Action/Adventure 2nd Place Winner-Cross-Warrior

Cross-Warrior- Midnight

TITLE: 4/5Midnight as a stand-alone title I didn't get until I started reading. Now without giving away spoilers I can say that I totally get it and it fits the plot beautifully.

DESCRIPTION/BLURB: 9/10

So for real, you slayed this. I don't even have a single thing to complain about! It's a beautiful blend between the stories without dishing away the plot.

COVER:5/5

This is so professional and beautiful (Feels like I'm using this word a lot) I can't even get over it. It's stunning truly. I love how her dress blends into the night sky and the ship.

PLOT 20/20

Uhm can I just give you applause because you outdid yourself with this! The Grimm brothers would be seriously proud. Like I thought I would be able to guess the plotline but you made sure that that's impossible (don't get me wrong this is a good thing!) You took two age-old classics and gave them a serious plot makeover! Can someone please call Disney so they can start working on this?

CHARACTERIZATION 19/20

You seriously surprised me with this one. As we all know Cinderella is very timid and soft-spoken and kind. And although you have given some of these traits to Ashlin you made her more real to me than the actual Disney princess. You gave her faults and flaws and I relate so much more to that

CREATIVITY AND ORIGINALITY 9/10

Okay I'm torn on this, it's built on a cliché and has been redone so many times that I questioned whether you could give it a new twist. Remind me to never doubt you because holy heck this was better than both original stories combined. And you made the plot so much deeper with so much more elements and yeah I just love it!

SPELLING AND GRAMMAR 15/15

I could find no error... Seriously can't say more than that.

ENJOYABILITY 5/5

Disney needs to make a movie... Need I say more?

LITERARY DEVICES 5/5

Don't think I didn't see all the foreshadowing and tiny little clues you left (had to read twice but I have no regrets) and it's done in such a way that it blends perfectly with the rest of the story.

DESCRIPTIONS 5/5

I don't even want to know how many times you had to edit this book. Your descriptions are on point and non-distracting. There's a perfect blend between action and descriptions it almost seems effortless.

TOTAL: 96/100

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