Round One Critiques
Here are your critiques! Read to the end to see when the information for round two will be published.
Please note that if you changed your cover or blurb in this past week, the reviews we are giving you are likely for the old blurb/cover. We have already seen one example of this, a person who changed their cover at the last second, so their cover critique will, unfortunately, be on their previous cover.
These are our thoughts, written to help you become better writers and/or designers. You are welcome to disagree, but rudeness is not welcome. These entries are not in any particular order either, it was completely random so your placement on this chapter doesn't mean in any way that your entry is worse or better than others.
TBJess - Villainous Ventures
AnniesBooks: Excellent synopsis! There are only a few things I think should be changed. When you say, "When an equally, if not more so, cynical..." try using two en dashes instead of commas. You should also never start a sentence with the word "and", as it looks unprofessional.
CosmicGraphics: I like the colour scheme you have going but I would suggest making it a little lighter so that you can still see what's going because it's a little too dark, you can still have the black but maybe make that smoke and text lighter so you can see the contrast. I would use a more sans serif font for the text without that stroke or whatever that pattern is you have on it. Sometimes less is more and you don't want to over-complicate a font. I'm absolutely unable to read the rest of the text on your cover but be sure to have the author name in the middle.
MartaxSofia: Your colour scheme isn't bad with the font and image itself don't work together, the placement and the size of the text is also quite important, I felt like your subtitle was too close together to be read easily. You should choose your hero on that; on the other hand I liked your synopsis, it was simple but I'd say you need to add a bit of flare to it to make someone desperately want to read your book.
TheWandererMadness - To the Neverland
AnniesBooks: Your synopsis is pretty long, which is great! Many people only have a few sentences, which is never good. I would suggest though that you remove the random exclamatory commentary. Examples of that in your synopsis: "What! But how?" and "Who am I kidding? It's the worst." Another suggestion I have would be to write out the word five, rather than just putting the number. The picture you used for the cover is cute, by the way!
CosmicGraphics: Your cover is very simple and that's a good thing, it looks cute! I would suggest putting a little less shadow on the text. I would also make "to the" the same type of text as the rest and have it much smaller and spaced out a bunch and having "neverland" right under it. You don't need "a novel by", just have the author's name.
MartaxSofia: I really like your cover, it's pretty and simple but doesn't exactly seem to match what the synopsis leads on to and I'd keep the font the same throughout the title. Your synopsis is reasonably big and I'd remove the personal statements like "Who am I kidding?" and "What! But how?". I think you should ought to keep it clean and professional, maybe in the third person and sum it up a notch.
DivineReaderz - Born With Blood
AnniesBooks: Your synopsis is to the point, and explains the story well. Good job! Making it a little longer would be great, but it's not so short right now that it's a must-change. I do suggest changing the format a bit. Try making it into paragraphs, it's a lot smoother to read that way. Also, change the sentences that start with "and" & "but". (:
CosmicGraphics: I absolutely love the picture you used for that cover. I would take off those stickers because they distract from the cover. I would also find a bigger font to take up more space on the cover since you have a simple picture. Putting the author's name in the middle and spreading it out can also help :)
MartaxSofia: despite them letting people know some of what the book is about, I consider the stickers unnecessary and distracting. The cover image itself suits the theme but lacks that wow factor and it's a little plain/basic. When it comes to your synopsis it was nice and straightforward but I'd refrase some parts (mainly how you begin sentences: "but", "and") and edit the spacing (which will make it more pleasant and easy on the eye).
P.S. you forgot to add our tag to your book.
AlyssaAfrica - Perierat
AnniesBooks: I really like the idea for your story! Try making your synopsis longer, adding more detail. You could talk about either the plot, the main character, or both. You should also write out "one fifteenth" rather than saying "1/15" in the synopsis.
CosmicGraphics: I love that image you have, I would make it a little lighter though and make the blue stand out more though so it gives you a pop of colour. I love the "P" in the title but maybe use a different font for the rest of the title such as sans serif. It would also help to have the author name in the middle and a bit spread out.
MartaxSofia: the cover is really nice and well balance, I'm really into the font and the overall look of it but I'd reconsider the placement of your name. However, I'd explain the meaning of the title upfront so readers don't have to google it which makes the appeal fade a bit. Otherwise your entry was great!
Bartholomewthewriter - Renaissance
AnniesBooks: The grammar in your synopsis is all correct, but I would love to see a longer synopsis. You have two sentences, whereas two paragraphs would be much better. Try to add more, if you can! I also wanted to say that I love the picture you used for the cover, but I think you should take the stickers off of it.
CosmicGraphics: I absolutely love that image you have for the cover. I'm unable to read those little scribbles though so I'm not sure if you want those to be readable or not but maybe make them bigger? I would strongly suggest using a sans serif font for your title and author name. Simple fonts for texts are always better, you don't want to over-complicate things. You also don't need to have "by" just have the author name there. I would also take out that sticker because they only take away the shine from your cover.
MartaxSofia: Your synopsis was short which is, sometimes, ideal but in your case it didn't allow us to crave the book, even if it laid the overall idea out on the table. Your cover was suitable for the genre and I like how the sticker is that necessary pop of colour, I'd consider changing the fonts though.
-kyavhill - Society
AnniesBooks: First of all, I adore the quote you have for your synopsis. It's beautiful, and made me add the story to my personal reading list. I do think however that you should add something in after the quote. A paragraph or two about the plot would be excellent.
CosmicGraphics: This cover is actually really beautiful and simple I could barely find anything to critique. I would suggest putting your title at the top and the authors name at the bottom so you have more space for the title. Amazing job!
MartaxSofia: although I wouldn't space it so much, I do really like the quote you used on your synopsis. I'd also add a bit of a summary of the book after it so the readers get a better sense of what it's about. Cover wise, it's simple and different but, in my eyes, the title should be a bit lower so it's not so close to the biggest feature and their brightness doesn't clash.
SunshineLola17 - The Anatomy Of A Broken Heart
AnniesBooks: Honestly, your synopsis is just about perfect! The only thing I can find to advise you on, is to break up the very first sentence if you can. It's a little on the long side, and would probably flow better as two sentences. I love the shattered heart on your cover, but I think you should make the title bigger/easier to read and change the font to something prettier.
CosmicGraphics: I love the simplicity of your cover, it looks very clean. I would find a different font (something simple and sans serif). I would also make the title bigger or thicker in some way to draw more attention to it. It should be thicker than your author's name. I would also take out the sticker because it only takes away from the shine of your cover.
MartaxSofia: I loved your entry! The cover was really good and simple, though you should lower the title a notch (if it's too high it may not look good when it's size is reduced). Your synopsis was as perfect as one can be, to be honest. It really makes people be attracted to your work.
JayceJole - To Rescue a Villain
AnniesBooks: Really great synopsis! Perfect length, and excellent writing. I did notice a few grammar and spelling mistakes though. For instance, you wrote 'imaging' when I am pretty sure you meant 'imagining'. There are also a few places where you forgot to add commas. I'm not a graphics expert, but I do think you should try using a different image for your cover.
CosmicGraphics: I absolutely love how you did your fonts they are very creative so I wouldn't change that. What I would change is your picture, maybe find one with more white space to bring out your text. I would also take off that sash/sticker because it only takes away the shine from your cover.
MartaxSofia: You went with very different fonts for your covers, some of which didn't quite work with the image, which quality was already reduced and a tat blurred, and with each other. I can barely read the subtitle and I'd advice you to go with only one font that pops out. Futhermore, your synopsis has a few mistakes in it and I'd advice some rephrasing, especially so you don't keep repeating the same expressions over and over.
__raqs__ - Collison
AnniesBooks: Try formatting your synopsis a little better. It's separated sentence by sentences, making it look choppy. If you can make all that into two paragraphs, it would look great! Also make sure you fix the sentence, "But she has to kill him." Never start a sentence with but. If you want, you could add that to the previous sentence, separating them with a semicolon. ( This thing ; here)
CosmicGraphics: I like the theme you have going. Your cover looks very dark though maybe try and find a way to adjust the lighting to give more contrast to the girl so she's noticeable. I would also make your title much bigger. You're also missing an author's name.
MartaxSofia: I like the simplicity of the cover, despite thinking you should relocate and enlarge the title; you should also add your (user)name to it. The only things that I found were "wrong" on your synopsis were the large number of paragraphs, which was a little unnecessary, and you shouldn't start that sentence with "but". Otherwise, you're pretty good.
Dampnoodles - Constricted
AnniesBooks: Hello! I love the names for your characters, Reese and Jillian are really great ones. I suggest putting "#594 in Teen Fiction Winner of the Purple Apple Awards" at the very bottom of your synopsis, or at least putting a space between it and the main body of your synopsis. It confused me when I first glanced at it, because they look like they're supposed to be together, which they should not be. Take the word 'and' out of this sentence, "And will they ever morph into something more?" Other than that, your synopsis looks good!
CosmicGraphics: I love the simplicity of your cover you did a good job. I think the only thing I would change about this is finding a higher quality image.
MartaxSofia: I like your cover, although I'd mess around with it's brightness and contrast levels a little so he'd stand out more. I'd separate the ranking and contest win announcement from each other (at least add a coma) and from the synopsis itself. You wrote it nicely and it's a attractive for readers.
Glitterbabe1912 - Detention Club
AnniesBooks: First of all, your cover is super cute! Although I think you should take "a Wattpad novel" off, because it's unnecessary. Your synopsis is just about perfect! It's the perfect length, and it explains the plot great while making me really want to read your book. There are two places that I noticed you forgot to add commas, so once you fix that you'll have a perfect book description. The first of these two places is, "...smoke on school property and..." You should have a comma before 'and'.
CosmicGraphics: I really love the picture for this cover and the way you did your title. Matching the colour of the title with something in the cover looks so pretty if you do it right. The only thing I would change about this is taking out that sticker because it takes the shine from the cover. I wouldn't have "a wattpad novel" on my cover but that's up to you.
MartaxSofia: I like your cover despite thinking you should mess around with the brightness and contrast levels and that the sticker should either be smaller or not there at all. Your synopsis was good, I don't really have much to say about it.
Unknownfamousauthor - Matchmaker
AnniesBooks: Can I just say how in love I am with your cover? It's one of my favourite non scifi or fantasy covers I've seen. For your synopsis, the quote is really aesthetic and I think does tell a lot about what your story will be about, but it's just one sentence. Try adding a small paragraph after your quote to talk about your main character, the "matchmaker".
CosmicGraphics: I absolutely love the picture on your cover and the gradient of your font. The only thing I would change as putting more space between the title because it's a little hard to read, I would also make it much bigger.
MartaxSofia: I really liked your cover, it was really beautiful, but I didn't see your username on it and despite knowing there was some text on the top I couldn't read it. I think the synopsis you provided upfront was a little too short and that you didn't need the quotation marks for it.
Twinning94 - Mirror Mirror
AnniesBooks: Pretty great synopsis! I do suggest though that you fix the sentence that starts with 'and' in the first paragraph. Other than that I don't have much advice for your synopsis. You could try a cover with a more professional, bigger font? Rusul ( CosmicGraphics ) will have advice in that area (:
CosmicGraphics: For this cover I would suggest finding a picture that fit the dimensions of cover sizes better, I would also make the font much bigger and I would use a simple sans serif font. Maybe you could have your title be 2 lines so you could make it even bigger. I would also have the author's name in the middle and spaced out. Lastly, I would take off that sticker because it only takes away the shine from your cover.
MartaxSofia: I think you should work on your cover or ask someone to do it (maybe one of the designers we work with) because I feel like you need some help in that department. I thought your synopsis was really nice and interesting and the length was justified by the content.
Hectaemma - Glass Crown
AnniesBooks: Can I just say how excited I was to read that your story takes place (at least partially) in Toronto? Most of the Writer Awards members are Canadian, so it's really cool for us to see a book that takes place in Canada, especially since the vast majority or books all take place in our downstairs neighbour, the US. I think you should change "Things change. Her life becomes better" to "Things change; her life becomes better." Also try to fix the very last sentence, which starts with "but" and shouldn't.
CosmicGraphics: This cover is actually really good so I don't have much to critique, as it is made by a good designer. I would just make the title bigger so it's easier to read.
MartaxSofia: The one thing I can point out in your cover is that you should add a darker tone somewhere to contrast with the incredibly bright bubble you have in it. I think you have some unnecessary separation between sentences and the content was right.
hanuman1702 - Felicity
AnniesBooks: Your synopsis is really interesting! It does look like your story is going to be good. There are just a few mistakes you need to address. You frequently use dashes, and you should be using en dashes in those places. You should also fix, "...sense of humour and Emma..." to "...sense of humour, and Emma..."
CosmicGraphics: The picture and font is really pretty for this cover. I would go a little easier on the bevel for the font and same goes for the shadow on those white ribbons. Other than that, I would take out those stickers because they only take away from the cover.
MartaxSofia: I really like your cover, even though I feel like the stickers was cluttering it too much and that the castle or the title should be the hero instead of them. I like your synopsis but it seems too condensed especially with all the information bellow it, maybe you should put the link to the review on the inside on the initial author's note.
Alexa781 - The Journey Taken Together
AnniesBooks: I like your synopsis! It's simple and well written. No major grammar mistakes, which is excellent. I do suggest that you try putting some of those little paragraphs together to make two or three bigger paragraphs.
CosmicGraphics: This cover is super pretty oh my gosh. The only thing I would change is spacing out the author's name.
MartaxSofia: Cover wise, I'd blur the image a bit so the title steals the crown like I feel you were try to make it do but it's a cute photo but perhaps you should inline the title. I like your synopsis and your spacing was appropriate; I couldn't find anything wrong with it.
KittyOnKeyboard - Z Squared
AnniesBooks: The little excerpt you have for your synopsis is really cute. I definitely do want to read your story to see more interactions between Zander and Zandra. I do not think you need to add all the stuff after that excerpt. Especially "Z X Z= Z Squared" because that's already obvious enough from everything else, and really takes away from how great the rest of your blurb is.
CosmicGraphics: The picture you have for this is cute! It's blocking some of the title though, I would suggest maybe making that picture smaller so it's not taking up too much space from the title or maybe putting the title higher up. I would also take out the stickers because it takes away from the cover. If that is your series title on the bottom right corner, I would suggest having it in the middle untitled. I would also take out "Z X Z = Z Squared" from your synopsis, it's really unnecessary and doesn't look great.
MartaxSofia: I don't really like your cover, I think it needs some work. Without any prior knowledge regarding your book, I don't see how the girl fits in and it's too yellow with the circle and stickers and one of the main parts, the title is covered up in a non-flattering way. I thought your synopsis was too long, unnecessarily long, you don't need that much text after the initial joke and their descriptions were a little pointless there. The ZxZ= Z squared was cute though.
WonderlandWriter - Another Day
AnniesBooks: First of all, I'm in love with the image you have for your cover. So pretty. Your synopsis is also almost perfect, you just have a few issues with tense. Excited to read your story in round two!
CosmicGraphics: Oh my gosh I am in love with this image, good job to whoever made it! The only thing I would change is putting the title closer together.
MartaxSofia: I'm really into your cover, even if it's not usually what I'd go for I really like it and think it works great. Your synopsis was well written and interesting. I felt like it was a creative idea and, sorry for the comparison, a different take on "The Timekeeper" which is somewhat like your tattoo idea but for finding true love. Good job!
MayaSquared57 - Forest Hideaway
AnniesBooks: Good length for a synopsis! There are just some mistakes that you should fix. For example, you wrote "eachother" which is not a word. It should be "each other" with a space between the two words. You also should not capitalize the first letters in "forest hideout" because there is no need to do so. (With the exception of the title, of course) I would also change a few things on your cover, which Rusul will mention. (:
CosmicGraphics: The image for this cover is pretty. What you need to work on is your text. Try a sans serif font and adding a bit of shadow behind the text so that you can see it better. You also don't need "a novel by", just have the author's name.
MartaxSofia: I'd recommend changing your cover: the image is a little too colourful and taken too literally, the font was that beautiful and didn't go that well with it and the author's user was too small contrarily to the title which was a little too big (you shouldn't make it touch the sides of the cover). Some of what you described on your synopsis is pretty common so, if you worked on it, you could add that extra bit that makes everyone want to read it and not think it's cliché.
Closerlook - Call Me Karma
AnniesBooks: Your synopsis is interesting! It sounds like an original book idea, which is great. I am super interested in reading the story. I do see a mistake here though, "The popular ones have way too much power and control. And they keep doing what they want because they've never known what is like to bite the dust." Never start a sentence with and. Instead, try putting these two sentence into one. I also suggest using a different picture for your cover. I does seem to fit the plot of your story, but a cover with a girl sticking the camera the middle finger can be really off putting to a lot of people. Personally, I wouldn't vote on your story while reading it, even if I loved the book, because I don't want my followers to see that kind of image. That's simply my opinion though, and you won't lose points in the contest if you keep the same picture. (:
CosmicGraphics: I like your creativity with this image but it might be better using a more appropriate one so that you can reach an even bigger audience. I would suggest using a simple and bold Sans Serif font and changing the colour to either white or black. You don't need to say "by", just have the author's name and put it in the middle and space it out. I would also take out the stickers because they only take away from the cover.
MartaxSofia: I'm not particularly fond of your cover, I don't like the font that much nor do I think the cover is appropriate or the best and the stickers aren't always the best option to go with. I think you have one or two little punctuation errors and missing prepositions and you need to give out more emotion on it so it's not so bland. Make it stand out, make her statement and promise feel fierce and like a goal that she won't pursuing until reaching it. The idea behind your book was pretty good, it's a lot of people's reality.
piyobear88 - The Dance of Perseverance
AnniesBooks: I noticed that you say in your synopsis that the synopsis is inside, which is beyond confusing. Do you mean that you have a more in depth synopsis inside the book? If so, use it where the synopsis should be! You'll get more readers with a good synopsis. (: The little bit you do have there though is great, and it seems that your story will be interesting. I like how your main character is Japanese, a culture not always shown (or properly shown) in pop culture.
CosmicGraphics: I don't have much to say about your cover because it was pretty well done, good job! Although, it doesn't seem to match your synopsis and you might need to pay attention to that.
MartaxSofia: I don't quite see how teddy bears fit in the story and I fear that may turn off some of your potential readers. Your synopsis isn't bad but you should polish it up and correct a few minor mistakes. Also, I think you should have gone with a bigger bang, making the second and last paragraph pop more, which would attract the reader more.
pixles - This is from Matilda
AnniesBooks: I like the idea behind your synopsis, it's very intriguing. I think you should combine the first two paragraphs of your synopsis together to make one slightly larger paragraph, and then expand on the third paragraph. (Which would become the second paragraph)
CosmicGraphics: The image you have is good, there's enough dark space to have a good showing title, What I would change is making the "This is from" all in capitals and making the colour completely white so it's easier to see. I also noticed that you're missing the author's name.
MartaxSofia: I really like your cover, its colour scheme and how it's simplicity really works in its favour. However, I'd make the first three words of the title more noticeable so you can read them when the book cover's size is reduced too. I really like your synopsis, I can't see anything wrong with it. I believe you did a good job with it!
_CutieChick_ - The Failure
AnniesBooks: Your synopsis certainly was not a failure. Hehehe... See what I did there? Anywhoooo I really did enjoy your synopsis. I liked the emotion you were able to add to such a short piece of writing. There were a few mistakes though. For instance, you made the unfortunately common mistake of starting a sentence with the word 'but'. If you can fix that, and try combining some sentences into paragraphs, you'll have a perfect synopsis.
CosmicGraphics: This cover is really beautiful and simple, I wouldn't change too much. The title can be a bit hard to read though so maybe having a font that's a little easier to read can help, it can still be cursive but not too much. Making the title bigger can also help. You also don't need "a novella by" just the author's name is fine, also make that bigger :)
MartaxSofia: I'm extremely fond of your cover despite the fact that we can't really read what written bellow 'failure'; the picture was well chosen and the font makes it feel like it's someone's handwriting and that's it's more of a confession, an unpleasant one. I wouldn't recommend separating all of the 'he could be's nor starting sentences (and paragraphs) with 'but' and 'because'. Otherwise, it was good.
Alicia20m - The Taste of Italy
AnniesBooks: Your synopsis a very, very, short. Only two sentences is not enough for a reader to decide if they want to read your story or not. I would love to see you expand on it. You also started the second sentence with 'but' which is usually considered improper grammar.
CosmicGraphics: The image you have there is really cute and simple. I would put more space between the title because it's clashing a bit. The fancy "I" is cool but I think it would work better if "taly" was smaller. I would also have the entire title a little lower.
MartaxSofia: I really like your cover, I think it works nicely but your name is a little too small and feels like it was shoved in the bottom. Your synopsis was nice and simple but I'd recommend a bit of rephrasing to make it pop some more and add some more impact on the extraordinary event that meeting Dante was and how it impacted her life.
BraveSexyStrong - Beneath Our Lies
AnniesBooks: Great synopsis! I do suggest you change the slash in "Art Director/Professional Hacker" to an "and" or the and sign. Excited to read your story.
CosmicGraphics: Your image is stunning and I really love the birds too. I would add a slight white outer glow to the title so that's easier to see, and I would also make it bigger.
MartaxSofia: I'd suggest you move the title in your cover a little upward and mess with the brightness and contrast levels of it to make it look like it's a higher quality and well put together image. I think your synopsis works and has a certain mystery to it which is essential in your storyline.
MsSarcasual - Red Hair, Black Soul
AnniesBooks: Amazing synopsis! It's funny and tells a lot about what the plot of your story is. I did find a few mistakes, the most critical being ", - completely unintended, -" you don't need a dash AND a comma. Pick one or the other.
CosmicGraphics: The image you have is really good and your font is good too. I like the creativity with changing colours but it's really hard to read so you might have to make it all white including the author's name :/
MartaxSofia: I feel like your book cover was taken too literally, you should have, if you want to keep the red hair theme, gone with a girl whose hair is of that colour. Finding someone with an appealing look that transmits what you want to share would be ideal. Your synopsis felt a bit too long, I think you got a bit too caught up with her background story and diverted from the main goal: talking about someone's fall.
Aisling_Page - Room 32
AnniesBooks: Good synopsis! You story sounds very interesting and original. The only errors I found are with capitalization, which you can easily fix with a quick glance over your synopsis. I suggest taking the sticker off of your cover; stickers almost always make a cover less attractive.
CosmicGraphics: The image you have is really cool and adventurous, I also love the slight transparent white box it's really creative. I would find a different font though, find something simple and sans serif. I would also take off the sticker, it only takes away from your cover.
MartaxSofia: There are only two things with your synopsis I'd like to point out: I felt like the separating of the last sentence into two paragraphs, despite being there for emphasis and suspense, was unnecessary and that I'd enumerate what went wrong one thing immediately after the other and not so separated. I don't see what your cover really has to do with the title and I don't think the sticker flattered it, instead it stole the spotlight from the title...
letusfallup - Between Water and Sky
AnniesBooks: Your story honestly sounds amazing. I am very excited to read it. I think it would be best if you could move "An adventurous utopia-turned-distopia in which there has never been war; until now. Features pirates, PTSD, and an unlikely love story. Updates: every Monday 10 a.m. PT" to the bottom, rather than having it as the first thing you read. (You also spelled dystopia incorrectly)
CosmicGraphics: I love your creativity and you have a great idea for a cover. I would find a different image though or try to re-create it again because it doesn't seem to be working very well, the dimensions aren't working out. I would find a sans serif font for "water and sky" and making the title all the same colour. I would also put the author's name in the middle and space it out. Also, take out the stickers because they only take away from the cover.
MartaxSofia: I think you should work on your cover a bit and perhaps make the stickers black and white, if you wish to keep them, so the greens in the image are under the spotlight and I felt like the title wasn't that well placed and the images weren't that high quality and looked a little pixelated. About your synopsis, it was interesting and well written. However, you did write Earth without the capital 'E' and the information you added on when the updates are should be after the synopsis itself so it's not... in the way, I suppose.
LunarsFantasies - The Runaway
AnniesBooks: Your synopsis sounds so good. There is only one mistake I found. Where you say "Were her hopes and dreams to see the world worth all her attempt to escape, or will it all crumble before her very eyes." You should end that with a question mark, not a period. Also I believe you should and an S at the end of 'attempt'.
CosmicGraphics: This font looks really good, amazing job! I also love that symbol, it's well done. Your image is really cool too but I would find an image at a higher quality. Try to find an image much like the one you already have because it really does look good, especially the lighting.
MartaxSofia: I really like your cover but I think it would work a bit better if you didn't have the swirls between the title and the cover image itself. The font was nice and dynamic, it was also well placed and worked with your book's genre. I found your synopsis amazing, well written and quite interesting. It lures people in and makes then really want to read it!
If you are not a designer and you would like to follow our advice, please feel free to request a cover from the designers we work with!
To all the people who have stickers on their covers, and would like to display them without them ruining their covers, add them as media in your actual story! (:
See all you wonderful people in round two! Which will be posted by April 15 <3
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