Introduction
So, I based this book off a dream I had. The idea was there, the execution was poor.
The romantic subplot is for sure underdeveloped but like... it's there? It's rushed, but it's there. There are also some plot holes and things that just really don't make sense.
I wrote this in middle school, I've tried to edit it before, and I'd say the only way to fix it is to completely start over at phase one with the idea itself. But, at this point, I've decided to leave this story alone so I can look back on it and see my progress from then to now.
Here it is. I hope it amuses you.
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