TheInnocentThief - Nothing to Lose

Title 5/5

Title is original. It fits with the story. 

Description/Blurb 9/10

The blurb is the beginning of the actual piece. Though it fits perfectly and does make me want to open the book. 

Cover 5/5

The cover is simple and I think it's a perfect fit and gives the reader an idea of where the narrator is. 

Plot 17/20

I think the plot flows the way it needed. There is no dialogue at all, the entire piece is more of an internal monologue.

Characterization 17/20

The narrator feels realistic, as a character. The emotions felt by the character are portrayed well. The character is a tortured soul and it's easy to tell with what the reader is given. 

Creativity/Originality 8/10

The plot is creative and original. I wasn't expecting that ending to be honest. 

Spelling & Grammar 15/15

The prose was easy to read. I did not catch any mistakes. 

Enjoyability 5/5

The story was enjoyable. I would really love to know more about this character/narrator.

Literary Devices 4/5

There were some metaphors and literary devices that made the writing interesting and flow nicely.

Description 4/5

There was a little description here and there. I could visualize the area where the narrator was. 

Total: 89/100