setting sail




It was a bright and sunny day for the people of Dawn Island went about their usual days as peacefully as ever. However a small group of people were standing over a cliff watching as a young man was getting ready to set sail. This group was made of of an unexpected assortment of people, ranging from Makino the beloved town bar keeper, Woop Slap the town mayor who glared down at the boy setting up his ship while muttering under his breath, making those that heard him roll their eyes and Makino to smile having gotten used to this a long time ago along with several other villagers wishing to see the man off.

However what made this group strange however was the fact along with the villagers there were also mountain bandits. The two most notable ones were a tall man that vaguely resembled a chicken and a small man with a turban on his head. "So  do you think the boss is going to show up?" The chicken man asked leaning in to whisper to the trapan man who shook his head. "No They already said goodbye at the hideout, I could hear her crying from outside. Just like what happened with Ace." the man finished with a smile that he soon shared with the taller man.

Standing at the edge of the cliff, ignoring all of this was a young teenager with black eyes, black hair, a scar under his left eye and a straw hat on his head. Smiling at seeing the young man finish he raised his hands to his mouth. "Bye Cinder, good luck on your adventures!" He shouted down at the teen who grinned back up at him.

This was Cinder D.Fall and today was the day he would begin his journey to become the king of the pirates. At hearing the young man on the cliff shouting down at him Cinder looked up at the cliff with a grin. "Ill see you on the seas soon enough Luffy." Cinder addressed the now named Luffy who nodded back with a grin matching Cinder's. Cinder was just about to leave when an Idea hit him causing him to grin and turn back to address Luffy. "Oh and Luffy don't worry about becoming king of the pirates I'll do that. You just worry about getting that hat back to Shanks, got it little brother." Cinder asked with Luffy nodding. "Right! you worry about being king of the pirates while I-HEY YOU TRICKED ME YOU JERK! IM GOING TO KING OF THE PIRATES!" He shouted as everyone else on the cliff laughed at the two brothers.


Cinder Just shook his head with a smile as he finally set sail. This was it, after living his whole life on Dawn island it was finally time to for Cinder D Fall to make his mark on the world.

"I can't wait to get started.


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'I'm so bored.' Cinder thought as he laid on his back on the ship while staring up at the clouds. It had been a few days since he had left Dawn island and in that time nothing of note has happened leaving Cinder with little to do. 'Not even my Haki is picking anything interesting up.' he thought. Having enough of cloud watching for the moment the young captain got up and headed into the the boats small cabin where he had his bed along with fresh water and nonperishable food. After grabbing. a couple of apples he went back outside and looked around as he ate. "Still a whole lot of nothing." He said as he finished munching on the apples cores. He was just about to lay back down when his out of the corner of his eyes he spotted a ship. Rushing to the edge of the boat grabbing a spy glass that was lying on the ground he looked in the direction the ship was going in and after a few seconds of looking Cinder was finally able to see an Island. 'Finally.' He thought was a grin as he brought the spy glass down and went to change directions. "My journey is finally starting.'


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'Or not.' Cinder thought as he finally reached the island only to find the port and town almost drowning in poverty. The buildings were falling apart, the port was unwashed, the wood was splintered and moldy. However it was the people that truly got to him, they looked as if they were just a few seconds away from collapsing. 'What a shit hole.' Cinder thought was a grimace as he continued to take in the sights before sighing and turning around. "So much for starting my journey." He muttered to himself as he began to walk away. However he only got a few feet when his Haki flared to life and he sensed 3 powerful energies slightly out of town. The weakest was slowly fading, probably starving like the rest of the town, it was with the second energy. The second energy was differently not native to any of the 4 blues as it just seemed too strong. However it was the 3rd energy that got his attention. This one absolute dwarfed the other 2 in terms of power though it didn't seem even remotely human. That begged the question what the hell was it."Guess I'll find out soon enough." Cinder thought with a grin as he begun to make his way to the 3rd source of energy which just so happens to be the place the other 2 were heading.

It didn't take long for Cinder to reach the source of the energy and when he did he couldn't help but raise an eyebrow at the shape the place was in. Because while not as bad as the rest of the town, it was still a bit run down, not to mention it was basically in the middle of nowhere with the town a few miles to the south of them. Looking up he saw a sign with the words Boar Hat written on it with another on the door saying open. Walking up to the door he was about to open the door when he heard shouting inside.

"I don't see what the big deal in all of this."

"Don't see the big deal?! You gave those poor people food poisoning! As if their lives weren't bad enough!"

"Well this is a bar, you come here for drinks, not to eat." The first voice said simply.

"Of course People order food with their drinks! Thats normal! Besides I thought you said you've practicing your cooking."

"I did... for about 5 minutes."

"That's not enough! How do you expect to bring people in when your cooking sucks?"

"Doesn't stop you from stuffing your face."

Having heard enough and Idly wondering why he couldn't sense the second energy he opened the door to see a small man arguing with a pig?

The man upon hearing the door open looked up with a smile. "Hey there, here for a drink? Im Meliodas and this hawk. What can I get you today?" He asked with a grin.

Cinder after a minute of staring collected himself with a smile. "Yes a drink would be great thank you." the teen said with Meliodas nodding and was about to move when Hawk spoke up. "Hey how do we know this guy even has any money?" the pig questioned and before Cinder could reassure them he did have the money to pay for it the blond bar owner waved it off. "We haven't had any business since we landed here. Frankly I'm just glad to have some company." The short man reassured leaving a grumbling pig and a curious Cinder wondering what he meant by 'landed here.' Soon both of them had drinks and Hawk who he learned was also the lord of scraps all had drinks in front of them. "So I gotta ask why'd you come all the way up here? most people would take one look at the town and just leave." Meliodas asked as he and Hawk were waiting for an answer.

"I came here sensing a powerful energy and wanted to see if they wanted to join my pirate crew." Cinder spoke bluntly. Normally he wouldn't have said it so directly and eased into it after all most people are rightfully wary of pirates, so it wouldn't be wise to simply advertise that he was one." However seeing the kind of man Meliodas was he knew the direct method was the best. Upon hearing this Hawk did indeed start to freak out. "Pirates, are you serious?! Why would we want to become pirates?! They are absolute monster who don't care about anyone. Not to mention they are ruthlessly hunted by the government and other pirates so they never can relax! Why would anyone want that!?" Hawk finished and for a moment Cinder was silent as he looked the pig over as if he was trying to figure something out. Eventually the pirate captain opened his mouth and Hawk thought it was going to be to try and answer his questions.


He was wrong.

"Okay I'm sorry but what the hell are you?" Cinder asked causing Hawk to sputter and Meliodas who had been silently watching the exchange to laugh. "IM A PIG YOU IDOT! WHAT ELSE WOULD I BE!? Hawk qusitoned with Cinder just shrugging. "Apologies, but like like I said, Ive got this sensing ability that allows me to sense all living things. That's how I found Meliodas, but I'm staring right at you and I can't sense a thing." He admitted his confusion to the shell shocked Hawk who did nothing but stand there frozen. Cinder was about to check on him when Meliodas stopped him. "Don't worry about him he gets like that sometimes. As for the sensing thing he gets that from his mom." The blond continued to chuckle at the frozen pig before turning back to Cinder. However Cinder could tell things were different now. The world was silent, the air was heavy and a strange pressure was coming off Meliodas which became apparent by the sharp look in his eyes.

"Now then Cinder Fall, what kind of pirate are you aiming to become?" The question was basic and innocent as it could be however Cinder could hear the judging and warning undertone in the question. Luckily Cinder has had years to think and knew exactly what kind of pirate he wanted to be. "I want to be a true pirate. The kind who's only enemies are the marines and other pirates. The kind that shares stories with the people of each new port and  the kind that can live truly free in this world." Cinder spoke with passion as he finally spoke of the kind of pirate he sought to be. As he spoke Melidoas's grin got wider and wider as eyes got brighter and brighter as the room got less and less tense.

At the end of it Melidoas hummed. "Gotta say that's pretty tempting however I do have two final questions? What's your main goal in all of this and how do you intend to do this?" Meliodas questioned with a grin, one that Cinder matched. "Why to become king of the pirates of course, as to how I'll do it well of course it'll end with finding the One Piece, but I figured taking down the Yonko, Shichibukai, admirals and anyone else who gets in the way would be a nice touch as well." He finished with a somewhat bloodthirsty grin.

Hawk could feel his heart about to burst from terror. "Are you completely insane!? You not only want want to go the grand line but also fight those monsters! Are you suicidal!? There's no way in hell we're agreeing to that! Right Meliodas!?". "Im in." "Right! Hear that we're in!"It was at this point the pig froze, his brain finally having registered what the bar owner had said as he slowly almost robotically turned to him. "Come again?" He asked slowly only a shrug from the blond. "What it sounds like it could be fun, plus he seems like a good guy." He finished before turning back to Cinder. "So who else is on the crew besides you, me and Hawk?" he asked only to see Cinder shake his head. "No one, this is only my 3rd day out to sea. You're my first crew members.' Cinder explained with Meliodas nodding in understanding. "That makes since, but does that mean you want me as vice captain?' He asked back with Cinder being the one to shrug this time. "If you want to be." Meliodas thought about it for a second before nodding. "Sure, why not."


It was at this point Hawk rejoined the conversation. "Okay hold on, let's slow things down here for a minute!" He shouted as he turned to Cinder. "You meet this guy 5 minutes ago! I get that he's strong but why the hell would you make him vice captain just based off that!?" the pig demanded brfore  rounding on Meliodas. "And You! First, why the hell were you so accepting of all this!? This guy who you once again meet 5 minutes ago is bassically asking you to throw your life away for him, why would you do that!? 2nd and more importantly why the hell are you acting like I'm going too? I don't want anything to do with this!" He finally fished screaming as silence filled the air. Finally Cinder looked back over to his new vice captain. "So is he always going to be like this, because if so I'm leaving him here." The captain warned with Meliodas just shaking his head. "Don't worry, just shove some scraps in his face, and we won't hear from him for a while." he revealed. Hawk seeing this was a lost cause did they only thing he could. With his head held high he walked behind the bar, where he proceed to bawl his eyes out as he said goodbye to his peaceful and normal life.


Ignoring the crying pig, Meliodas turned back to his new captain. "So what do you want to head out now. I just got to pack a couple of things up. and then I'll be ready. I would say we should get some provisions from the town but from what Ive seen they don't have that much." Meliodas informed with Cinder raising an eyebrow. "From what you can tell? Shouldn't you know about the town since you live here?" He could help but question as the bar owner shock his head. "Nah, we don't live here. Myself, hawk and the bar just got here a few days ago." He simply said with Cinder making a mental note to question about that later. "Right, anyway lets keep the bar open for a little longer, 2 others are heading this way, and I want to see if I can recruit them into the crew. They should be here any minute now." Cinder explained with Meliodas nodded before going back behind the bar and Cinder taking a seat at the corner, all the while both still ignored the crying pig in the corner.


It was about 5 minutes later when Cinder finally felt them make their way to the door so with a nod to Meliodas both turned to the door as it opened to see their possible new cremates, and the 2 had to admit they were an odd sight. Turns out one was carrying the other. the one that was being carried was a young man with tan skin,  green hair and he had black eyes. The interesting about him was that he was wearing a black bandana and had 3 swords that matched the 3 earrings in his left ear. The one carrying him was massive, easily 19 feet. He had long, flowing, blond hair, though much paler then Meilodas. He like the one he was carrying had a black bandana and was actually dressed like a pirate, though the smile he wore was very kind.

"Hi there, welcome to the Boar Hat. Can I get you two anything today?" He questioned with the green haired man groaning and his companion chuckling. "This one could use some food, and I'll take some booze if you don't mind." He requested as he reached into his pocket with his free hand and brought out some beli. "Coming right up." With that Meliodas headed for the back and went about preparing the swordsman's meal. It was during this time Cinder decided to strike up a conversation. "Im Cinder, Cinder D. Fall" He introducded himself as he extended his hand which was taken by the giant blond. "Edward Newgate. The now named Edward introduced himself. "May I ask why you're in a place like this?" He asked with the answer coming not from Cinder but Meliodas who was coming out with a delicious looking plate of food. "He's a pirate and he just recruited me into his crew. Actually we knew you were heading this way and were wondering if you wanted to join. "Meliodas said bluntly as he put the food in front of the downed green haired man who upon smelling it, dug into with the ferocity of a ravenous animal.

"Oh?" Edward said slowly as shadows quickly covered his eyes. "Before I answer may I ask you a simple question." he requested slowly as Cinder nodded his head. Seeing this Edward looked Cinder directly in the eye. "Was it you who did destroyed that town down there?" Edward demanded with Cinder scowling in disgust at the very idea. "Of course not a pirate should only attack marines and other pirates, with the occasional celestial dragon thrown in. Besides I just got here today, Shouldn't you know that since you actually live on this island?" Cinder snarked back.

Edward remained silent until finally speaking, a small grin working it's way back on to his face. "I see then, apologizes I just wanted to know what kind of man you were. As for living on this island I don't. I was actually living on a small island in the new world until this moring." Getting surprised looks from Meliodas and Cinder and confused looks from Hawk and the swordsman who were listing into the conversation. "Then how are you here?" Meliodas asked with crossed arms. "there's no way you could have gotten here so quickly through any normal means." he continued to ask. Edward looked around seeing all eyes on him sighed as he rubbed the back of his head. "I got caught in a sudden warp storm. He related causing everyone's eyes to widen. Warp storms were magical storms that did just that, warp things. However where they end up is anyone's guess. it could be an island a few miles over or it could be the center of the planet. it all depends on your luck.

"Honestly the reason I asked was because that town down there reminds me of my hometown. Old, broken and left to die. It's the reason I set was planning to set out to sea. So I can send money back and help it." Edward revealed causing Cinder to smirk. "You know." he began getting everyone's attention. "If you join the crew and travel with us, you'll have plenty of money to send back to your island, plus when we get to the new world we could place it under our protection, thus helping it more. Protection from the future pirate king does carry some wait with it." He went on, trying to convince the man to join the crew.


"Future pirate king, huh" Edward chuckled. "And what makes you think you'll have any more luck in claiming the throne than any other pirate?" This time it was Cinder who chuckled with a shrug. "I've got a few surprises up my sleeve." Edward continued to laugh as he shook his head. "Only a fool would accept that answer." He said as he stopped laughing but there was still a smile on his face. "But Ive been called that, and far worse. I accept your offer captain."

"Happy to have you." Cinder welcomed before turning to the man who had just finished eating. Noticing everyone's stare the man put his fork down and sighed. "I'm Roronoa Zoro, and I'm sorry but no. I've got my own dream and ambition to fulfill, I can't waste time being a pirate." the now named Zoro informed as he got up and headed for the exit. "And what is your dream exactly ?" Hawk asked, speaking up for the first time since the 2 arrived causing Zoro to freeze. just when the group thought he wasn't going to answer they heard him speak. "To become the great swordsman in the world." He said as he turned and looked them in the eyes, a fierce look in his own. "I'll hunt down the man who holds the title now and pry it from his cold, dead hands!" he declared with complete determination in his voice. Edward, Cinder and Mileodas all looked at each other before all 3 burst out laughing infuriating Zoro


"What the hell is so funny?" Zoro demanded as he took a step forward his hand resting on his white Wado Ichimonji, ready to strike any other down at a moments notice. "Calm down friend." Edward said as he raised his hand in a placating manner." We're not laughing your dream just the irony of something you said." Edward explained as Zoro's glare while not complete gone did soften some what. "And that was?" He asked with Meliodas being the one to answer. "The fact that you won't join our crew despite the fact we are going to where your target is." The vice captain revealed causing Zoro's eyes to widen in shock. "It's true, Mihawk is most likely in the new world, and that's where we plan on going. Meliodas informed causing Zoro to go stiff. "So want to rethink our proposal?" Meliodas asked with a grin. "So your saying that if I follow you my chances of meeting that man increase?" He questioned with the other 3 nodded causing him to sigh as he rubbed the back of his head. "Damn you've got me backed into a corner here." He said ask he looked at them with a savage grin. "What the hell, Im in." He declared.


Cinder grinned hearing this it might have been slow at first but finally, finally he was getting his crew put together and getting closer to his goal. During this Meliodas brought out 4 mugs of ale and a saucer for Hawk. "Well guys I think this deserves a toast." He said lifting his mug into the air. "To the start of a new adventure, To the birth of the-." Here Meliodas paused and turned to Cinder. "What are we going to call ourselves anyway captain?" He asked as the others turned to the teen the question also on their minds. Cinder seeing this straightened up "Listen up men we are the worlds enemy and its downfall!" He explained as he raised his mug into the air. "We are the Nemesis Pirates!" He proclaimed causing the others to raise their mugs into air in celebration.

The next couple of hours where spent parting as the crew got to know each other. Zoro and Edward were definitely the heaviest drinkers among the 4 as they downed 3 barrels each by the time they were done, though that may have had something to do with the fact that each scarfed down an entire plate of Meliodas food before truly tasting it, much to hawks horror. The group also swapped stories such as some of Cinder's adventures with his brothers and Zoro's time as a bounty hunter.

By the time they were ready to head out it was late afternoon though they did have a few hours of daylight left. Right now they were discussing their boat situation. Cinder had explained that while large, his boat wasn't suited to fit 5 especially one of them were Edward's size. "I wouldn't worry about too much. We could just buy one on the next island, or even just steal one." Zoro said with a shrug. "I mean we are pirates now right?" causing the others to nod.

They were just about to leave when Meliodas suddenly stopped. "Oh yeah. I almost forgot." Turning back to his pub he suddenly shouted. "Hey Hawk's Mom, Im heading out and probably won't be back, so you can go ahead and leave if you want." He shouted and a second later the ground started shaking violently as before the disbelieving eyes of Cinder, Edward and Zoro a giant green pig rose us from the ground carrying the bar on its back.

'An earth pig! No wonder I couldn't sense her or hawk.' Cinder thought an awe as he stared up at the beast with Zoro and Edward. While training with his Haki Cinder had discovered there were creatures out their his observation Haki couldn't pick up, and earth pigs were on of them. Hawk's mom meanwhile had heard what the blond vice captain had said and with surprising speed and grace begun to walk away from them and the town. "Well dear friends, it looks like this is it." Hawk said getting their attention. "I know we may not have know each other long but I can honestly say I hope you all accomplish your goals. Sadly I will not be able to see it as I have decided to go with my dear mother.  Should fate decided to reunite us one day I will gladly greet you. Until then."  He finished as he turned and started to walk towards his mother.

Only to realize she wasn't there.

Hawk stood there frozen as he stated to sweat as realization begun to hit him even as he tired to deny it. "Yeah she felt when you were giving your speech." Meliodas said uncaringly finally setting Hawk off.

"WHY MOMMA WHY!!? WHY WOULD YOU ABANDON YOUR PRECIOUS BABY BOY!!?"

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The group had just made it back to the town while ignoring the grumblings of Hawk. Suddenly screams of panic filled the air as cries of "He's back!" and "What does he want this time?" rang through the air as the crowd suddenly headed towards the port with the crew right behind them. Finally they had arrived and where surprised to find that it wasn't a pirate ship that had them freaked out but a marine ship.

"Well, looks like you cretins finally learned how to follow simple orders. I guess miracles can happened." A self-important voice rang out as marine who looked to be high ranking walked into sight two riflemen at his side.

Suddenly he seemed to notice something out of the corner of his eye causing him to frown In disgust. "What the hell is that?" he asked as he pointed and everyone followed until they came across the sight of Cinder's boat. However before anyone could say anything he sighed. "No matter." he said as he snapped his fingers and a second later one of the ships cannons were fire and instantly destroyed it causing Cinder to scowl, it may not have been much but it was still his ship damn it. "So with that out of the way, let's get down to business shall we?" He asked 30 men appeared on the deck all looking battered and bruised. "As you can see my men have suffered multiple injuries due to a recent battle, and as bad as they look these are the lucky ones." he chuckled before continuing. "Anyway we'll be taking all the food, medical supplies and anything else that can be helpful to us." He informed as the town's people gained looks of horror.

"Wow, you really are a piece of shit." a voice said behind the marines causing them to jump and turn around to see Cinder standing on the deck of the ship looking around. The high ranking marine's surprise soon turned to outrage at the sheer gall of this little shit. "Who the hell are you and what the hell are you doing on my ship?" he demanded with Cinder just sparring him a bored glance. "You don't need to know who I am, as for what Im doing, well Im taking a look around my new ship of course." He finished with a bright smile further enraging the marine.

"Your ship?! This ship belongs to me, Commander Governor! and if you think I'll hand it over for no good reason, then you're crazy!" Governor screamed his subordinates all got into fighting positions. "No good reason?" He repeated as he pointed towards the wreckage of his old ship. "See that, that was my ship you just destroyed. So I think taking this ship is more than justified." He explained before looking behind him. "Isn't that right boys? He asked as Meliodas, Zoro and Edward all jumped on the ship and stood behind their captaIn, ready to fight. "sounds good to me." Zoro said as he took out his katana with one in each hand and one in his mouth.

"At least we've got a good ship out of this, even though we might have to change the color scheme>" Edward said as calm as ever. Governor had reached his breaking point and drew his pistol. "Die, you trash!" He screamed as he fired 5 shots straight at Cinder much to the horror the still watching town's people. However, everyone from the towns people to the marines and even the new Nemesis Pirates were shocked when the bullets passed right through him though instead of blood Fire,Ice,Snow,Lighting,Wind and light stood in their place before slowly turning. back into Cinder.

"C-Captain, how did-" Edward attempted to get out. Even after grown up in the New World, He'd had never seen anything like this. Cinder merely smiled. "I'll explain later guys, for now let's focus on getting our new ship." He said getting his crew's mind back at the matter of hand causing them to nod and Governor to laugh. "Are you fools really that stupid, this will be nothing but a slaughter." He promised and it turns out he was right, it was nothing short of a slaughter.

Just not the kind Governor was expecting.

The marines tried as they might could not stop the crew as Zoro, Edward and Meliodas all rushed in to take them out while Cinder stayed behind, interested to see what his crew members could do. Zoro wasted little time and quickly sliced his portion of marines to pieces their physical abilities nothing compared to the former pirate hunter as he sliced them to ribbons. Meliodas and Edward were casually just striking their enemies down with punches and kicks, both seeing no reason to get fancy with it.

Governor could only stare in horror as his men were killed in a matter of minutes, their blood spilling on to the deck. Cinder having seen this whistled. "Now that was amazing. Great job guys". He praised as he bent down and picked up a discarded rifle before making his way over to the terrified commander who had just opened his mouth-.

CRUNCH

However before he could get a word out a fist slammed into the marines skull, caving it in and killing the marine instantly. The pirates frowned and the civilians having gone pale during the earlier slaughter were on the verge of mental breakdowns. "Ha, about time I got to land a blow on you., and now for the rest of them." only to frown at seeing the rest of the marines dead. This however gave the pirates the chance to see who this new comer was.

"So?" the newcomer asked with a raised eyebrow. "Who the hell are you guys?"

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What came next was a bit of a shock to the pirates as after confirming that the marines were dead the town's people burst into cheers and cries of thank you's, surprising the pirates though given how Governor was taking earlier it's not that surprising. Turns out that the town was being extorted for years to the point of poverty with no way of contacting any other marine unit. As this was being explained the towns people were unloading food, money and supplies off the ship, though they did leave enough of everything for the crew until they reached the next island.

They also learned the new comer was a man named Garou, a martial artiest who wants to get strong enough to defeat his old master. He explained he was drinking in a bar after a long day of training when Governor walked in and started causing trouble. He was 'convincing' a waitress to come back to his ship when a chair slammed into him. Turns out Garou doesn't like it won't annoyances interrupt his meal. turns out Governor didn't take to kindly to this and ordered his men to arrest Garou which they did, after losing 15 of them to the man in question. After that Garou asked about them and upon learning of who they were, what they planned on doing and where they planned to go he demanded to join the crew. When questioned why his response was simple. "If I want to get stronger I need to go to where the strong live."

And that's how Garou joined the crew.

From that point on it was a non point party with the town celebrating though the town elder did notice that Cinder snuck away for a bit and when he questioned the young pirate. all he was told was that help and relief was on the way. Unknown to everyone however a cloaked figure was watching from the shadows having been observing everything today. "Cinder D. Fall, how very interested." The figure spoke in a female tone before disappearing.

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Despite partying well into the night, the town was up bright and early the next day to see their saviors off with a few of them having cleaned the blood of the ship the previous night. So with tears in their eyes the town bid their saviors farewell, saying that they would be welcomed there anytime.

"Well that was interesting." Garou spoke finally as the little island was now no more then a speck in the distance. Before walking over to his new crew members. "But I get the feeling that whatever this is will be even more so." he finished and having been filled in what happened was waiting for an explanation like the rest of the crew.

Cinder seeing his crew waiting sighed. "Thank you for being patient. I know you've been wondering what happened yesterday. Well that's kind of a long story." He informed as be looked at his crew and saw he had their rapt attention. "And it all starts with a man named Rocks D. Xebec."

To be continued.

Wow, first chapter of the rewrite and already a lot to talk about. Okay let me say this I am making a lot of changes to the story as you can already tell, however considering how the main character does have all the devil fruits I need his enemies to have other means of fighting him. So once we get to the grand line expect some big character replacements even if it is the same situation.

And now for the crew Ill tell you I plan for it to be insanely powerful with examples being. with the exception of rocks it will include the entire rocks pirates with some them obviously younger then in cannon, as well as the supernovas with the exception of Luffy.

That does raise an Issue I plan to make Big Mom 28-30 in this however this will mean SHE HAS NO CHILDREN. I know in cannon she had Perospero when she was 18 but that would be he would be only 12 at most in this story so yeah spoiler alert Strussen will have died when she 15. My question later when I start include the Yonko's crew do you to include big mom's children and just not have them be her children or no.

Also There will be big changes to the timeline so basically anyone that wasn't part of rogers crew who Im keeping cannon can be replaced for someone else.

If anyone has any request for crew members not just from one piece but anything feel free to make a request. I make no promises but it will be a Yonko sized crew eventually.

till next time.

bye.

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