Hey guys... I'm rewriting this.

When I originally made this I had a completely different idea of where this was going compared to now, it would be utterly and absolutely inconsistent.

A few notes on the new version (It'll most likely be posted once my vacation is over, or if I have some free time):

-Emily will be replaced by a different character, I haven't decided who as of now.

-the hermits MAY be completely eliminated from the story, they don't add much, they only turn this into a fanfiction, which is unnecessary.

-Your character will be a defined person, it'll be voted in the first few chapters (i.e: female or male, name, height...)

-The story will be slightly different, but there'll still be the whole part of passing through rooms.

-I'll try to think through the story a bit more.

-the pink mushrooms will most likely be an important feature.

-your coat will wear a trenchcoat (I love trenchcoats--)

-i'll make it either have the nature of a video game, or make it the narration of the detective who the case was passed onto.

-related to that last one, if it's the narration then that means that your character either dies or doesn't solve the case, which limits my possibilities.

-I might introduce some new helper creatures.

-I'll try to up the danger factor and make it harder, I'll have to research more ways to hide stuff.

-you'll probably still find a dragon, hc or not, I love those lil buggers :3

I'm really sorry, I'll post another chapter once the book is out.

-Xian

(P.S please tell me what you think about the notes, negative or not, my AVPD can handle it, even if it doesn't, you guys won't even have to know! Don't worry)