Book: Something's left, papersxpen

Reviewer: RovenaNatasha

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T I T L E: 

Perfect title for a poetry collection. Poems are what remain from what you had. It may be emotions, moments, etc.

B L U R B:

I'm not surprised you actually received the prize for the best blurb. You're a wanderer at heart and so is your poem. It isn't dynamic but it flows and that's power in writing. Loved it.

P O E M S:

It's been so long since I read a poem since I barely have the time anymore and when I read your first poem, I think I found what was missing. Something's left and that's what makes it beautiful. You've clearly said you wanted it to be raw so I'll avoid commenting on your grammar. But even then, you've done such a clear-cut job in expressing your thoughts.

What I like about the poem is that it wasn't about one particular train of thought, rather it was from everywhere. You implied the nature of a human being (although I'm not sure if it was intended.) through your writing. It was a beacon to the reader who doesn't understand. That's work and You did it well.

Your poem ex-best friends, you mentioned it was an unfinished song and it was rhythmic, sure and all good but I thought maybe were you despondent when you wrote it? I feel you were quite detached. As much as it was rhythmical it was quite mechanic.

The third was more pleasant, it was like a teenager who had fallen in love and it was I should say very cute and I was smiling so I think you did what an author/poet can do the best which is evoke emotions.

The poem rainbow is a poem I fell in love with. I saw your struggle. I'm not sure if it was true to you but you made that poem so alive and true it's quite difficult to identify.

P.S was quite a stronghold I should say. Remarkable writing. It was your mind, your heart, your love and you spoke out loud. I like your words, how they change with the theme and it's quite prettily distinguished.

Au revoir is quite the title. This French word is a strong mark-up amongst the English writers. Your poem was equally stunning and the thing is that you have such large intentions and every word you write is like the blood of a soldier. It's your badge, your mark and you've outdone yourself.

I'm compelled to ask how old you are, it would let me see your poems in a new light.

I apologize I haven't read all but I went through quite a few what stood out was your sense of imagery is flattering. I've not quite seen anyone write like you, so determined, so you. I assume that's what makes your poems so loud although your words are so frail and like you've intended every poem is a remnant of something, someone, some time. Impeccable. 

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