💫ROMANCE RESULTS 💫

So finally Results time ! We congratulate all the winners and participants. You all are awesome !


A special thanks to the judges blooddess_and _sweetgirl123_ for submitting the results so soon and taking their valuable time to judge your books.

So without much delay .

              🌠1st place 🌠

Five more minutes by shhravanii

              🌠2nd place🌠

If I were you by MeganVinotucino

             🌠 3rd place 🌠

Unexpected change with a promise by
Shaunatay

       🌠 Honourable Mention 🌠

        Song of the sky by earlfangs

SCORES OF PARTICIPANTS:

1.Songs of the Sky by earlfangs

Title: 4/5
Cover: 4/5
Blurb: 8/10
Plot: 8/10
Originality: 7/10
Characters: 8/10
Grammar: 8/10
Vocab: 10/10

Writing Style: 7/10
Overall Enjoyment: 8/10
Attraction: 6/10

Total: 78/100

Feedback: I actually really like this story and there seems to be not really any problems like that, except the grammar could be improved. Also, the blurb is a bit vague and could be looked upon.

2. Five More Minutes by shhravanii

Title: 5/5
Cover: 5/5
Blurb: 10/10
Plot: 10/10
Originality: 9/10
Characters: 10/10
Grammar: 9/10
Vocab: 9/10
Writing Style: 10/10
Overall Enjoyment: 9/10
Attraction: 10/10

Total: 96/100

Feedback: This book is totally beautiful! From the plot to the characters to the writing style, everything is just so worth it! Definetly something I'll read!

3. Wrapped Around her Fingers by Leolunah

Title: 5/5
Cover: 5/5
Blurb: 10/10
Plot: 6/10
Originality: 6/10
Characters: 7/10
Grammar: 9/10
Vocab: 8/10
Writing Style: 7/10
Overall Enjoyment: 6/10
Attraction: 6/10

Total: 75/100

Feedback: A well-written book, but I somehow could not get hold of the plot just yet. But it has potential to be developed into something better. Title and the cover are fabulous!

4.A road to love _reedahish

Title: 5/5
Cover: 5/5
Blurb: 5/10
Plot: 6/10
Originality: 6/10
Characters: 8/10
Grammar: 6/10
Vocab: 6/10
Writing Style: 6/10
Overall Enjoyment: 7/10
Attraction: 5/10

Total:65/100

Feedback: This book could be made better with better sentences and grammar, and a bit clear writing style. The plot doesn't seem really original to me, but there is no limit to what an author can do with a story, so this can be potentially a good read!

5.Unexpected change with a promise by Shaunatay

Title: 3/5
Cover: 5/5
Blurb: 7/10
Plot: 8/10
Originality: 8/10
Characters: 10/10
Grammar: 7/10
Vocab: 5/10
Writing Style: 8.5/10
Overall Enjoyment: 9/10
Attraction: 10/10

Total: 80.5/100

Feedback: The blurb is confusing, you manage to get an insight, but it should be improved to make it easier for the readers. The story is really interesting, I'm liking it really! With the grammar and vocabulary improved, this can be such a great story. Although I really wanted some back story of Austin playing around (being a baddie) and Zay's heartbreak, it could help the audience connect more.

6.Fathomless Love of Kabir and Pooja by ThisisIRENE

Title: 2/5
Cover: 2/5
Blurb: 4/10
Plot: 7/10
Originality: 2/10
Characters: 5/10
Grammar: 3/10
Vocab: 3/10
Writing Style: 4/10
Overall Enjoyment: 5/10
Attraction: 4/10

Total: 41/100

Feedback: This story needs to be worked upon a lot, like really a lot. DUe to the poor grammar and writing, the story or the plot is not highlighted here. It is very difficult to read. I'm not being harsh, but I'm just telling the truth.

7. The penchant by FizaKhan3

Title: The penchant. (3)
Cover: Beautiful. 3.5
Blurb: (6.5)
Plot: (6.5)
Originality: 7
Characters: 9
Grammar/punctuation: 6
Vocabulary: 7
Writing style: 6
Overall enjoyment: 8
Attractive power: 9

Total: 71.5/100

Review: The blurb of the story is really short and needs a lot of editing. Try making the blurb more interesting so that it does its job- attract readers. The cover of the book is beautiful and suits the story well. You need to work on your grammar and spellings. Great job!

8. Facade of perfection by Shrya1712

Title: Facade of perfection (4)
Cover: 4
Blurb: 7
Plot: 8
Originality: 8
Characters: 7
Grammar/punctuation: 8.5
Vocabulary: 7
Writing style: 8
Overall enjoyment: 8
Attractive power: 7.5

Total: 73/100

Review: The blurb is beautiful. The title and the cover is up to the mark. The characters are pretty sorted and I like it. The way you write is simple and proper. You can make the plot more interesting and unique. Try making the talks (dialogues) more interesting.

9. Drowning by Eveleft13

Title: Drowning (3.5)
Cover: 2
Blurb: 7
Plot: 8
Originality: 7
Characters: 6

Grammar/punctuation: 8
Vocabulary/spelling: 6
Writing style: 8
Overall enjoyment: 7
Attractive power: 9

Total: 68/100

Review: The blurb and the title are great. The cover could've been better. There are small errors which are needed to be edited carefully. Storyline is gripping. A good read!

10. If I were you by MeganVinotucino

Title: 5

Cover: 9
Blurb:9
Plot:8
Originality: 9
Characters: 6
Grammar/punctuation: 8
Vocabulary/spelling: 7.5
Writing style: 9
Overall enjoyment: 10
Attractive power: 7

Total: 87.5/100

Review: Beautifully written. Delivered amazingly. Simple and snappy start, very attractive. I adore the reverse roles. I love it, good job!

11. Beyond Words - Jacob Diaries by littleasian1998

Title: 3
Cover: 3.5
Blurb: 7
Plot: 7
Originality: 6
Character: 6
Grammar/punctuation: 6
Vocabulary/spelling:6
Writing style: 7
Overall enjoyment: 6
Attractive power: 7

Total: 64.5/100

Review: The title is really long- think of a short one. There aren't a lot of errors but you need to edit your book carefully. Character development is important. Well done!

12. Jaded heart by 17Mysery

Title: 3
Cover:2
Blurb: 6
Plot: 6
Originality: 6

Characters: 8
Grammar/punctuation: 7
Vocab/spelling- 6
Writing style: 7
Overall enjoyment: 6.5
Attractive power: 5.5

Total: 63/100

Review: Improve your writing style. Could've been delivered well. The title sounds interesting but the cover is something you need to work on. Try @feralshadow's graphic shop- the kind of graphics she makes is perfect for your books. Simple and easy to read. Good job!

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