Over the course of this story, I went through a massive change. Or more, my characters, writing, and plot did. (I kind of did)

I started signing off with my real name, my characters simply got more mature, I started calling 'Phase' Emma (her real name), the characters started swearing, and my chapters got longer.

The writing gets less cliche as the story goes on, I swear.

A second author joins in around chapter 8, that author being Emma, so that's why everything is suddenly better.

(Also be prepared for lots of weirdness.)

Thought I'd warn you guys. :)