Author~> BlueRosyxx

Book~> Promise Me

Status~> Ongoing

~Cover 7/10

The ancient theme of the cover resembles the storyline of the book, creating an antique look that reflects the plot. I love it!

However, the author can improve by using a larger font for the title to make it clearer to the eye.

At first glance, I was unable to read the author's name at the bottom. I suggest using a different type of font, as this one makes the text blurry and unable to view.

~Title 8/10

The story is still unfolding, and I'm unsure whether it's the suitable title for the story. Despite that, I have liked the title, which contrasts with the theme of the book.

Here are a few suggestions if the author has plans on changing it:

'Footprints In The Past'
'The Officer's Heart'
'Love In The Past'

These are just some suggestions. If the author doesn't wants to change the title, it's still great.

~Description 10/10

The description is beautifully written, and I can't express how beautifully the plot is reflected in it. It gives light hints and reflection of the plot, written very precisely. The author has taken every step cautiously to make the story perfect.

~First Impression 10/10

Conveying plot and emotions through the pages of diary was a creative way to start the story. I was also impressed by the usage of many advanced words in the language.

I appreciate the author's efforts in descriptive elements; it was a nice experience reading the book.

~Plot 15/15

The plot is still unfolding, yet the chapters I've read were laid out perfectly and with order. The creatively was already shown in the first chapters, when the author wrote Y/n's perspective in a diary.

I have liked the story from the start.

Additionally, it was filled with pictures, making it more clearer to imagine the scenes, and filled with descriptive words that my mind could form the images.

The plot has been developing impressively so far. I'm interested to see what's going to happen next in the later chapters.

~Grammer and Punctuation 15/15

In the entire story, I've found no errors. I'm very astonished that I could not spot a single mistake! Keep it up, author!

~Characters 10/10

The characters' structures, developments, and emotions were well portrayed and described in the story.

Jisoo's personality and her nature have made a place in my heart. Taehyung and Y/n are well-rounded, relatable and endearing characters which attracts the reader.

I've been liking everything about the story!

~Pacing 10/10

The pace was also at it's right point! It was not too slow or too fast, it all went smoothly. The narrative flowed seamlessly, never feeling rushed or slow.

~Overview 10/10

The story is an absolute masterpiece, woven together with exquisite language and a deep understanding of the human experience.

The narrative is perfect in its pacing, unfolding with a leisurely quality that draws the reader in and refuses to let go. The use of descriptive language is absolutely amazing, with advanced words and phrases that add depth.

Overall, the story is a true delight, a must-read for anyone who loves beautiful prose, memorable characters, and a narrative that will linger in the heart always, in a corner.

Total 95/100

Keep writing from your heart, and your passion will shine through in it!