ASaltyBean-Our Blind And Sweet Love

Title: 3/5

The title isn't very creative, but is rather literal in its meaning. It does however hold relevance to the story and chapter names. It also creates a sense of curiosity about the story.

Description/Blurb: 8/10

The summary is pretty good, it gives exact information about the story and also ends on quite a good quote that the author has come up with and makes the reader want to read the story.

Cover: 3/5

The cover is very simple and quite bare. The font size could have been increased and the cover is missing the author's name. The font style also can be changed, but it does indicate the genre of the story.

Plot: 17/20

The plot is quite original, but not an original tragedy. There is a balance between dialogue and narration and the pace is steady; every chapter does carry the plot forward.

Characterization: 15/20

The characterization wasn't all that bad, the characters were engaging and had depth to them, but a little more work on the characters and they can be fully brought to life on those pages.

Creativity/Originality: 7/10

The plot is original and creative and the characters are quite unique. But the theme and way the author went about the story is common, another tragic love story which isn't written in a well distinguished manner from other books of the same type.

Spelling and Grammar: 11/15

The spelling was fine, but punctuation and grammar disappointed me, it was off by miles. In many places the tenses were wrong and a lot of unnecessary hyphens were used and the flow of writing had a rather choppy grammar.

Enjoyability: 3/5

The book was quite enjoyable, but can definitely be improved on and then it will definitely draw more readers in, it has a lot of potential.

Literary Devices: 3/5

A lot of imagery was used and diction was okay, there weren't metaphors or simile's, but description was well enough for the story.

Description: 3/5

The description was fine; in a few places it could be better. A little more work and it will definitely make the story memorable after having finished the book.

Total: 73/100