challoner-The Crimson Guard 

TITLE: 5/5

The title definitely commands attention. Something that would grab my attention and made me excited to read!

DESCRIPTION/BLURB 10/10

Your description fits beautifully with the story and I found myself excited to read. You managed to give me enough detail without giving away any of the twists. 

COVER 5/5

You have outdone yourself with this cover. All these elements combined made me want to read your book and that's exactly what you want. The colours and the font made for an attractive cover. It's simplistic and professional, something that I would expect to see in my favourite bookstore.

PLOT 15/20

So with this book I had to read all your chapters (mostly because I'm just too curious) to get a feel for the book. But this is a good thing it means your pacing is done so well that I can't help but read to find out more. As for the story itself it's not something I haven't read before but your execution is done so well that it feels like a new story. I can see you put a lot of thought into your plot itself and it's got more than enough to keep me hooked to the end (This is me also asking for you to update since I'll finish this book for sure)

CHARACTERIZATION 19/20

There is nothing I love more than diverse characters. You happen to do this really well. I am rooting for your MC from the first chapter. I love that you have given your characters real human flaws, this makes me relate to them so much more. I honestly enjoyed the dynamic characters that you have created.

CREATIVITY AND ORIGINALITY 8/10

Like I said before it's not that much of an original plot but your execution of the story more than makes up for that. Your distinct voice and tone ads to the magic. I always say clichés are not bad and I happen to love clichés if they are done right!

SPELLING AND GRAMMAR 10/15

Here I think you might need some work. A quick read through and you'll see what I mean. Some places you used were instead of where (one example). Now I wasn't much bothered by it but it does take away from the ultimate feel of the story. Now I think this is more of a typo than an actual mistake but your book could definitely use a good line edit.

ENJOYABILITY 5/5

Full marks on this for sure (please update) I couldn't put it down. I love these finds on wattpad it shows the amount of talent this community has! Keep up the good work.

LITERARY DEVICES 4/5

Like I said you have a distinct voice with the use of the literary devices and it is strong enough to look past the typos! You could make it stronger with a good edit but it didn't deter me from reading at all!

DESCRIPTIONS 4/5

You definitely worked on this one. I loved the fact that I could picture all the characters and even the environment perfectly. I loved the differences you gave your characters in terms of physical features. All this adds to your work and I am happy that I stumbled across it!

TOTAL: 85 /100