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THIRD PLACE🥉

Total: 81/100 

Palingenesis by Deathblade__
Judge:AlexandraLing2000

• Title: 10/10

I really liked the title, because it was short and very beautiful. I can also sense that you did some research looking for a suitable title, which that alone definitely gets a thumbs up.

• Cover: 3/5

The colours and the women are stunning. I can clearly understand that the book is related to wolves, too. However, the text is unclear and I couldn't make out neither your name, nor the title.

• Blurb: 9/10

A wonderful blurb, I believe. I like that we get a glimpse of the two main protagonists and the main theme of the story, without letting on too much. It is minimal, intriguing and well written. A minor suggestion would be to combine the last three paragraphs into one.

• Setting: 6/10

I kinda got a rough understanding of the setting, especially where descriptions addressed it. It made me feel like I had stepped foot into a magical world that was mystifying and vintage, but I was unable to completely be transported into that world, to be immersed. I needed more details, more descriptions, more world building.

• Character and emotions : 7/10

The characters in general were quite interesting and relatable. Their conversations helped me imagine their reactions and feelings, and none of them behaved over-dramatically or unnaturally. The missing points are because I felt like they were a bit one-dimensional: the regressive father, the privileged son and the unappreciated daughter. I appreciated the fact that Hayden has a disorder, which gives us an opportunity to learn how coping with it is like. Nevertheless, she seemed to be constantly angry, like anger was the only emotion she could feel. Valerie was a bit more complicated, but she too lacked some character development, some depth.

• Plot and detail: 17/20

The plot was simple but catchy. Honestly, I like werewolf stories, and the fact that it presents the werewolf world from a different angle, the one of an aspiring female alpha that is casted aside, is quite rare, but not original, I have to admit. I also liked that there are witches and magic too in this world.

• Flow and style: 16/20

I must say that I was a bit confused while reading the prologue, because I could not understand whose POV we were reading. Afterwards, it became easier, fortunately. I would recommend putting up the character's POV. If you aimed for an omniscient 3rd person narration, that choice should be reflected in the writing. The conversations had a good flow, and each chapter provided enough progress in the story. The length of the chapters was perfect. As for the style, it was simple, straightforward without unnecessary details to drag you down, but it was not mind blowing either. I was decent.

• Grammar and Spelling: 9/10

Minor errors in a few chapters which could be resolved with a quick edit. You're almost there!

• Personal Enjoyment: 4/5

I did enjoy the story. It was fast-paced, interesting and enjoyable. Definitely one of the good books found on Wattpad.

Additional Feedback- I am sure there is some talent hidden right there. Like a true diamond, it needs cutting and polishing to shine its true power. Keep up the good work! You've got this!

SECOND PLACE🥈

Total score:95/100

Oath of Steel by AtheinaVismark
Judge:RaelleJonesWrites

• Title: 10/10

I love the title. It's short, memorable, concise and really fits and captures the central idea or plot of the story. I think it's definitely unique and will catch the readers' interest. Overall, the author has created a perfectly appropriate title for their book that also hints at the genre.

• Cover:5/5

From the moment I laid eyes on the cover, it immediately caught my eye. You can probably guess immediately just by solely looking at the cover alone that the genre is fantasy.. The color scheme, the image and the tagline all worked well together to create an amazing cover for the story. I love how the font is easy to read, and how the title is written in gold. It really makes it stand out, in contrast to the dark background.

• Blurb:10/10

I like how the blurb isn't too long and doesn't reveal too much of the plot—this teases the reader just enough to entice them to read the story. It also briefly describes and introduces the main character, states the main conflict, and ends with a question to pique the readers' interest.

• Setting:8/10

Although there was a map included to help with the setting/location, I still felt as though I was a little confused at the beginning. There was a bit too much information about context and lore, which makes it harder for the reader to understand what's happening. However, despite that, the more you read, the more vivid the locations become for the reader. I like how the author gives details such as the sounds and what other characters were doing around the main character in each different location–it brings the world they created to life in the form of descriptive words.

• Character and emotions : 10/10

I think the author did a great job of executing and describing the characters and emotions through detail and dialogue.. They also did an excellent job at showing the emotions through the characters more instead of telling readers how they felt. For instance, in chapter 7: "Rosalynde pulled a fist under the table, she did not like being called a servant, especially by someone who knew nothing about her." This clearly shows readers that Rosalynde was growing irritated or angry without directly stating it. I was able to imagine the character's easily as well, given that the author focused on describing things a person would notice first, such as the face, voice, hair and clothing. I'm also excited to see how things develop between Hector and Rosalynde, since they didn't really seem to trust or know each other when they first met.

• Plot and detail: 19/20

Is it too cliché? What do you think about the plot in general? Does it flow naturally? Can you compare it to a real life situation? Do you feel it has any plot holes? Is it different or confusing?The plot was in no way cliche, or felt like it had any plot holes. Nothing felt rushed or dragged along for too long. I like how the story starts with a funeral, where seemingly everything seems normal,but it's not. And then everything takes an unexpected turn when Rosalynde encounters the Bishop and pushes him over the railing. The author describes the fall by giving descriptions of sounds and details of the body as it descends down the stairs so well that you're able to picture it easily. I also think that the idea of having Rosalynde and Hector work together was an interesting idea, considering the type of personalities they have.

• Flow and style:20/20

The flow of the story is steady. The events and chapters leading up to Rosalynde being chosen as the next Apostle and meeting Hector meeting were not rushed, and everything felt like it flowed naturally. I like how the author's style of writing isn't plain, but creative, fresh, and descriptive, so much that at some points in the story, I felt totally immersed in scenes. There were certain details that really appealed to my senses and caught my attention.

• Grammar and Spelling: 10/10

Are there any grammatical errors or spelling mistakes? Did they mix up their tenses? Is the punctuation correct?There were no noticeable errors or mistakes with grammar and spelling. The structures of sentences were correct, as well as the usage of punctuation. This helped to make each chapter in the story flow smoothly enough for the reader to feel more immersed in the story.

• Personal Enjoyment:3/5

At first, when I began reading, I wasn't really into the story, due to the fact that I was a little confused in the first chapter (as stated prior), but as the story progressed, I started to enjoy it and now I can definitely say this story was an overall good read. And it has so much potential.

FIRST PLACE🥇TIE!🥇

Total score: 97/100

Sinuous Bargain of a Cowardly Prince By eatingher_words
Judge:qmd_books

• Title: 10/10

I love the title, sure it isn't short or anything, but it's length and originality makes it stand out. It somehow briefly explains the plot in a single sentence, the vocabulary used also interests t9he reader to delve into this story just by reading its title.

• Cover: 5/5

I'm pretty sure you changed the cover since the award started and I must say it was an amazing idea. The fonts used are big and legible, the words 'the' and 'of a' which are of no great importance are camouflaged into the background, white on dark green, but we get a clear golden with the rest of the title; I love the shadows used and how it stands out. We also can read the author's name and graphic designer, no trouble there whatsoever. The leaves in the background blend in, and although we don't have any background image, the crown and dagger that have been nicely incorporated do the job of going with the storyline without it being obvious.

• Blurb: 10/10

It's not too long but still enough to get us hooked. We not only get an introduction to Ramiels story, but also the plot, backstory and how he meets Ether in just a couple of sentences, without it being too much or uninteresting. Instead, the words used, the context given and the foreshadowing turn out to be a great mix for us to want to finish the story in one sitting.

• Setting: 9/10

As it happens in most fantasy stories, the setting is important. It gives us the context, the lore and what mythical creatures lie in the tale. This I must say, was excellently executed. I loved finding out about every single part of this universe. We also get detailed descriptions of the setting which make us imagine the world around us, and the words used make us feel like we're inside the novel. Although the setting is almost perfect, we get way deeper descriptions of the characters appearance and with the high level of vocabulary used you could go way further with the Kingdom of Arioches description, since we only get a little when Esther first gets there but I would personally still love more.

• Character and emotions : 9/10

The physical descriptions are vivid, we can completely imagine both Ramiel and Esther. But we also get clear descriptions of the side characters which is a huge plus. Personally I find that we could get some of Ramiels description a bit earlier on, since they are quite spread apart and he's the main character, we only get a 'full' description by chapter 4 when he meets Ether. We do get a clear sense of their personality and they always stay in character. I like that they not only have qualities, but also faults, and they develop along the chapters, and look forward to seeing them get better or worse when you complete the book.

• Plot and detail: 19/20

The plot is unique and without a doubt fantasy. I loved that on top of the fantasy genre we had adventure and romance as sub genres. I love that there is also a point to the story: prove Ramiels value to the king. This keeps the readers on their toes and makes them want to complete the story. Something else I think is admirable about the plot is that you incorporated 'rivalries' with the different species such as alves and mages, this also adds onto the background and setting, although I've decided to put this under plot because it also helps the plot move forward, for example when Ramiel was briefly worried for Esther coming to the castle for her being an elf.

• Flow and style:20/20

The story's strength is by far its vocabulary which allows everything to work out. The words used make the actions take form and we get a lot of detail about every movement which makes the pace have a steady flow. It's amazing. The author also has a specific writing style, we get a lot of figurative language such as similes, metaphors and rhetorical questions which bring the story to life.

• Grammar and Spelling: 10/10

Nothing to add except that it was perfect, continue this way.

• Personal Enjoyment: 5/5

I absolutely loved the story, the plot, characters, flow and everything. Can't wait to read more! I also adored the way you made Esther shyer when they met and her observations about him that made us without a doubt sure that they were going to fall in love. You've done a great job on this book, continue this way. 

FIRST PLACE🥇TIE!

Total score: 97/100

A Realm of Magic and Mayhem by AdrielleReina

Judge: K_Evans89

• Title:10/10

At first I wasn't sure if the title fit until chapter 4, than bang all the mystery to the story hits you. Very interesting and fits the story very well. Chapter 4 provides an intriguing twist in the story, and it is only then that one can fully appreciate the significance of the title.

• Cover:4/5

The cover is nicely done. I would love to see it in another scheme colour; maybe blue? Or a brighter red. Over all the title is clear and goes with the story. The font of the title is easy to read and stands out, while also complimenting the theme of the story.

• Blurb:10/10

The blurb got my attention and made me want to read the story. That alone would get me to read it if I hadn't even seen the cover. The author did an amazing job at it. The blurb had an air of mystery that invited the reader in to explore more, but also provided just enough information about the story to leave readers wanting to know more.

• Setting:10/10

As readers we get perspectives from all characters and from the realm, and in each of those chapters the author has done well to help us envision what is happening around the character as if we are standing there watching it unfold ourselves. The vivid imagery that is so often woven into each chapter truly helps to bring the story alive, and it allows us to more easily connect with the characters, as well as experience their struggles and joys.

• Character and emotions : 10/10

I feel the characters have been made to be one thing or the other which is good. My favorite is Scotty, he is funny, handsome and just overall a hoot to read. Arabella is shown as the shy girl and the author has done very well portraying her self awareness. Lacey is shown to be a two-faced, typical high school mean girl, the author portrayed her so well that I wanted to jump through my screen and give her a piece of my mind.

• Plot and detail:19 /20

I would say what the characters go through is normal and can be seen in any day life scenario. The only thing that can't fit that description is the other realm which again makes the story much more interesting. By contrasting the characters' day-to-day experiences with the supernatural, magical events they encounter in the other realm, the story is given a unique and captivating dynamic.

• Flow and style:20/20

The flow of the story is done well, the author has a true talent for writing. Captivating dialogue and descriptions that draw the reader in and make them feel as though they are part of the story. The author is able to create vivid imagery through their words, painting pictures in the readers' minds that make them feel like they are a part of the story. The characters' emotions are also well portrayed, with readers feeling their joys and sorrows, highs and lows.

• Grammar and Spelling: 9/10

Did they mix up their tenses? Is the punctuation correct? The story is well-crafted and the author demonstrates a good understanding of grammar rules. Although, a few syntax and tense errors can be found.

• Personal Enjoyment:5/5

Did I enjoy the story? YES!!! I absolutely just lost myself in the story. Part of me wished that something like this could actually happen. I was so into the story that I forgot my duties as a mom and allowed my kids up past their bedtime.

Additional Feedback-

To begin, I would like to express my gratitude for the opportunity to review your work. My impression is that you can get away from reality and into this fantastical universe. When I was reading it, I found that I was going so far into my own thoughts. The author has done a fantastic job of creating a universe that is distinct yet quite approachable through their writing. It was a wonderful experience for me to wander around inside the thoughts of the characters. I put myself in their shoes and went along on the ride with them. It was incredibly nicely written, and especially impressive was the first page of the opening chapter. WOW, just wow! It transports you to a place that I never would have guessed I would visit through the written word. The author possesses a remarkable gift, as seen by their ability to write worlds such as these. Their descriptions of the characters, places, and events have a life-like quality to them, that draws readers in and helps create a vivid image in the mind of what is being experienced. There is a beauty to the way they are able to take us on an adventure with them, and it is clear why this author has gained such acclaim.