Author~> shinhaari

Book~> My Serene Lavender

Status~> Ongoing

~Cover 10/10

The cover looks ethereal and it calms my soul. It's beautiful and quite attractive. The fonts and purple describe the overall theme of the story which I love. It showcases the light, fluffy and cute nature. The purple graphics indicate the lavender scent which played a role in the plot.

It beautifully portrays every single thing in the plot and mentioned in the story which is what I like about it. The light dabs of purple are also a thing to appreciate. I absolutely loved the cover!

~Title 10/10

The title conveys the whole plot, what else do we need in a title? It's attractive, unique and creative in my opinion.

~Description 8/10

At the start of the description, the sentence you wrote was unclear to me. Rephrasing the sentence would be better. I actually had to read it thrice to understand it.

The description was beautifully written as well but after viewing the chapters, I think the author can work and make the description more intriguing. The author could add one of the scenes where Yoongi hugged Y/n. I know the author will do great!

~First Impression 10/10

I had not read many Yoongi fan fiction; this was my first and I could not be more pleased to see how great the writing of the author was. The first chapter was portrayed very beautifully, it made me want to read the whole story. It was one of the best starts. I'd like to appreciate how the author straightly introduced Yoongi, the main character.

The description of the surroundings at the start was amazing. I liked how it started very well, knowing how fewer authors have this art of writing everything in a way.

~Plot 15/15

The plot was filled with sweet moments of Yoongi and Y/n with each other. Their relationship was growing very beautifully and I love how it went. The author had provided a lot of information about Chinese culture, too, which I like as many authors don't go in-depth when they explore a topic.

The peacefulness and the description given in every part are one of the concepts I love. Since the story has ten chapters so far, the plot is too young for me to judge.

The story revolved around Yoongi and Y/n so it's going well. Also, it's far better than what I expected. The story is going great! It's portrayed so well, written so well and developing amazingly!

~Grammer and Punctuation 14/15

So far, there has been no punctuation error. At times, I would find the sentences a bit too long and sometimes I found the sentences which I couldn't understand at all. For example, I had to read thrice the first sentence of the description to understand it.

Next, I would like to ask the author about the spelling of Hoseok's name. I've seen the author write it as "Hoeseok", while I think the correct one is "Hoseok".

~Characters 9/10

The characters have been developed well. I like the relationship between Yoongi and Y/n already. The sweet moments and time they share are shown well.

Hoseok's character is iconic. I like the friendship between both of them as the story goes on. I'll also appreciate it if we get Hoseok's perspective of view in the story more often; as for a side character, I still will like it if he gets two or three POVS.

Giving more insight into the characters of the grandparents of Y/n would help in the development of the story. As I mentioned, the story is young so there might be times when the author could be thinking of adding these in the lateral chapters.

~Pacing 10/10

Everything was neat and clean, it didn't feel too fast or slow. The pace was at its best point. The relationship between Yoongi and Y/n grew perfectly as it should have been. There was nothing in a rush.

~Overview 9/10

"My Serene Lavender" is one the best books, and I don't believe that there are any books which describe the scenes so elegantly as if they are straight out of fantasy.

The main characteristics which made me give it a high score were the writing style, the plot, the description and the sweet moments indicating the growing relationship between both of them.

I'll also appreciate the banners and pictures being used at the start of the chapters, creating a soothing and peaceful environment for me. The author's writing style is so captivating that I doubt there are any authors left who write so well.

Total 95/100

Best of luck on your journey of writing!