Okay.... I need real feed back. Is this story boring? Cuz if it is I can go back and rewrite it, as much as that will be a pain.
I don't want it to be boring so please just be truthful. Like flames are aloud right now, truthful. It might hurt but it gives me something to work on. I do have to ask that you leave spelling, and grammar alone. I suck at grammar and I'm dyslexic. So I have to work around things. But yeah..... Thanks though for giving me it. And for actually reading this. I know most of the people won't.

~DS 35