You know how things are more graphic then you write it out? Yeah it was more graphic in my head then I actually wrote. Other then the part the girl's foot is missing, and the part that says she was stabbed through the chest. But it wasn't as bad as I thought it would be. I feel like Shay's POV sounded a bit off because it suddenly went from author's view of the story to Shay's point of view so yeah. I am also working on chapter 3. Sorry if it's taking a long time.