Rias 3

Now there was a few things I wanted to do with Rias. Originally, I wanted to have this baby and have them married, and then there is the back and forth with readers hating how I made Grayfia as a character in here. 

One thing at a time. Let's start off with the baby. Now when I had the writer's block hit me for two weeks or so I wondered how to carry on the story. I thought making my first OC (or one of them) would be great. Even though I was scared. I had the audience pick a name and it came down to a vote. Raven Gremory was a high majority. A little, adorable Rias. Chiming the word Homewrecker and those who have read The Kids and later on named My Pawn 2, love the way she came out. 

Then comes the wedding. When the boyfriend found out Rias was pregnant of course he fainted. I might if I found out I was going to be a father too. Maybe that's just me. But next day he skipped school to get money to show how much he wants this baby and wants to make it work. Mind you, this is an orphan. That doesn't know who Mom and Dad are. Doesn't know how to parent. He just knows he needs to support. In doing so it all came full circle and Sirzechs wanted some alone time with who would be his future brother-in-law. Asking him about the future and all of it. Making sure what the story was. He found out she was marrying the future ruler. 

Now for the proposal when I think of the giant Gremory mansion in The Underworld I think of this bizarre castle that I am unsure Disney or any British ruler would pull off. Simple because, it is stupid big. We are talking a hundred rooms and then a castle tower that I think of a Rapunzel on steroids height. Rias shows him this because this is part of the tour of the place. This is where she had sleepovers and would talk about stories of how she would find love. Talked about being happy being a wife, having a baby, and living life between here and Earth. With the ring in his pocket and Rias under happy emotions he got down on one knee and proposed. 

At this moment I am thinking this is really what I dreamed of. I don't have the relationship or the money for a ring at the moment. But I am a sucker for romances like this. So I got happy tears in my eyes and write the famous words, "Will you marry me." and I wipe the tears before I hit publish. Another day's work. It was early in my Wattpad days and I still to this day get a little nervous when publishing things like this. If I said I don't call me out on some bullshit. It's reality.

Then finally Grayfia. Who people were highly annoyed, upset, or angry about it. Which they have right to be so. But let me ring it to you as such. You work as a maid, work your ass off, win a position as Queen in the Devil King's house, and then there is the affection of being a wife. Grayfia worked very hard to be where she is at to be Queen to Sirzechs and being his wife. Then a boy walks in and going to have those royal ties for life because he got the Devil King's sister pregnant. Granted it didn't start off this way, but let me elaborate.

Grayfia not just as a maid, but as an in-law cares about Rias. When she found out about the boyfriend it was on of those support pieces. You know when you're a sixteen year old boy and you meet a girl she brings a friend? It is nothing against the guy. It is friend support because men can be scumbags. One. Two, if she gets a bad impression she tells the friend because she has right. How many boys could like Rias? Several. 

Now we get into the gritty stuff. Would you want your girl best friend dating a clueless, unmanly guy? Then thinking of him as a husband and father? Now I am cutting this down the line. I can't recommend it. Especially in high school. The boy becomes the hated one. It is just how it is. I have seen it first hand so many times. Far too many. But after proposing to Rias, the commitment, and just saying to her that he isn't going anywhere, she put her guard down. Then it came down to one final test. The Titty bar. Which, that will be another time.  

What do you want next? 

Strip clubs?

Roseweisse?

Give me a comment on what you want a review on.

-AJ


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