Did I just say werewolves? "Duh genious. And looks like you got to deal with it." Really dude? Really? At a time like this? You joke around. Wow, thanks. "Anytime kid." Seriouly though, we're about to travel and Charlie shifts. Now I'm dealing with werewolves.

just as said three dirty looking werewolves stepped out of the shadows. They snarled and flashed ttheir fangs. One of them spoke up. "Rouges, you have three seconds to leave this property, or you will regret the day you were born." said a big brown furred one with a rather dangerous tone. "Sorry alpha, we were just passing through. We didn't mean to cross your territory, jus passing through." said Spring rather politely. But my dumb self said"No! We are going to pas through, and we'll be on our way. Now you three need to leave." For a second there, one of them was willing to leave. But a quick snarl of the alpha quickly changesd his mind.

"Dude, are you nuts? Come on kid, use your brain. You're asking for a death wish." Shush, I got this, you're putting negativity in my mind. "you dare challenge the alpha?" asked the wolf. He glared deeply into my eyes. Probably to stare down my soul. I do the same. Noone challenges an alpha, but I can see him slightly wince before he says" Leave! Now! Or you will DIE!" He growled to prove his point. Spring barks furiously. Something's wrong here. At that point a huge red wolf jumps out of nowhere. It's a rouge from neother side of the arguement. He lunges at The alpha and pins him. I tackle him and both the alpha and him are confused.
Time to give them something to really be commenting confused about. Ready Al? "Ready when you ate kid." Let's go. Two minutes later a glorious golden wolf stood before everyone. "What are you?" asked another rogue from the shadows.
"Your worst nightmare." I growled. Before I could do anything a large figure rose from the shadows. I knew it was Charlie.
Somehow, he gained control of his own wolf. Now he's helping fighting the rouges off. They're outnumbered by many. Forced to retreat they run for it. Alpha was having none of that.
He and I managed to
Take one down before the others escaped from our deadly grasps. Good thing too or else they would've been dead.
When dust cleared and stuff Spring was hiding in nearby bushes and Charlie is a werewolf himself. Crazy but cool. "Shift!" Commanded the alpha. "What makes you think I'm your kind?" I ask almost sarcastically.
"Kid, don't play with me or I'll rip you to shreds." responded the alpha rather angrily. What do you think Al?
"Might as well do as he says kid. Besides, I need to rest for a while and I'm starving." Fine, here goes. Why does he want me to shift anyway? Before I could think anything after that "Mate dude. I have a mate!" What? What's a mate?
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