OK, if I may make a request outside the story could you do me a favor? I need feedback, like, really bad. I have no idea if I'm doing a good job. Please, comment your opinions and vote on your favorite chapters. All support is appreciated. Thanks for reading this far, and thanks for not bailing with all the 4th wall stuff. In particular, I need feedback on Peter's death scene. However, I do need feedback on everything, so please, tell me what you think. Thank you so much for your support and time and I wish you the best in your own writing endeavors.