HORROR WINNERS 2019

Thank you all so much for entering! We've had so much fun reading your stories! I've had so much fun reading and commenting on these stories.

I (Shayla) am the judge for this genre, and now all the genres! . If I have you would like your book's scoring because it hasn't placed, please tell me on my personal account: shayla_x_lipyeat

Hopefully, I have included everyones scores. So without further ado, let's get into the winners!!!

_____x___x_____

RUNNERS UP: Birth of a Sin - 36/50
AMCodaMonkey
Creativity: 8/10
Language: 7/10
Plot: 7/10
Cover: 3/5
Summary: 5/5
Character Development: 8/10

Notes:
It was so cool! The plot was very unique and definitely creative. The description was actually fantastic, and really fitted into my criteria. Language techniques and punctuation variation could be improved, but the character development throughout was very clear. I love the idea of angels versus demons, so to put your own twist to it was amazing!

3RD PLACE: Cry for the Devil - 40/50
TheSweedisticHana15
Creativity: 7/10
Language: 9/10
Plot: 8/10
Cover: 4/5
Summary: 5/5
Character Development: 6/10

Notes:
This story was really fun to read! You included a lot of great, advanced language and it was a refreshing tale. I will give some criticism on the punctuation use: could you vary it up a bit more? I'll say that you definitely were revived from that with the Character development. You could tell your character's personality throughout was very determined, but if you summed up their personality in the first chapter, the reader would know exactly how they acted throughout and not have to get surprised at certain character choices, unless relevant to the story. The cover for this story is actually amazing, it's just missing that brief description I think. Other than that, I thoroughly enjoyed this one!

SECOND PLACE: The Clockwork Witch's Curse - 41/50
Hey_its_CC
Creativity: 9/10
Language: 8/10
Plot: 9/10
Cover: 4/5
Summary: 4/5
Character Development: 7/10

Notes:
It does take a little while to get to the main subject of the story: with Angela's curse taking up two chapters, it makes it feel like Angela is the main character, not Cassandra, who is the one doing all the action. I will say, however, that this story is incredibly unique and the creativeness put into it is astounding! The cover could use a brief description, however, and the description itself could have had a bit more info on Cassandra. But I actually really did like this story, I was so well thought out and from what we have so far, I'm looking forward for more to come! So well done!

1ST PLACE: DELUSIONAL - 45/50
XerinaFang
Creativity: 9/10
Language: 10/10
Plot: 10/10
Cover: 3/5
Summary: 5/5
Character Development: 8/10

Notes:
An extremely unique story! The layout and structure of the chapters is very much so intriguing and the plot of the story is (in some way) relatable. Coming through blindness and overcoming those who control you, it gives the reader a sense of motivation too. The description is fantastic, but the font on the cover for me doesn't really fit. But amazing story so far!

THANK YOU TO EVERYONE THAT ENTERED THIS CATEGORY! WE REALLY APPRECIATED IT AND ENJOYED READING ALL THE BOOKS!!! NOW, IF YOU DIDN'T GET YOUR SCORE AND DIDNT PLACE, BUT WOULD LIKE YOUR SCORE AND SOME NOTES, PLEASE CONTACT THE GENRE'S JUDGE (NOTED AT THE TOP)

Bạn đang đọc truyện trên: AzTruyen.Top