🌻🌻🌻🌻🌻🌻🌻🌻🌻🌻🌻🌻🌻🌻🌻🌻🌻🌻🌻🌻🌻🌻

🌻 And now I take the privilege of announcing the winners for Poetry of The Sunflower Awards.

🌻Honourable mention to Her Sempiternal Beloved by @_JeonK_

🌻The third place goes to Her feelings by priscillapeitho

🌻 The second place goes to She Says by @Ridxa_

🌻And the first place goes to Sixteen letters from the killer by _adeadpoet_

Congratulations to all the winners, PM me for your sticker and certificate.

🌻🌻🌻🌻🌻🌻🌻🌻🌻🌻🌻🌻🌻🌻🌻🌻🌻🌻🌻🌻🌻🌻🌻🌻🌻

Bạn đang đọc truyện trên: AzTruyen.Top