Chapter 1




Olven......when will you finally become stronger!? You are still a mere whelp.....despite all your training......all your meditation.......effort and study.....yet you still cannot do anything.......what are you to do with yourself? What kind of a shameful saiyan are you!? If you are this weak, how will you ever survive the horrors this universe has to offer? The memory brushes over Olven like water, one of the many "pep talks" he has given himself over the years.....even as a child he understood how the world worked. You eat,sleep, use the restroom, slaughter, and make money one way or another. That or die, and even then death would still hunt you down like the vast and hungry thing it was. Always taking, always there at the back of his mind, knowing constantly that it could be a mere second...... But that did not stop him from trying to give death a hell of a hard time claiming him. Oh and for reference, for now on Italics will be for Olven's thoughts. And if i am to address something inside the story I'll use (parenthesis/ brackets]}

Olven sighed, a heavy and emotionally tainted sigh. His wandering mind and emotions toiling in the sleepless night he was enduring. Even through all his time training alone,of which loneliness was part of the emotional mishmash, he still felt weak. His race, saiyans, were supposed to be elite warriors. Olven sure didn't feel that way, he felt useless and as if his hard work were for naught. Maybe....maybe I do need someone to spar with......there is only so much something inanimate can offer in the way of training and only so much exercise can do. Some real combat would do wonders.....but where and whom! I don't think any locals would work.....maybe another saiyan....I hear a lot are on planet Sadala......then it is decided. I shall find someone to spar with. I will beat them though! No one shall surpass me! Even at the cost of causing bodily harm! I will be the best! I AM the best! I shan't lose! I'll win and win and win! Fight every battle like its my last! I cannot fail, the disgrace would kill me. Hell, just thinking about losing almost made Olven berserk. He wasn't so sure he would sleep at all tonight. Instead he would remember his first time transforming. Oh how good it had felt! The rush, the excitement, the power! Oh it had filled him with a glee like none other! Oh he could hardly contain himself now! Oh how he wanted to rush off the planet Sadala and fight everyone there right this instant! Watch out Universe 6, I'm a Olven and I'm coming! Well, if I'm to be battle ready I'll need to rest. ,aye some herbs would do me good. Thus Olven grabbed some herbs from his pouch and sorted through them, looking for the herb he sought. After about 30 seconds of searching, he reveled in the small victory brought forth by the white and flowery herb his hand now held up. After using a stone to grind the herd to a powder and adding it to some boiled water from the local creek made a tea like drink from it. He grabbed the small bowl of liquid and downed it, the slightly bitter taste filling his mouth. Afterwards he laid his head down upon the material that was his bed, closed his eyes, and fell asleep. The next morn, the rays of sunlight dawned upon his form which woke him from slumber. He slowly opened his eyes and started the day with a bit of a wash from the creek. The wash helping to energize and motivate himself for today's festivities. After the cleansing, Olven began packing his few belongings up to travel to Sadala. Basic food, water, his tent, bed, lucky breastplate and boots, and finally his most important possession of all. A small token from his family. The small box containing pictures and a few tiny trinkets. His fathers special ring, a set of his mothers ear rings and his brothers old necklace of silver. He packed all this in his bag and strapped it onto himself. Not forgetting to grab his coin pouch and securing it to his waist as he set off for finding transportation. The nearest town had a few people with space ships that he noticed as he floated down.

"Excuse me, but could you tell me whom owns that ship?" Olven then pointed to a red, disk shaped ship with yellow accents.

"Actually, that would be me kid. Whatcha need?" The....alien wearing a dark cloak and mask asked Olven.

"I need a ride actually. How much to get to planet Sadala?"

"Sadala? I'd say....how about three coins? A light fee for a young lad like yourself eh?"

"Whelp, thanks I guess. Also, I'm not completely a kid. Sure I'm young but I'm no child heh."

"Whatever flies your ship pal. Anyways I just got loaded up with goods and I'd be passing Sadala anyhow so not like there is any reason to charge extra. Anyhow hop aboard!" The alien turned away and boarded his ship, ushering Olven along with him. Once aboard Olven handed him the three coins and sat down, staring at his feet and feeling the ship lift off after a few moments. The silence between the two strangers like a stifling air.


"So, why Sadala?"

"Huh?" Olven looks up towards the man, curious at the man's own curiosity.

"Why did you want to go to Sadala?"

"Oh, I hear there are more saiyans there than there are here. Sounded like the place for me too."

"Humph, I wasn't sure if you were a saiyan or not. But I shan't pry too much, just merely a tad curious. Word of advice though. Watch out for Caulifla's gang, bunch of punks they are!"

"Oh? Duly noted."

"The Sadala force is too scared to do something about it. Right awful rubbish it is."

"Well, maybe someone can set them straight. Plus, why would they be afraid?"

"That Caulifla is rumored to be the most powerful saiyan out there so the Sadala force is too scared to act." Olven smiles at hearing this....Caulifla is the most powerful. He wouldn't fight her outright. Maybe make a name for himself and make her challenge him instead!


"So how long until we get there?"


"About a couple minutes, don't sweat it." The minutes seemed to stretch into hours, but that was because of how excited Olven was. Finally, a planet came into view, and the ship zipped onto the plains and hills below.

"Whooah...."

"Never seen Sadala before? Heh, always awing that first time. Anyhow you're here and if you would please exit my spaceship!" The doors outside opened and Olven raced out excitedly, searching wildly for signs of life. The first thing coming into view was a animal of some sort. It resembled a bird of some sort but rather...dinosauric in nature. Olven merely slew a small ki blast at it, the projectile hitting its target and killing it. Everything turned to ash and blew away with the wind, Olven had hoped maybe he could attract someone's attention by this gesture but none seemed to take the bait. So, Olven being Olven, Olven unpacked his things and set up camp near the forest. Wood for a fire was an easy task and soon one blazed to keep our saiyan hero (or villain!!, I'll take suggestions heh.) warm. He then sat down and proceeded to listen whilst expanding his consciousness to search for any significant Ki signatures. None pervaded his sense so he decided to rely upon his other senses for now. He opened his eyes and stared at the sky, the new colors and starts mixing. Olven let out a breath of contentment and continued to stared blankly. His mind imagining the sort of people he'd meet and beat! The food he'd taste! The sights he'd see! The new friends he'd make! The anticipation overwhelmed him to the point of making him jump and and exit the tent, jump into the air and fly above the ground. The air whisking by him as he took in the sights. The place seemed so vibrant and alive compared to his quiet and somber planet! The creatures that bumbled about, the plants so green and the flowers, so many different colors! Olven felt free and happy with this new planet, something he hadn't thought of experiencing nor had time to. He had been so busy in his mind that he had hardly heard a door opening from a house below him, the occupant looking toward the sky and seeing Olven floating about, but Olven paid no mind to the stranger as Olven was too busy being happy and enjoying himself.  I had better circle back, I shouldn't stray too far from my camp for today. I would be a fool to get lost here. So our hero turned around to fly back, remembering the hill shaped oddly like a face being nearby his encampment. The fire smoldered a bit as he landed next to his tent. He immediately rushed inside and checked for his belongings, finding them right where he had left them. He would have been too furious for comprehension had something happened to them, both at who took them and at himself. A sigh of relief escaped from Olven's mouth as he walked outside and plopped himself onto the ground, laying on his back and staring at the stars. They were little twinkling things that dotted the sky like freckles, some brighter, some dimmer, some even made shapes if he looked hard enough. I can count today as a fantastic day! I explored a bit to see so much new stuff, am going to finally find someone to train with, and might even get to eat new stuff too! Hehe, I know my stomach wouldn't complain about that last bit. And even after all that I'm still energetic! Hahaha my mind says sleep but my body says to go and wreck shit! Plus, I'm hungry! I'll restart the fire and hunt something to eat......okay maybe somethings heh. A flock of this bird things flew overhead once again so Olven flew up by them and used his speed to chase one down and snap it's neck, killing it quickly and efficiently. Then he flew back down, rekindled the fire and ripped the thing's tail off. Lastly he grabbed some rocks and made a stove like structure over the fire, setting the meat on top to cook. Not long after, it's odd aroma wafted through the air and made Olven's mouth drool. Taking the meat off was simple and the first bite proved it to be juicy and have a vegetation taste to it, yet there was no mistaking it for meat. Olven scarfed the whole thing down quickly and seemed satisfied with it, and with the slight rustling of leaves gave him an idea with what to do with the rest of it.

"Hey! If someone is in those bushes there is still plenty here! I don't mind sharing haha. And if I'm just talking to some animal well, I'll still share hehe." No reply huh? Well let's see if it was just my imagination. Olven reaches out consciously for any ki that might reveal his enemy or friend. Sure enough, there it is! Seems a bit big for just some animal too. "You know I can sense you right? And if you won't come to me I'll come to you." The bushes rustle once more and a saiyan steps out clad in armor and with short hair, hard eyes and a stern look on his face.

"Who are you and what are you doing here," the stranger pointedly questions Olven.

"Hey! No need for the harsh tone. I'm just a fellow saiyan who wanted to find others. Gets boring with just yourself ya know? And only so much you can do punching and blasting at rocks eh?"

"So you came here to harass people?"

"No! I think you have me mistaken! I'm looking for a training partner! Come, sit and I can answer more questions. And as for my name, Olven." The boy seems to hesitate, then reluctantly walks over and takes a spot near Olven but not close.

"So.....what's up with the camp and the story behind the being all lonely?"

"Well the camp is my home! Hahaha, I know it isn't conventional but it's still mine! And the being all lonely is merely because I have been training there my whole life. I am not joking either, hence why I haven't bothered until now to seek company. I was too busy trying to gain power and hadn't considered a partner to help with that. But now that I have, I wouldn't suppose you would be willing to train with me?"

"Well.....I don't see why not!? But I'll be keeping an eye on you."

"Yes! No more smashing rocks! Now I get to smash some real flesh and bones! And uhm, I never got your name heh."

"....Cabba.....and you seem......a little excited?"

"Yeah! Hehehe, I've never fought a living being! This will be so fun! Meet me here tomorrow morning eh?"

".....sure....I guess? Mind if I bring some....friends of mine?"

"The more the merrier! Hehehehehe."

"Well....okay then. See you tomorrow Olven?"

"Yep! That is if you come back at all hahaha!"

"I..promise?"

"Well that seems like a unstable promise but whatever! See ya!"

"See ya." And with that Cabba flies away to wherever he lives (Olven didn't notice remember and I'll bring something about this up at the end heh.) while Olven crawls back inside his tent and lays his head down, closes his eyes and falls asleep to the sound of silence.


So as I said, I'm brining up that little piece right there. It's important because I'm wanting to know what would you guys prefer? First person from Olven or the current first person? And now about our boy Olven here. I know this isn't a x reader or anything but I'd like to know what transformations you'd like him to have (I'll accept all except ssj4 and the ape forms as universe 6 saiyans can't transform into apes [as far as I know, if they can please correct me]) and idc, he could be like the good version of Goku black for all I care. I just want to know what you guys think he should be able to transform into. And ya know, any kind of relationships with characters? (Now for this I'll be reluctant to do someone like Goku, Vegeta, Gohan, or anyone already in a relationship as coming up with a legitimate reason for them being separated from their spouse would be hard. And yes, I know this is shorter than what I used to write but hey....it has been awhile! And yeah I'm back! Probably should've started with that. And my future plans for my other story are none for now heh. I'll be focusing on this now like the lazy bum I am. And plus I feel like I've fucked that story so it's kind of......not useable now. Anyways hope this was good and if there was anything you guys wanted to say that I didn't ask go ahead Jeesus -my name- you're all over the place..... Have a good mornin, arvo or whatever time it is of you reading this! Stop being nervous, stupid fleshy body!

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