riyamcyriac- Of Suns and Spirits 

Title: 5/5

The title is original, eye-catching, elegant, and simple. It's a "job well done".

Blurb: 9/10

The blurb has excess info—filler information. I would suggest you to take out some of them to make it bolder and enticing. At the second last paragraph there was a block of information that made the blurb lose boldness. It is where you describe the Foundation current. Human trafficking, destructive magic are all filler information. It can add shock factors to readers and pull them in if you exclude that from the blurb and show it on the actual book. The sentence " the area where the worst of soul trade (exclude the other parts) flows freely". I would suggest you to change the last to words to a more straightforward and bolder way. " The words "is free" feel like a bolder way of saying it and it can pull the readers in.

Cover: 5/5

Beautiful cover. I love it. The feeling of sand and blood came to when I saw the girl and the background. A sudden emotion of power surges through me when I saw it. It made me want to stand up and scream—with an unknown reason.

Plot: 20/20

I have no doubts for your beautiful plot. Absolutely beautiful. This dark-fantasy novel of yours is well-thought out, well-written, and the pacing is just right—not too fast, not too slow.

Characterization: 20/20

The score says it all. The characters felt realistic and 3D and stunningly well crafted. 

Creativity/Originality: 10/10

This is such a creative piece of work. I am in love with the plot. I cannot stop thinking about it. It's very original.

Spelling/Grammar: 14/15

There were several places with grammatical errors. It's not really visible but you can do quick proofread over it. They are mostly commas.

Enjoyment: 5/5

I enjoyed it way too much. Your way of story telling is explosive and beautiful. I love your dynamic characters. Your prologue stole my heart.

Literary devices: 5/5

Excellent literary devices. Absolutely no complaints. Tautology, metaphor, simile, and personification are the literary devices I look for, and I saw them in your book. Well done!

Description: 5/5

100% beautiful descriptions. Amazing job. Your unique comparisons and vivid descriptions gave me a world where I can roam around freely. The sounds were in my ears, the world was my world, and the characters were my friends. 

Total: 98/100