Graphics 3rd Place Winner- avadel
Avadel Designs Graphic Shop II by avadel
Title: 8/10
Quite a long title, but it does stand out. I personally think just Avadel Designs sounds crisper and shorter—catchier too. You could add it is a graphic shop in the description. I would most probably open the book based on this.
Cover 15/20
The cover is not too colorful, but rather monotonous. The diamond, I feel could be slightly flashier and brighter. On a desktop, it is not too easily distinguishable. Overall the cover has a very dark feel to it, and does not draw it to me at first glance. My main issue with the cover is that it is too crowded. There is too much text/ too much happening on it. I highly suggest just having Avadel Designs on it, and putting the Stickers, premades...etc subtitle on top, into the blurb. Right now, the cover looks too busy text wise. I am not sure where to look. The 'Sleek...' is cute and catchy, but again crowds the image. The tiny banner as well. On a desktop, since the letters or so tiny, they start to become blurred. Good choice of font, but the colors are not immediately grabbing either.
Organization 19 /20
Very organized. The rules, payment, forms etc are all clear and explained well. The premade, commercials, deliveries etc are also segregated and the chapters appropriately named. Deliveries are made as prompt as possible and all requesters are kept up on the status of what they are open to cater, and what they are not. I do suggest having one blank chapter just name for example CHAPTER BANNERS and have all the chapters pertaining to that under those, for easy navigation. You did for certain heading but not for others. Other than that, awesome work!
Aesthetics 16/20
For the most part, the graphics delivered are simple, and pleasant to look yet attractive. There were graphics such as Blazing Sun where the title and image didn't not go well with one another. In some graphics there were too much going on (borders and text wise), or the effects were too much. IN most, though you achieved an ideal balance to create a simple yet artistic cover. It pertains to the genre and the color scheme for the most part, go well with one another. There were a couple covers where the title placement could have been better, but overall it was good.
Diversity 17/20
The artists have tried to make each graphic as unique as possible. Different text styles have been used and the images cater to the genre. The artists try to make the delivery as close as possible to the request and they deliver for multiple genres; having both light and dark covers. Each cover tries to be unique, but there were some that look similar to one another, which made me question about the amount of effort put into those. But overall, quite good.
Would I Order From This Shop? 7/10
On initial glance of the cover, I would be skeptical about ordering for I will worry of my cover will look too crowded. But I think the organization of some of your graphics were simple yet very pretty and those would definitely make me reconsider, while others could be better with your artistic capabilities.
Total: 82/100
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