Limitless (Cryptic's Choice)

Author --   AdrianaGalea

Cover: It's absolutely stunning, no doubt! 

Blurb:  With people chasing after them, Ashley Summers, a literature professor, and Nick Carter, a self-published author, must embark on an adventure through time to stop Creston Hayes from forever changing the world's future.

Enlisted on a time travel team of four by Callen Enterprises, they hop around the world on historic events which could forever change the world as we know it. Will the team be able to stop Hayes before any serious damage is done? Will life as we know it change? Only Ashley and her team can make sure of that.

Very nice blurb! It's sure to bring in readers. It makes me want to know the answers to those questions you added. Not to mention your blurb is not too short or too long, it's just perfect. 

Chapter 1: What a wonderful introduction! This really pulls the reader in. I see that you put a great amount of work in your introduction making the reader feel like they're actually there. I'm impressed because you describe everything and each scene so perfectly.

I love the dialogues between the characters because everything they do is so vivid and highly explained. Wonderful job.

The chapter overall is wonderful itself. The chapters after the first flow perfectly leading into an amazing plot and concept each time. I found myself hungry for more. You didn't fail to impress me with this story. Amazing work you have here!

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